Ai giúp mình xem bài làm này có lỗi hay lỗi ngữ pháp gì không ạ/

Tiếng Anh:

An important rule in my family is that every member of the family must keep the house clean. I sweep the house and mop the floor every day. My mother goes to the market and cooks. My father watered the plants.

The second rule, all family members must go to bed before 10 pm. My parents believe that sleeping on time will help the body stay healthy and have more energy for the new day.

The third principle, must use electrical equipment sensibly. This is not a rule for one person alone, but for everyone. 

Dịch: 

Một quy tắc quan trọng trong gia đình tôi là mọi thành viên trong gia đình phải giữ cho căn nhà sạch sẽ. Tôi quét nhà và lau sàn mỗi ngày. Mẹ tôi đi chợ và nấu ăn. Bố tôi thì tưới cây.

Nguyên tắc thứ hai, tất cả thành viên trong gia đình phải đi ngủ trước 10 giờ tối. Bố mẹ tôi cho rằng ngủ đúng giờ sẽ giúp cơ thể khỏe mạnh và có nhiều năng lượng hơn cho ngày mới.

Nguyên tắc thứ ba, phải sử dụng các thiết bị điện một cách hợp lý. Đây không phải là nguyên tắc của riêng ai mà là của tất cả mọi người.

Hãy dịch đoạn văn ngắn bằng tiếng anh sang tiếng việt nhé:

Hello teacher and every body. My name is Linh. Iam eleven years old. Iam student at Nguyen Quang Sang secondary school. I class 6a7. Today, I the like to tell you some good things and some bag things about living in my neighbourhood . I live My Luong town. There are supermarket, restaurant, raiway station, park,.... and many people friendly and kind. I don't like polluted air and many people crowded and busy. I love my neighbourhood. THANKS FOR LISTENING.

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 các bạn kiểm tra đoạn văn đưới đây dùm mk có sai ngữ pháp chỗ nào ko : hello my name is Thao. today i will tell you my thoughts about tv. I think watching TV is an activity that helps us relax after many hours of hard work. On TV there are many different programs like animation, comedy, music, ... above are the advantages of watching tv but it also has defects. when we eat and watch TV and don't talk to people around and that will make your family's feelings cracking

TOPIC: Talking about the volunteer activities you want to do *Good morning, my teacher. My full name is Keo Nguyen Bao Chau. I’m in class 7a2. Today, I would like to talk about the volunteer activities I want to do. * Volunteer activities are……(tính từ)….., so I want to do them. ( page 26-33: Volunteer activities……………………………) *First, I donate books, toys and clothes to street children. I want to do it because ……………….I think it makes children happy (2 c) *Second, I provide food and money for the poor people . ( I ask my friends to do with me in my free time) I feel happy/funny /interested when I help them *Third, I want to look after the sick children and the old people. Every Sunday. I go to the……………hospital / nursing home … I cook the meal / give food…………………….. *In conclusion,/ In short , I feel very ……………when I do volunteer activities……………….

giúp em sửa bài này xem coi nó sai chỗ nào và sửa lại chỗ sai đó , Thanks a lot for emailing! Yes, I am okay. And I like talking to you,too. I think if you know how to find your way on the map you can get to my house easily. But you are blind to the way or direction, I think the best way is to pick you up at the station. Yes, I can take care of everything. You just decide the exact time you come and let me know but remember to be on time. Well, it is good idea. You know I love cakes, wine or biscuits. I would like to try them out from where you are, so bring them in.

Ex: Write a paragraph about your neighbourhood:

Đây là bài của mình, mọi người xem có được không ạ?Nếu thấy mình sai ngữ pháp chỗ nào thì vui lòng sửa giúp mình nhé ~!!!! :

My neighborhood is in the countryside. It is Vu Duong village. It is surrounded by lots of trees and some roads. It has a lot of houses, shops, fields, trees, .... My neighborhood is very convenient, busy and beautiful. It is most beautiful when viewed from above. People in my neighborhood are very friendly; hardworking and beautiful. The food here is really delicious like: bun cha; bread; fried chicken;.... You should try them at least once if you intend to visit my neighborhood. However, there is one thing that I don't like in my neighborhood. Now, it is very noisy and polluted because there are many means of transportation, buildings,..... I love my neighborhood very much because I was born and grew up there. Thank you for listening!