When I was 10 years old, I( was ¹)moved to a new house. This house was very beautiful, and my room is beautiful, too!
When I opened the door, I could hardly believe what I saw. Had my wish come true? My room had been coloured by pink ! It is lighter and it also has a wide window from where you can see the mountains and a country landscape. It has a very big balcony with a view at the sea. There were many nice pictures hung on the wall. In one side, there is a huge bed covered by a patchwork cover, and small lamp on the bedside table. There not only a table, a desk with a computer but also a TV. My guitar and the piano were in the corner of the room and there were many beautiful colour lights on the ceiling. There was a small white rug on the wooden floor and plenty of books were on the shelves opposite to the bed.
I'm very grateful to my parrents that builded for me the best room ever that I never had before!

*: chú ý chia quá khứ như là câu đầu tiên, đã chia quá khứa là This house WAS beautiful  rồi mà đoạn sau còn ns là my room IS beautiful nữa. còn câu I was moved là ko đc vì trong câu này chỉcần chia moved thôi chứ ko có was. 

When I was 10 years old, I( was ¹)moved to a new house. This house was very beautiful, and my room is beautiful, too!
When I opened the door, I could hardly believe what I saw. Had my wish come true? My room had been coloured by pink ! It is lighter and it also has a wide window from where you can see the mountains and a country landscape. It has a very big balcony with a view at the sea. There were many nice pictures hung on the wall. In one side, there is a huge bed covered by a patchwork cover, and small lamp on the bedside table. There not only a table, a desk with a computer but also a TV. My guitar and the piano were in the corner of the room and there were many beautiful colour lights on the ceiling. There was a small white rug on the wooden floor and plenty of books were on the shelves opposite to the bed.
I'm very grateful to my parrents that builded for me the best room ever that I never had before!

*: chú ý chia quá khứ như là câu đầu tiên, đã chia quá khứa là This house WAS beautiful  rồi mà đoạn sau còn ns là my room is beautiful nữa. còn câu I was moved là ko đc vì trong câu này chỉcần chia moved thôi chứ ko có was.

Thanks bạn AM nhiều nhé! 😁

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When I was 10 years old, I was =>was(bỏ) moved to a new house. This house was very beautiful, and my room is=>was beautiful, too!
When I opened the door, I could hardly believe what I saw. Had my wish come true? The room painted pink is my room! It is lighter and it also has a wide window from where you can see the mountains and a country landscape. It has=>had a very big balcony with a view at the sea. There are=>were many nice pictures hunging from the wall. In one side, there is=>was a huge bed covered by a patchwork cover, and small lamp on the bedside table. There not only a table, a desk with a computer but alsao=>also a TV. My guitar and the piano are in the corner of the room and there are many colour lights in the ceiling. There is a small white rug on the wooden floor and plenty of books are on the shelves opposite to the bed.
Thanked to my parents that building for me a nice room!

Còn thiếu sót nhiều mong BN bỏ qua

whom -> who

Last year, while I was at a concert, something amazing happend. But it was really hot in there So I went to get some water. I tried to find a shop or something but I got lost. I saw someone in front of me! as soon as I saw her , i knew it was Melanie G. Later, when I showed the cap to my friends, they just laughed.

Complete the text with the words in the box.

So, suddenly, when, as soon as, but, while

Last year,..while.. I was at a concert, something amazing happend. But it was really hot in there ..So.. I went to get some water. I tried to find a shop or something ..but.. I got lost. I saw someone in front of me! ..as soon as.. I saw her , i knew it was Melanie G. Later, ..when.. I showed the cap to my friends, they just laughed.

Chúc bạn học tốt!

Tìm lỗi sai và sửa lỗi

1. I think that The drivers should clearing up all the trash on the ground before leaving . => clear

2. I had my bike to repair by my father . => repaired

3. This task could do immediately . => be done 

4. A new shop was opening on Main Street at 9 a.m. last Monday .=> being opened

1.clearing-> clear

2.to repair -> repaired

3. do-> be done

4. opening-> being opened

1. I think that The drivers should clearing up all the trash on the ground before leaving . => clear

2. I had my bike to repair by my father . => repaired

3. This task could do immediately . => be done 

4. A new shop was opening on Main Street at 9 a.m. last Monday .=> being opened

tìm lỗi sai và sửa lại cho đúng:

1. the company has been=> was opened in 1999

2. Mary asked me how did I go=> I went to school every day

3.The amount of the money they took from the bank were=> was very little

4.I am going to have my car to repair=> repaired in the garage

5.He asked me if I had got=> been there last week

6.It is said that there will be a shortage for=> of electricity in the season

7.Would you please stop to make=> making so much noise?

8.My house broke=> was broken into last night, but nothing was strolen

9.The room was very quite=> quiet when they got there. The children had gone bed=> to bed :v

điền từ còn thiếu vào đoan văn sau:

New Home -New school

By Megan Williams,aged 13

last year my Dad got a new job. It was in a town ....where.... was 100 kms from our home . Mum and Dad decided we would have to move , ....because... it was a long way for Dad to tour ever day.

....when...they told me about their plan i was upset because I loved my home and school . I was worried that i would ...miss....all my friends and teachers a lot .
Anyway six month .....after.... that , my family moved to the town of Hex ford . The house was ....much...bigger than our old me , and from my bedroom window I ...must.... see the sea
i wasn't looking forward ...to.... the first day at my new school . i felt really angry about meeting .lots... of new people . but when i got there everyone was great ! My class teacher was nice and I ...found....friends with two girls in my class . Moving home isn't that bad after all !