vì chủ ngữ Having leisure activities là số ít nha. Đây ko chia theo activities đâu bạn!

1.some people think young people should to follow the tradition of the society.

should to=>should

2.having leisure activities are truly important to the elderly.

are=>is

3.the commure house is the place where village ceremonies and festivals take place

commure=>communal

Tham khảo:

•  What types of leisure activities are popular in your country?
This is a great question for me and as an Irish, and I’ll be truly glad to reply your query. In Ireland, there are different types of leisure activities for all types and classes of people. There are a large number of rivers, lakes, hills and open fields are available across the country and accordingly, the people have set their own leisure activities. The most prominent leisure activities in Ireland are golfing, cycling, fishing, walking, rugby, horse riding etc. The activities are undertaken by all ages of people and help them to keep fit. Besides, these are the common forms of entertainment of the Irish people. The cycle ride helps the people to be physically fit and discover the country from a different perspective. When you are on the bicycle ride, you’ll be able to explore the nature and its wonders in the country. Besides, in line with adventures, the riders will be able to get familiar with numerous secondary streets, high mountains, and stunning landscapes of the country. Further, there are many golf courses available in every part of the country including North East West and South Ireland. Thereby, the sports-loving people go in all the golfing clubs to pass their leisure hours.

•  Why it is important for people to have time for leisure activities?
Ummm! Leisure, I think, is an important thing for the human beings and is one of the essential needs too. It is a must for several reasons and I think there are two important benefits are the key factors to make it important. Firstly, it provides us mental satisfaction for the participants in the activities, and secondly, it provides physical fitness to them as well. Recreational activities are essential for the human to live a better and healthy life. When people are engaged in their works only, their working qualities get down to a great extent. It happens as they are bored with the regular routine works. The routine makes the life dull and boring. As a result, people cannot concentrate on their activities. The quality of the work falls. But when they participate in the leisure activities, it appears that they are recharged. The regular routine is broken with the leisure activities which bear positive impacts on their body and mind. I think you will also have the same opinion about participation in the leisure activities with me, don’t you? Besides, people may not manage time to perform some physical exercise on their usual days and when they take part in different outdoor leisure activities, they go through a good form of physical pressures which help to reduce their week-long stress in a single day. So, for a wide range of reasons, people should have time for leisure activities.

•  Why are some activities more popular than others?
Right you are. Some activities are sometimes different or popular from the other activities. I’m afraid a few words are rarely enough to express the entire causes. To be brief, the activities mostly change or become popular for several reasons. Firstly, when the activity is accessible to everyone and costs less than the other activities of the same type, it becomes popular. Secondly, the activity should be easier and comfortable for all ages of people. Besides, the activity should also be entertaining. If the activity has no entertaining value, it won’t be able to attract the attention of common people. To take an example, I can recall the horse riding in Ireland. There are fewer people who own a horse for riding during the leisure hours as this is a costly issue. Besides, its maintenance is also a troublesome issue for many of the Irish. But if you consider bicycle riding, you’ll find it more popular than horse ride. Why? It is because of the accessibility. Riding a horse is easy but maintenance is tougher while there are no such notable maintenance issues with a bicycle. You’ll need a small barn for the horse whereas a bicycle could be kept at any corner of the house and even under the stairway.
 

1 . It's theatre and festival ,competition 

2. Because recreational activities help us relax stress after work, or after studying, helping people relax their brains.

3 . Maybe those activities are more useful

nó lại đi chơi gái r em sr chj ạ

1 are => is

2 staying => to stay

3 many => much

4 relaxed => relaxing

5 sound => sounds

6 in front => in front of

7 on => from

8 carefully => careful

9 to have => having

10 to come => coming

11 to open => opening

12 leanring => learn

13 preferred => prefer

14 to make => making

15 are => is

Choose the underlined word or phrase, A, B, C or D that needs correcting.

1. Having leisure activities ^are truly important to the elderly.

       a                                    b                           c           d

2. Collecting coins is exciting, but it can also be ^relaxed.

               a                b      c                                        d
game online, be ^carefully when making friends with strangers.

                         a                         b                         c                   d

4. Countryside is not polluted, ^because you can breathe fresh air there.

                        a                            b                            c                      d

5. I want to visit the Vietnam Museum of Ethnology to learn ^for 54 ethnic minority groups.

                  a                                           b                        c       d

V. Choose the underlined part, A, B, C or D that needs correcting.

1. Having leisure activities are truly important to the elderly.

         A                                   B                            C           D

2. Although she wanted to go to the museum, she decided staying at home.

           A                      B                                               C

3. Parents are concerned that their kids may be spending too many time on screens.

                              A                                                  B             C                      D

4. Collecting coins is exciting, but it can also be relaxed.

            A                  B       B                                          D

5. Cloud watching sound weird, but Hang adores it.

                  A               B                  C                        D

6. For some young people, enjoyment involves sitting in front a computer

           A                                                             B                C            

playing games.

           D

7. His parents are thinking of banning him on using the computer.

                                     A             B              C     D

8. When you game online, be carefully when making friends with strangers.

                         A                          B                     C                    D

1b->is

2d->to stay

3c->too much

4d->relaxing

5b->sounds

1. B -> is

2. staying -> to stay

3. C -> too much 

4. D -> relaxing

5. B -> sounds 

1) B => is

2) D => to stay

3) D => much

4) D => relaxing

5) B => sounds

6) C => in front of

7) C => from

8) B => careful

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