I have a robot. His name is David. I saw him when I went to the supermarket with my mom. He made me impressed. He has big armor, a small head with two horns. His eyes are like Superman's eyes. His right hand always holds a white sword. David is my best friend. I really love him.

                                                                     My robot

I have a robot. His name is David. I saw him when i gone to the supermarket with my mom. He made me impressed. He has a big armor. A small head with two horns. His eyes are like Superman's eyes. His right hand always hold a white sword. David is my best friend. I really love him.

sai ở chỗ là;

hold -> holds vì right hand là danh từ số ít

tôi nghĩ ở chỗ này:

He has a big armor. A small head with two horns.

-> He has a big armor and a small head with two horns.

hay hơn

Hearded??

hearded = heard

I heard my friends said at university in America, they can take some subject they want, they have just needed to sign the subject they like. I don't know if I can take the subjects I want in high school?

Fruits are good for you but some fruits are => bỏ have poison and we can't eat them. Usually, people eat delicious and good for healthy. Everyone have thier => their favorite fruit, SO => And my favorite fruit is papaya. Papaya has green peel and orange core. It's very sweet when it's ripe. It has a good smell. My mother always makes suop by papaya => makes papaya soup because it's good for my skin, help me => anh it helps me lose weight,... I very love papaya => love papaya very much because it gives me health. And which fruit do you like?

Fruits are good for you but some fruits are poisonous and we can't eat them. Usually, people eat delicious and healthy. Everyone has their favorite fruit. So my favorite fruit is papaya. Papaya has green skin and orange core. It's very sweet when ripe. It has a good smell. My mother always makes papaya soup​ because it's good for my skin, helps me lose weight,... I love papaya very much because it gives me health. And you, which fruit do you like?

My favorite fruit

Fruits are good for you but some fruits have poison and we can't eat them. Usually, people eat delicious and good for healthy. Everyone have their favorite fruit. and my favorite fruit is papaya. Papaya has green peel and orange core. It's very sweet when it's ripe. It has a good smell. My mother always makes papaya  soud because it's good for my skin, help me lose weight,... I very love papaya because it gives me health. And which fruit do you like?

  Harm of cigarette

Usually, adults and old persons and even students                               (are smoking)           ->smoke . I think they use cigarette because they don't know it's harm, they think it's very cool or it's relaxed them,... But it's very harmful for (your health->them). It's will made your lung bad if you used->are using cigarette for a long time. Moreover, You will get addiction. If you are in addiction, you will be(bỏ be) made(make) your family and society become bad. So we need to don't use cigarette.(Câu này sai, sửa lại cho đúng nha)

Mỗi câu có 1 lỗi sai tìm nó và sửa nó lại cho đúng và giải thích tại sao lại làm như vậy :

1. The festival this year is as well=>good as it was last year.

2. My hometown changed a lot.

3. I am sure this isnintresting television programme.

4. His mother is as busy ad=>as a bat.

5. The festival takes place for three or four days in the opening air.

6. The paintings are made on=>of traditional paper by beautiful.

7. I am looking forward to see=>seeing you there.

8. How much=>many plays has she written so far ?

9. We have asked people donating=>to donate books and clothes to the children.

10. You have to book at=>in advance.

11. I want to rise funds for=>of street children.

12. I want to share my pleasure to other people.

13. Have you made volunteer work ?

14. I think I can do=>make a difference in my community.

Bài của bạn rất hay, và đây là câu trả lời của mk cho câu hỏi " Which zodiac sign are you" của bạn:

Libra, is one of the 12 zodiac signs corresponding to the constellation Libra, including those born between (September 22 - October 23), usually represented by the shape of a scale. Libra is positive, reliable, optimistic, tough, and extroverted. I really love Libra beacause I'm Libra. Which zodiac sign are you?

mình cung xử nữ 

Libra, is one of the 12 zodiac signs corresponding to the constellation Libra, including those born between (September 22 - October 23), usually represented by the shape of a scale. Libra is positive, reliable, optimistic, tough, and extroverted. I really love Libra because I'm Libra. Which zodiac sign are you?

Dịch và Chia dạng đúng các động từ sau: in my last holiday, I went to Hawaii. When I (go)..went .. to the beach for the first time, something wonderful happened. I ( swim) ...swam... in the sea while my mother was sleeping in the sun. My brother was building a castle and my father(drink)...drank.. some water. Suddenly I (see)...have seen ... a boy on te beach. His eyes were blue like the water in the sea and his hair(be)...was.. beautiful black. He was very tall and thin and his face was brown. My heart( beat) .beat... fast . I (ask)..asked. him for his name with a shy voice. He(tell).told... mẹ that his name was john. He (stay)..will stay ... with me the whole afternoon. In the evening, we met again. We ate pizza in a restaurant . The following days we( have)...had. a lot of fun together. At the end of my holidays when I left Hawaii I said good-bye to john. We had tears in our eyes. He wrote to me a letter very soon and I answered him.

Không biết có đứng không nữa ?

Mình chỉ nghĩ vậy thôi.

Chắc sai nhìu đó !

Bạn tự sửa lại nha !

Dịch và Chia dạng đúng các động từ sau: in my last holiday, I went to Hawaii. When I (go)...WENT. to the beach for the first time, something wonderful happened. I ( swim) ...,.WAS SWIMMING.. in the sea while my mother was sleeping in the sun. My brother was building a castle and my father(drink)...WAS DRINKING.. some water. Suddenly I (see)...SAW... a boy on te beach. His eyes were blue like the water in the sea and his hair(be)....WAS. beautiful black. He was very tall and thin and his face was brown. My heart( beat) .BEAT... fast . I (ask).ASKED.. him for his name with a shy voice. He(tell)...TOLD. mẹ that his name was john. He (stay)..STAYED.. with me the whole afternoon. In the evening, we met again. We ate pizza in a restaurant . The following days we( have)..HAD.. a lot of fun together. At the end of my holidays when I left Hawaii I said good-bye to john. We had tears in our eyes. He wrote to me a letter very soon and I answered him.

ko hiểu j luôn

mình thấy cái chỗ câu 1 và câu 2 hình như sai chỗ thêm ing ấy! câu 1 là thì hiện tại đơn còn câu 2 là thì tương lai gần mà! (ko chắc đâu nha có thể sai thông cảm!)

đúng rồi đấy bạn

câu 2 có thể dùng HTTD để nói 1 dự định ở tương lai