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I think that online learning has so many disadvantages. To begin with, online learning is more difficult to concentrate on the lesson than classroom classroom learning as there are so many distraction from other things like phones or family member. Additionally, there will be no real interaction between the teacher and the students. And the teachers can easily get depressed because they are the only one who is speaking and hardly receive any responses from the students. Moreover, spending too much time looking at the screen during online classes can be harmful to your eyes. This can lead to short-sightedness, and you have to wear glasses. Finally, the cost of money for preparing equipment for online classes are great.

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Mình nghĩ rằng học trực tuyến có quá nhiều nhược điểm. Đầu tiên là, học online khó tập trung hơn học ở lớp vì có rất nhiều thứ gây xao nhãng như điện thoại hay các thành viên trong gia đình. Thêm vào đó thì sẽ không có tương tác thực giữa giáo viên và học sinh. Và giáo viên có thể dễ trầm uất vì chỉ có họ là người nói và hiếm khi nhận được sự phản hồi của học sinh. Hơn nữa, nhìn vào màn hình quá lâu trong lúc học trực tuyến có thể gây ra cận thị và bạn phải đeo kính. Cuối cùng là, chi phí thiết bị để chuẩn bị cho việc học trực tuyến rất lớn.

    The world is currently very developed, which means that science and technology are very developing,especially mobile phones..They have a lot of advantages. Because they are so useful. They work remotely, even when you're in another part of the world. You can communicate verbally, video, audio and exchange other media. All websites, applications and software have been created to help users socialize. Social media, texting, texting, laptops, tablets, and cell phones mean no one needs to feel isolated in the digital world. Users can be regularly updated with news about local events and social developments. We can also learn through technology. Anyone with access to the internet today can access a huge amount of the world's knowledge through the web. Alternatively, lessons and courses can now be offered virtually online. Online social media or playing computer and mobile games is becoming more and more popular. Traditional media also developed, as television and broadcasting were digitized along with radio. It has many benefits, but it also has disadvantages. Nowadays, there are a lot of young people who are interacting too much with internet devices, and can easily watch bad programs, programs like those are not good for them. However,mobile phones have a lot of advantages, are important parts of our life

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I often go shopping at the open-air market near my house. However, there are some things I don’t like about it. First, it is outdoor. On rainy or hot days, it is uncomfortable to shop. Secondly, the sellers usually ask for a higher price than the value of the goods and you have to bargain. It’s not easy if you don’t know the actual price of an item. Another disadvantage is hygiene. Fresh products like vegetables are often not very clean.

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I often go shopping at the open-air market near my house. However, there are some things I don’t like about it. First, it is outdoor. On rainy or hot days, it is uncomfortable to shop. Secondly, the sellers usually ask for a higher price than the value of the goods and you have to bargain. It’s not easy if you don’t know the actual price of an item. Another disadvantage is hygiene. Fresh products like vegetables are often not very clean.

Nowadays, the society is more and more developmental. The Internet becomes useful and popular with everyone. But as we know, everything has two-side: advantages and disadvantages.
We can not deny that Internet has many advantages. It helps us to get more information faster. In addition, we can relax by Internet after a hard-working day such as: listening to online music, watching movies, playing games...Toward the students and even people who have job, they can study in the Internet. It's really convenient for us to do everything easier.
Beside the benefit of the Internet, there are some restrictions. For example: These days, in the world, there are many situations that the students use Internet too much and distracted in learning. Moreover, using Internet for a long time might causes harmfulness for your health. And sometimes, we could get virus while using the Internet. It's very dangerous.
However, Internet is really useful and necessary for our life.

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Nowadays, large cities are becoming more and more inhabited. The majority of the population prefer living in a big town mainly because of the great advantages it has compared to living in the countryside. However, what are the benefits of this situation, and what are the drawbacks? In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of living in a large city and try to draw some conclusions.

Let’s start looking at the advantages. One of the main positives of a big town is the large amount of shops available in every corner of the city. What I mean by this is that whenever you live, there are some useful stores supermarkets, banks, tobacconists and clothing stores where you can easily buy everything you need without going to the city center. Secondly, living in a big town is a big challenge for evening parties. In London, for example, there are so many things to do in the evenings going to the cinema, to the pub or to the park during the summer period.

Turning to the other side of the argument, traffic could be one of the major disadvantages of living in a big city. Many people take the car everyday and it has also been proved that the majority of the families have at least two cars. This means that you have to deal with rush-hour traffic on your way to work and on your way back. In addition, in a big town there is consequently a lot of smog and this can really affect people’s health.

To sum up, living in a big city has great advantages but also some significant negatives. You have to weigh up to the pros of enjoying evenings’ nights outside and the availability of many shops and the cons of cope with smog and traffic issues. Personally, I believe that the benefits of enjoying the city-life and the comfort of having shops at every corner, eventually overweigh the negatives.