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There are many benefits of living in an extented family. First, family members can help out and look after each other. For example, when parents go out for work, children are taken care of their grandparents. They receive more support and love  throughout their lives, from a baby to adulthood. Second, you can save money when living in an extented family. Some extended family pool their resources to run their home so this help each individual to save money. Last, an extended family provide children with a development environment. Children learn faster to share, to help at home and to be more careful about their things. Moreover, they get a lot of help with their homework. 

Tham khảo:

A child in a large family has both advantages and disadvantages. To begin with, being a child in a large family has many advantages. First of all, this child never feels lonely because he has brothers and sisters who always share with him their happiness, sadness or even their deepest feelings. Also, this child will receive much help from the others. For example, if he has any problems, he will have his brothers and sisters solving them immediately. However, being a child in a big family also has disadvantages. Probably, this child can not receive much care from his parents because they are too busy with their work. Furthermore, this family may have many difficulties in their finance, which can make this child not be educated well. In conclusion, being a child in a large family has not only advantages but disadvantages as well.

Dịch:

Một đứa trẻ trong một gia đình đông con có cả những thuận lợi và khó khăn. Đầu tiên, là một đứa trẻ trong một gia đình đông con có rất nhiều lợi thế. Trước hết, đứa trẻ này không bao giờ cảm thấy cô đơn vì nó có những người anh, người chị, những người luôn chia sẻ với nó những vui buồn hay cả những nỗi niềm sâu kín nhất. Ngoài ra, đứa trẻ này sẽ nhận được nhiều sự giúp đỡ từ những người khác. Ví như anh ấy có vấn đề gì thì sẽ có các anh chị giải quyết ngay. Tuy nhiên, làm con trong gia đình đông anh em cũng có những nhược điểm. Có thể, đứa trẻ này không thể nhận được nhiều sự quan tâm từ cha mẹ vì họ quá bận rộn với công việc của mình. Hơn nữa, gia đình này có thể gặp nhiều khó khăn về tài chính, có thể khiến đứa trẻ này không được học hành đến nơi đến chốn. Tóm lại, làm con trong một gia đình đông con không chỉ có ưu điểm mà còn có cả nhược điểm.

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Nowadays, large cities are becoming more and more inhabited. The majority of the population prefer living in a big town mainly because of the great advantages it has compared to living in the countryside. However, what are the benefits of this situation, and what are the drawbacks? In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of living in a large city and try to draw some conclusions.

Let’s start looking at the advantages. One of the main positives of a big town is the large amount of shops available in every corner of the city. What I mean by this is that whenever you live, there are some useful stores supermarkets, banks, tobacconists and clothing stores where you can easily buy everything you need without going to the city center. Secondly, living in a big town is a big challenge for evening parties. In London, for example, there are so many things to do in the evenings going to the cinema, to the pub or to the park during the summer period.

Turning to the other side of the argument, traffic could be one of the major disadvantages of living in a big city. Many people take the car everyday and it has also been proved that the majority of the families have at least two cars. This means that you have to deal with rush-hour traffic on your way to work and on your way back. In addition, in a big town there is consequently a lot of smog and this can really affect people’s health.

To sum up, living in a big city has great advantages but also some significant negatives. You have to weigh up to the pros of enjoying evenings’ nights outside and the availability of many shops and the cons of cope with smog and traffic issues. Personally, I believe that the benefits of enjoying the city-life and the comfort of having shops at every corner, eventually overweigh the negatives.

Currently most of the people prefer fast foods and foods cooked in microwave oven instead of preparing and cooking homemade foods that takes longer. The trend of having food quickly has advantages and disadvantages either.

In my opinion, the only benefit of eating fast foods and foods cooked in microwave oven is to provide to save time. There are many people who live in rush and have loads to do. In this case, it’s hard to find time to cook a meal. Therefore fast foods and foods cooked in microwave oven emerge as a solution for those people. But there are many drawbacks of fast foods that outweigh this advantage. Since fast food restaruants became widespread, people do not eat balanced and nutrious. That causes serious health problems later.Especially for children, to eat balanced, healthy and nutrious is essential for proper growth. To eat so much fast foods in childhood might cause perminent growth disorders that might affect on children’s psychology as well. Rates of obesity increases inevitably just as proliferation of eating fast foods. Obesity is not just to be overweight. It results significant health problems. In some countries, obesity rates are so high that the governments of that countries must take measures instantly to prevent this increase. Also the belief that microwave ovens trigger cancer is an noteworthy one, and one that i believe in. There is the same thought about fast foods too.

