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I have a best friend ever in my life named Ashutosh. He is someone special in my life who helps me in my every difficulty. He is someone who showed me right path. He always has time for me even in his busy schedule. He is my neighbour that’s why we become together even after school time. We go together at picnic whenever we get vacation from school. We enjoy our festival holidays together and with each other’s family. We go to see Ramlila fair in the Ramlila ground together and enjoy a lot. We always take part in every extracurricular activities of the school. We love to play cricket and carom at home. He is more than a mentor for me because he always gives me right decisions whenever I become in difficulty.

He is so special for me in my life; I never do anything without him. He always become in a good mood and never compromise with wrong ways. He always does right things and motivates every one of us in the classroom to do the same. He always has smiling face even in his difficult times and never let his difficulties to come on his face. He is a good counsellor and loves to explain anything. He cares for his parents, grandparents and other family members. He obeys them always and other old people of the society. I met him first time when I was in the fifth grade and now we are in 8th standard in the same section.

He is very tall and looks different from my other classmates. Once I was very upset because of money problem. I could not buy all necessary books in the class 6. He asked me, what happened and I told him my story. He said that, for this small problem you are so worry and not happy for some days. He laughed and told me that don’t worry we can share all books in the school as well as at home. You don’t need to buy even any single book for whole year. After that he made me laugh through his jokes and stories. I never forget that moment he helped me and always become ready to help him too. He is so pracal and never mixes the personal and professional life. He helps me always whenever I get difficulties in solving my Maths homework. Our s and diss never match however we are best friends.

The name of my best friend is Hoai. She is my good friend and cares for me a lot. She behaves me well and helps always. I met her in class 1 and became best friend. She is my true friend because she understands me very well and cares for my every need. I her very much. I never had any friend her ever before. She comes to my home and I too go to her home. Our parents respects us very much and our friendship. She is so precious for me and I never want to lose her. Whenever I get absent in the classroom, she helps me in doing all the left home works and class works.

She is much similar to me in many aspects. She never argues me and describes me well anything which I get stuck. She is an open minded girl and never feels bad for my misbehave. She is very entertaining in nature and makes me laugh through her interesting jokes and talks in the spare time. She is very cute and attractive, attracts everyone through her smile and nice way of talk. She promotes me always to do better in the classroom and exams. We are good in sports and academic activities. She takes my opinions in her every tough work to do in the right way. We manage to share things in our difficult times. We always perform better in the class tests and main exams.

Note: Copy mạng về sửa lại đôi chút! Cho đỡ mất thời gian cho mấy bài nhảm này :)). Đề bài hay đó!

Bài văn của bn quá hay, kb với mik nha

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My friend is Simon. He is very helpful. When I can’t do my math homework, he helps me. He doesn’t like _____selfish_______ people. That’s why he always _____shares_______ his candy with his friends. I think he is very ______kind______. He always thinks about other people. Simon always ______makes______ me laugh. He is so _____funny_______! Lots of students in our class like him. He is very friendly, too. He has a lot of friends. One bad thing about Simon is he can be lazy. He doesn’t like doing housework or schoolwork. That’s OK because he is my best friend!

Hi today i am describing my pet.
I've got a dog. His name is Milu. He's black and white. He's very big and has sharp teeths=> teeth . He's got brown eyes and soft fur. Milu lives in a cage in front of the house. he eats special dog food and he likes meat and bone too=> ,too . i give him food and fresh water every day. He likes playing ball=> with the ball and catching stick. I grooming and clean his cage every week. He's very friendly and he doesn't like bad pepole=> people.

Hi, today i am describing (will describe) my pet.
I've got a dog. His name is Milu. He's black and white. He's very big and has a sharp teeths (->teeth). He's (->'ve) got two brown eyes and a soft fur. Milu lives in a cage in front of the house. he eats special dog food and he likes meat and bone too. i give him food and fresh water every day. He likes playing ball and catching stick. I grooming and clean his cage every week. He's very friendly and he doesn't like bad pepole.

Hi today I am describing => describe my pet .
I've got a dog . His name is Milu . He's black and white . He's very big and has sharp teeths => teeth . He's got brown eyes and soft fur . Milu lives in a cage in front of the house . He eats special dog food and he likes meat and bone too . I give him food and fresh water every day . He likes playing ball => with the ball and catching stick . I grooming and clean his cage every week . He's very friendly and he doesn't like bad pepole => people .

Lặp từ I don't know và very

Hi, my name is Lily and I am 10. I like playing the piano but I hate playing the guitar. My favorite hobby is taking photos. What do you like doing?

 Hi, my name are Lily and I am 10 year old . I like play the piano but I hate play the guitar. My favourite hobby is take photos. What do you like doing? 

Hi, my name is Lily and I am 10. I like playing the piano but I hate playing the guitar. My favorite hobby is taking photos. What do you like doing?

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Bạn nên tả thêm tính cách của bạn ấy hoặc sở thích chung của 2 người , mk chỉ biết thế thôi

mik nghĩ cái đoạn She has hobby of ... thì nên đổi thành She wants to be a police oficer in the future

Hoang s fishing.He often fishes [1].........in........ the river near my house.On Saturday afternoon, when he has [2]........no..... work,he goes down to the river [3]......with ............... a little seat and some sandwiches and fishes untill[4]........it...... is quiet dark.There are always a few other people there.They love fishing,[5]......too........and they all[6].........sit...........there quietly for hours.Somtimes they catch some fish, sometimes they[7]...........do...............not.I don't that kind[8].......of............sport because i am not very patient

Patient : Tính từ: Kiên nhẫn, nhẫn nại, bền chí

Danh từ: Bệnh nhân; người bệnh

no knhe

bn ưi đây là ý kiến riêng của mk nhé

mk thấy chỗ It is surrounded....some roads thì nên bỏ some đi

ở dòng 3 đừng ghi people are beautiful nhé,ko hợp lắm đâu

phần đầu nên thêm:My name's......(tên bạn),today I am going to tell you about my neighborhood 

hk tốt nhé