Các câu dưới đây đúng hay sai? Nếu sai hãy sửa lại cho đúng

1. This mobile application is installed for taking photos and edit them.

2. When we were reading an e-book, we got an e-mail from our aunt.

3. Andrea and Alice are married for fifteen years now.

4. I have known Trung when I was a high school student.

5. The thick snow blocked the main road, so we have to take another route now.

6. Last night, I was writing wedding invitations while my ex-boyfriend called me.

7. We visited the charity, talking to their manager and gave them the donations.

8. To recording your voice, you can download a mobile application.

9. He putted on a thick coat and went out in the snowstorm to find his dog.

10. Half of the school's students are not used to follow the new winter rules

11. Since the start of the new school year, our school has had a lot of activities to protect the environment.

12. Brian was painting the wall while he fell off and broke his ankle.

13. Old people with hearing problems rely on this device to hear better.

1. Doraemon is known as one of the best ____________ movies of all time.
2. My younger brother doesn’t like watching horror movies. He thinks they are too 
____________.
3. ____________ winter, we often visit Sapa.
4. My favorite kind of movie is ____________ because I love singing and dancing.
5. Tom ____________ Harry Potter gripping and touching.
6. I think this movie is too ____________. I can predict the ending of the movie since the 
first five minutes.
7. An ____________ is more powerful than a king.
8. Do you know ____________ to bake an apple pie?
9. Danang is ____________ for beautiful beaches and beaches.
10. King Lý Công Uẩn made Thang Long ____________ of Đại Cồ Việt.

Mình có đoạn văn này , bạn nào học giỏi tiếng anh giúp mình xem ngữ pháp và thì đã đúng chưa ạ? Và sửa như thế nào thì đúng ạ?

Hi, I'm Linh. And today, I want to share some of my hobbies and habits. Of the four seasons, autumn is my favorite season.For me, autumn is very special, because it is the time of the school year, the aspirations, dreams. I returned to school with a new excitement, determination and yearning for a school full of energy. I love autumn, do not know exactly when but it gives me a sense of strange peace. In the autumn in the North, cool winds bring the scent of new paddy fields or guava flavor in the garden. These are also the famous features of my hometown that I love the most. Later, I will probably never forget the autumns that have been associated with my youth. Above all, autumn is also a season with extremely pleasant weather. Yes, I love the cool and mild weather of autumn. It would be great if in the weather, the comfortable atmosphere of autumn could sit and watch TV with family or friends. My favorite TV shows are about movies or music on VTV and the Internet. On weekends, I often go out to do sports and watch movies with my family. In addition, I also take time for myself such as reading books, listening to music and completing some exercises. It can be said that this is the happiest time for me. Thank you for listening to my share.

Tìm lỗi sai và sửa lại sao cho đúng, giải thích giúp mik luôn nha mn(mấy từ trong ngoặc là 1 trong những từ sai nha)

Many of my students enjoy to surf the web in their free time. (many, to surf, in, free time)

Tell me what is wrong for doing this job. (tell me, is wrong, doing, this job)

Printing was invented by the Chinese. (printing, was invented, by, chinese)

The number of the books in the library have risen to over five million. (number of book, in, have risen, to)

Mn sửa giup mình ngữ pháp bài này xem chỗ nào còn sai ko nhé, mai mình kt rồi:
1. I have many hobbies, but i love listening to music the most, especially English songs. My hobbies started when i was at fourth grade. I really love this hobby because it makes me feel relaxed and i can also learn English vocabulary when listening to English songs. I spend much time on it. I can listen when i'm doing my housework or when i'm sleeping. I love Camila Cabello, Selena Gomez,... they are great singers. I think this is a good hobby and i'll never quit it.

2. There are many delicious dishes in Viet Nam and Banh Mi is the one i like the most. It's a very popular street food in Viet Nam and it very tasty. It's has a lot of taste but the one with fried egg, cucumbers and tomatos is my most favourite. To make this dish, you'll need a loaf of bread, 2 eggs, a half of a cucumber, 1 tomato, a pinch of salt and chili sauce. First, beat the eggs together with salt, then fry that mixture in a pan. Next, cut the cucumber and tomato into thin slices. Then, add the fried egg, cucumber and tomato into the bread. After that, server it with some chili sauce if you like. Finally, enjoy! This dish is really easy to make so i always make it by myself. I often have this dish for my breakfast because it contains a lots of calories. I really love this dish

V. Tìm lỗi sai trong câu và sửa lại cho đúng với thì hiện tại tiếp diễn.
1. We are listen to music in the car right now.
2. They not studying for the exam at the moment.
3. He is playing volleyball with his friends in the park.
4. Is you watching TV now.
5. The students are attend the class today.
6. Are he play video games at the moment?
7. He read a book in his room this evening.
8. She not listen to the teacher in the classroom.
9. My aunt have been buying some fruits at the flea market.
10. I did not drinking beer; it's only tea.
11. All of Andy's friends having fun at the party right now.
12. The children play football in the back yard at the moment.
13. Look! Those people are fight with each other.
14. Look! Someone is jump from the bridge.
15. My English speaking skill improving thanks to Elsa Speak.
16. My mother is busy today. She is cook dinner.
17. What kind of clothes are children wear nowadays?
18. They are try to pass the examination.

There are four members in my family, my parents, my brother and me. We all have different interests and hobbies. My father likes watching sports, my mother loves to work on her garden. My brother enjoys his gaming and I always have a book in my hands. However, we know it’s important to spend quality time with our family. Every two weekends, we rent a movie and watch it together. We always take turns choosing movies to make sure all the members of our family can enjoy. It’s not only a practical solution to have fun and be with all family members at the same time but also an affordable hobby. With everyone caught up in their activities all week, watching movies helps us bond and unwind.

1. What is the brother’s hobby?

A. reading books B. Playing video games C. Playing sports

2. What is the family’s hobby?

A. Watching movies B. Watching sports C. Going to the cinema

3. Who chooses the movie in the family?

A. The mother B. The father C. Everyone

4. What’s the benefit of the family’s hobby?

A. Helping them bond B. Having fun together C. All of the above