All things considered, we can conclude that to eat fast foods and foods cooked microwave ovens is to play with our healths for the sake of saving a little time. When we lose our health, neither money, nor time can get it back.

THAM KHẢO

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Nowadays, the society is more and more developmental. The Internet becomes useful and popular with everyone. But as we know, everything has two-side: advantages and disadvantages.
We can not deny that Internet has many advantages. It helps us to get more information faster. In addition, we can relax by Internet after a hard-working day such as: listening to online music, watching movies, playing games...Toward the students and even people who have job, they can study in the Internet. It's really convenient for us to do everything easier.
Beside the benefit of the Internet, there are some restrictions. For example: These days, in the world, there are many situations that the students use Internet too much and distracted in learning. Moreover, using Internet for a long time might causes harmfulness for your health. And sometimes, we could get virus while using the Internet. It's very dangerous.
However, Internet is really useful and necessary for our life.

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The Internet plays an important role in our modern life. However, every coin has two sides and we can find out pros and cons of the internet by my following provement.

The Internet is a breakthrough in developing technology. It brings us wonderful advantages. First, education is more and more improved due to appearance of the internet. Students can learn and look for basic knowledge online without spending too much time in the libarary. This leads to the fact that it is very convenient for both teachers and students to broaden their perception. Second, the internet shorten the distance of people even though they are very far from each other. Skype or Yahoo are good ways for them to contact and have fun. It is true to say that distance is not a big problem in such a developing technology world. Third, the internet makes everything easier and faster. For example, we can send or receive documentary through email for a short time wwhile 10 years ago, we need to wait foe 3 or 4 days to send to a far distence.

On the other hand, the internet also has drawbacks. People especially teenager are easily involved in computer games. They take so much time to sit in front of the screen to play games. This doesn't only affect to their health but it also decrease the amount of money which their parents earn by hard works. They can't understand that money doesn't grow on tree. Moreover, the internet prevents them from taking part in outdoor activities beacause of the internet's attraction. This will slowdown socal skills and cause their inconfidence .

In a word, the inetrnet is one of the most wonderful inventions in the world. However, it also causes trobles in our life. Thus, we should use it in moderate

The world is developing day by day, and one of its biggest invention is the Internet. The first adventage of the Internet is that it changed our life style. While in the past, people had to go to the supermarket to buy what they wanted or they had to visit the park for entertainment, now we only need to stay at home with a phone connected to Internet, we can easily buy anything or can relax with video games. However, it is also a disadvantage. Some people spend too much time on it, this can do harm to our health and our eyes. Therefore, although the Internet is usefor for us but we should spend little time surfing it.

Tham khảo
I think that online learning has so many disadvantages. To begin with, online learning is more difficult to concentrate on the lesson than classroom classroom learning as there are so many distraction from other things like phones or family member. Additionally, there will be no real interaction between the teacher and the students. And the teachers can easily get depressed because they are the only one who is speaking and hardly receive any responses from the students. Moreover, spending too much time looking at the screen during online classes can be harmful to your eyes. This can lead to short-sightedness, and you have to wear glasses. Finally, the cost of money for preparing equipment for online classes are great.

Tạm dịch:

Mình nghĩ rằng học trực tuyến có quá nhiều nhược điểm. Đầu tiên là, học online khó tập trung hơn học ở lớp vì có rất nhiều thứ gây xao nhãng như điện thoại hay các thành viên trong gia đình. Thêm vào đó thì sẽ không có tương tác thực giữa giáo viên và học sinh. Và giáo viên có thể dễ trầm uất vì chỉ có họ là người nói và hiếm khi nhận được sự phản hồi của học sinh. Hơn nữa, nhìn vào màn hình quá lâu trong lúc học trực tuyến có thể gây ra cận thị và bạn phải đeo kính. Cuối cùng là, chi phí thiết bị để chuẩn bị cho việc học trực tuyến rất lớn.