In my opinion, the concern that teenagers spend too much time on social media is valid. While social media can be a useful tool for communication and staying connected with friends, it can also be addictive and take up too much time that could be spent on other activities.

One solution to this problem is for parents to set limits on their children's screen time and encourage them to engage in other activities such as sports, hobbies, and spending time with family and friends. Additionally, schools could educate students about responsible social media use and the negative effects of spending too much time on it.

Another solution is for social media companies to implement features that encourage users to take breaks and limit their time on the platform. For example, Instagram recently introduced a feature that shows users how much time they spend on the app each day and allows them to set a time limit.

Overall, while social media can be a valuable tool for communication and connection, it is important for teenagers to balance their time spent on it with other activities and for parents and schools to play an active role in encouraging responsible use.

Tạm dịch:

Theo tôi, lo ngại rằng thanh thiếu niên dành quá nhiều thời gian cho mạng xã hội là có cơ sở. Mặc dù mạng xã hội có thể là một công cụ hữu ích để giao tiếp và duy trì kết nối với bạn bè, nhưng nó cũng có thể gây nghiện và chiếm quá nhiều thời gian có thể dành cho các hoạt động khác.

Một giải pháp cho vấn đề này là cha mẹ đặt ra giới hạn về thời gian sử dụng thiết bị của con cái họ và khuyến khích chúng tham gia vào các hoạt động khác như thể thao, sở thích và dành thời gian cho gia đình và bạn bè. Ngoài ra, các trường học có thể giáo dục học sinh về việc sử dụng phương tiện truyền thông xã hội có trách nhiệm và những tác động tiêu cực của việc dành quá nhiều thời gian cho nó.

Một giải pháp khác dành cho các công ty truyền thông xã hội là triển khai các tính năng khuyến khích người dùng nghỉ giải lao và giới hạn thời gian của họ trên nền tảng. Ví dụ: Instagram gần đây đã giới thiệu một tính năng cho người dùng biết họ dành bao nhiêu thời gian cho ứng dụng mỗi ngày và cho phép họ đặt giới hạn thời gian.

Nhìn chung, mặc dù mạng xã hội có thể là một công cụ có giá trị để giao tiếp và kết nối, nhưng điều quan trọng đối với thanh thiếu niên là cân bằng thời gian dành cho mạng xã hội với các hoạt động khác, đồng thời để phụ huynh và nhà trường đóng vai trò tích cực trong việc khuyến khích sử dụng có trách nhiệm.

Thế Vinh Nguyễn bn viết theo cái outline này nha.

* Introduction: Nowadays both children and adult enjoy play computer games. As for me/ I think / From my point of view, playing computer games has both pros and cons.

* Advantages :

+ Entertainment : After a hard working day or some stressful lessons, playing computer games help us relax.

+ Having more knowledge about computer.

+ There are various types of educational computer games which help them in learning some subjects.

+ Develop some different skills for them

* Disadvantages:

+ Playing computer games too much make us addicted and passive

+ It wastes of time

+ Playing computer games too much is bad for their health . There will be some diseases such as short- sighted, headache, backache,....

+ Some games contain violence or crime. Thus, the evil influence of computer games on young generation is inevitable.

* Sum up: All things are considered, everything has two sides: advantages and disadvantages. Computer games will be useful for us only if we know how to spend time on it sensibly.

Tham khảo:

Nowadays, children tend to spend more time on computer. Many of them play computer almost every day. Nobody can deny the valuable benefits of computers. However, everything has its limit. Personally, I think it is more negative than positive. \n\n\nWhen kids spend time sitting in front of the screen every day, they put their health at risk. Staring at screen every day severely damages their eyes. Besides, the fact that sitting for too long and health problems fatigue, diabetes, heart disease, musculoskeletal pain are closely linked is proved by scientists. As a result, spending so much time using computers, children nowadays are not as strong and active as their parents in the past. \n\n\nUsing computer every day prevents children from enjoying their childhood. Children who use computers so much certainly have less time playing and interact with others around them. These children have little chance of having many close friends, which makes their lives so boring. It also contributes to their shyness, selfishness, insensitivity and lack of social skills. They are just interested in their computer and spend little time trying to understand people and exploring the world around them. Thus, their emotion is poor. They are not able to experience all the wonderful feelings and beautiful things they deserve to have.\n\n\nUsing computer every day means little time left for children to learn. Focusing too much on computer has bad influence on children’s academic reputation because it takes up children’s time for revising lessons and doing homework. It is terrible as studying is important for children. In addition, children who use computer every day do not have much time to learn from other people, reality. Therefore, they lack certain skills for everyday life.\n\n\nIn conclusion, using computer everydays does children more harm than good. So instead of letting children using computer every day parents should encourage them to take part in other activities and hanging out with friend.

