I have a lot of friends but my best friend is Anh. She is one of the classmates. We have known each other since we were 6 years old. She has a short black hair and it is straight. Her lips is small but it's very beautiful. Her eyes is very affectionately. She is tall and thin. She is very kind and and generous. She spends her free time doing volunteer work at a local orphanage but she is a hard working student who always gets good grades. Unlike me, she likes sports very much. She plays badminton very good. I am very pleased to have such a kind and understanding friend like here. I wish our friendship will last forever.

   Dear Lan !

   How are you ? Do you remember me ? I'm Nhi.Today . I write a letter for you to tell about my first day at my new school. Oh , the first week so excited .

   I have many many new friends and I meet a lot of new teachers.They are very kind and nice to me.At school , I study many interesting subject such as : Maths , English , Music , Science , Geography , ect , ....

   I also have new notebooks , a new calculator , new pens and a new uniform of course. My new school starts from 1 o'clock to 5'15 p.m .In the afternoon , we study 5 lessons. Also , we can join many creative and interesting clubs in the morning . When I and my friends have free tim , we often go to the library to study . So , we have a lot of fun together. How about you ? What do you feel about your first day at school ? Do you study the same subjects as me ?

  Finally , I wish you good health and happiness.I hope you will have many many fun with your friends.

  Goodbye , see you later !

  Please write soon

  Nhi

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[Letter - To friend informing about your new house] #1 (permalink) Wed Nov 19, 2014 17:56 pm Letter - To friend informing about your new house
Hi Luschen,

I have written this letter, request you rate this on scale of 0-9.

You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In letter
1. Explain why you have moved
2. Describe the new house
3. Invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Dan,

I am writing this letter to give you great news on my newly purchased house. I hope you are doing well and sorry for not being in touch for such a long time. I was too busy in moving to new house.

As you know, our old house was not that specious and had only two bedrooms. With addition my baby girl we needed a bigger house. Neighborhood was also not that great and it was very far from Ben's office. It took long time to buy this new house, but believe me this is great one! My son is very happy to be at this new house. We have 3 specious bedrooms, a big size living and dining room and a fully equipped kitchen. My baby girl has a great space to crawl. It has a small backyard with a pet house for our doggy - Raju.

More importantly, this new house is very close to Ben's office. Now he is starting late to office and reaching back home early. Ben is also happy to give quality time for us, instead of wasting his time on long travel and traffic jams.

This Sunday, if you are available please visit our new house; I am sure you will like it.
We can have a lunch together with our families. We will also like to get your creative ideas for decorating our kid's rooms. Please find the address as below.

E8-1103, Lake Town, Near Hyde Park, Harrow.

See you soon!

Lots of love
Suzane

From: cophan369@gmail.com

To: nick@outmail.com

Hi Nick,

Thanks for your email. Your room is so crazy, isn't it? Now, I'd like to tell you about my idea for the new room of the Crazy House hotel. Its name is Elephant Room. I choose Elephant Room because I love elephants.

The reason why people call 'Elephant Room' is there's a big elephant poster on the wall. I read a lot of books about elephant. Each elephant 's weight is 3 to 4 tons, but they are afraid of ants which is much smaller than elephants.

Let me describe Elephant Room. I strongly believe that Elephant Room is huge and modern. And I must admit. I think that there will be a big brown door and a huge window. That huge window will be made from glass. There will be a big elephant poster on the wall. There will be a bed in front of the window. The bed will be between two chests of drawers. The desk will at the corner of the room. There will be a desktop on the desk. We use it to play computer games. There will be a bookshelf next to the desk.

In the future, I am going to stay in Elephant Room. Because it is huge and modern.

Love,

Dear Dan,

I am writing this letter to give you great news on my newly purchased house. I hope you are doing well and sorry for not being in touch for such a long time. I was too busy in moving to new house.

As you know, our old house was not that specious and had only two bedrooms. With addition my baby girl we needed a bigger house. Neighborhood was also not that great and it was very far from Ben's office. It took long time to buy this new house, but believe me this is great one! My son is very happy to be at this new house. We have 3 specious bedrooms, a big size living and dining room and a fully equipped kitchen. My baby girl has a great space to crawl. It has a small backyard with a pet house for our doggy - Raju.

More importantly, this new house is very close to Ben's office. Now he is starting late to office and reaching back home early. Ben is also happy to give quality time for us, instead of wasting his time on long travel and traffic jams.

This Sunday, if you are available please visit our new house; I am sure you will like it.
We can have a lunch together with our families. We will also like to get your creative ideas for decorating our kid's rooms. Please find the address as below.

E8-1103, Lake Town, Near Hyde Park, Harrow.

See you soon!

Lots of love
Suzane

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Dear Linh/Lan/Peter/….. ,

Yesterday my family moved to a new mansion near the beach which has many rooms. My favourite one is  my bedroom.

It’s on the second floor, opposite to a bathroom so it’s quite convenient to go to the restroom whenever I want. It doesn’t have many furniture: a small desk at the corner of the room, a wardrobe where I put my clothes and some of my teddy bears and a warm bed. Although it looks plain at first, but then I decorated it with some hand – made flowers so it looks amazing now.

Please send me your letter as soon as posible.

Best regards,

Huong/Mary/Jasmine/…

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