Computer games are very fun and interesting.But in my opinion,computer games also has many disadvantages.

Firstly,it wastes of our time.We often have to spend much time playing it in order to win games.Moreover,Playing computer games is addictive.It is not good for everybody.

Secondly,Playing computer games too much is not good for our eyes,our healthy.We can be nearsighted by computer use for a long time and are obese due to sitting a long time.

Thirdly,playing games too much can make academic achievement drop

Therefore,I think computer games are not good.In my opinion,students should take part in sports or energy activities,such as: basketball,volleyball,football,badminton,...They are very fun and energetic.Moreover,they can help us lose weight and increase height.Playing games are so fun but should not be too much and should be reasonable

Making a mistake is a part of our life. So, if we don’t make mistakes, we’d never learn new things. The important thing is that everyone makes mistakes. But some people handle it very wisely and learn something useful from it, on the other hand, some people get angry and spoil everything, so it depends upon a person how he or she manages it.
So, according to my perception, mistakes are good but to some extent. Here I would like to talk about an error which I made.
Last year one of my friends arrange a party at Diwali festival for all my friends. I felt thrilled and excited because due to the busy schedule, my friends and I did not have time to meet each other, so it was the best time for all of us. My friend arranged a party at home with the help of his family, and he also requested all of us to reached on time for assistance. My house is located about the distance of one hour, so I arrived at his home first, he hands over the kitchen duty to me. My work was to check the food and complete the requirements of chefs. One of the chefs requested me to take care of the dessert, which he was preparing for fifteen minutes because he has to go out of the house for urgent work. I said yes and took over his seat for a few minutes but unfortunately, I forget about the dish because of playing the game on the phone, and the whole dessert burnt.

I got tensed what I did and now how I manage it because my all friends arrived at the home and the party was going to start. The chef came back after few minutes I apologized from him. I felt despondent because I spoil the whole dish. He was a lovely person, in spite to get angry he handled the situation very wisely and prepared another sweet meal I also helped him by arranging the ingredients from the market. So that was the time when I made a mistake.

We can learn many new things from our mistakes. Firstly, after making mistakes, we realize that not to repeat the same thing. Errors put pressure on a person’s mind, and he/she thinks more about new and better ways through which he could complete his work.

tham khảo nhé:

Nowadays, there are a lot of students who work while studying. Although this tendency may lead to negative results, the number of young people who sacrifice education for work is growing. I believe that this problem has certain causes and can be solved by taking special measures.

It is apparent that most of the students who work have many financial expenses to meet. One common cause is high cost of education. As many colleges and universities set high tuition fees, some families cannot fully afford the higher education for their children. Consequently, these students have to work to pay university and college fees. The other cause is living expenses. Many students study away from hometown, and have to pay for accommodation, food, entertainment etc. As it is often hard to cover these expenses, students are forced to earn money to afford their living. I think that the problem of students working during their studies results in lower quality of education and has no benefits at all. Thus, it should be solved on the governmental level.

I can suggest two possible solutions to this problem. Firstly, the government could make higher education free. For instance, this result can be achieved by financing educational establishments from the country’s budget. Not only will it make universities and colleges accessible for everyone, but it will also reduce the number of working students. The second solution is promoting unpaid e-learning. Such form of distance education doesn’t require a lot of resources to be maintained. What’s more, students don’t have to leave their homes and can plan their schedules the way they prefer.

In conclusion, I believe that mainly lack of financial resources causes students to work, but this problem can be solved by lowering the amount of financial expenses students have to meet.

HT

Read the following passage. Find the mistake, underline the mistakes and write the correct words .

Children love to playing =>playing computer games. Some people say that many of them are addicted to games. If you become addicting => addicted , all you can think about is computer games and you cannot spend a day without playing. Of course, playing games on the computer is the great =>greatest way to spending =>spend time and have fun. But there are also bad sides to it as well.

Children love to playing=>play computer games. Some people say that many of them are addicted=>addictive to games. If u become addicting, all u can think about is computer games and u cannot spend a day without playing. Of course, playing games on the computer is a great way to spending=>to spend time and have fun. But there are also bad sides to it as well.

Children love to play computer games. Some people say that many of them are addicted to games. If you become addicting -> ( addictive ), all you can think about is computer games and you cannot spend a day without playing. Of course, playing games on the computer is the great -> ( greatest ) way to spending -> ( spend ) time and have fun. But there are also bad sides to it as well.

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