Hello everybody!
This is a topic in my IELTS class: Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.

And I have 2 styles of the body for this topic. I dont know what is better choice? Please give me your advice and correct my errors

Thank for helping me

The first one

In order to minimize the state of traffic congestion occurring throughout inner cities, one of the solutions is to adjust the transportation system. In fact, if the streets are wide and here's no road barriers on constructions staying as obstacles on streets, vehicle flows will be much factor and citizens will feel more comfortable. Furthermore, once public transport system in done logically conveniently and used effectively for inhabitant's demand of travelling, people will definitely choose public transports in stead of their own ones. By that way, the amount of vehicle on streets will reduce significantly.

Another resolution that is worth mentioning is to improve citizens' way of thinking and travelling. For instance, when the number of people understand and accept taking public transport as their main means of transport, traffic jam will not happen constantly on the roads. Nevertheless, the local authorities also need to take action to reduce the amount of transport products imported into the cities by imposing high taxes for each means of transport. Therefore, with high prices of vehicle, inhabitants might not been travelling by their own cars or motorcycles.

The second

There are a number of steps need to be taken to solve this problem. First of all, the governments should improve the quality of public transport system, which lessen impact on crowded street in rush hour by decreasing private vehicles. If people feel comfortable with public transport, they will left their own car at home.

On the other hand, the governments also have to raise the citizen's awareness to combat chao in rush hour. When people do not obey the traffic law, there is no doubt that everything is from bad to worse and traffic jam simultaneously happen. In contrast, although streets are full of vehicles, they could move slowly if the traffic rules are followed.

Note: In my city, there are a lot of road constructions to repair drainage system

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I have lived in Ha Noi for many years. Ha Noi is a big and busy city. There are lots of vehicles on the road all day. There are lots of cars, buses, taxis and trucks on high ways. Vietnamese people like moving by motorbike. Almost every family has a motorbike. The traffic jam is often at about 7 a.m and 5 p.m because it’s the time when people go to work or school and come back home. There are sometimes accidents on the road. Therefore, to reduce these problems, we need to obey traffic rules to reduce accidents as much as possible.

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Nowadays, traffic problems is one of the biggest problems that Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam, has to deal with. The first problem is traffic jams. There are too many people using the roads, especially in rush hours when everyone is in a hurry to get to work or come back home. Another problem is poor road conditions. The road is too narrow and bumpy. Moreover, many streets in Hanoi is usually flooded when it has heavy rain making it difficult to move. Traffic accidents is the biggest problem. Everyday, there are more and more accidents happening because of careless drivers: Driving after drinking alcohol, not wearing helmets, and so on. Therefore, solving traffic problems is not only the agent’s duty of Hanoi but also awareness of ourselves.

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TRAFFIC

I live in Vietnam and there are a lot of traffic problems in big cities in my country. Firstly, there are too many people using the roads especially in the rush hour when people run out to work and school or get home from those places. Secondly, there are too many vehicles on the road that leads to traffic jams. Another problem is that many roads are narrow and bumpy. Fourthly, there are traffic accidents every day so a lot of people lose their lives or are injured. So in order to travel on the roads safely, I think we should obey the traffic rules and traffic signs as well. Moreover, carefulness is very necessary.

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CẦN DỊCH THÌ NÓI MKHỌC TỐT

Traffic jam is not only a problem that Vietnam now has to deal with but also an issue needs overcoming in many other countries. Traffic jam is when there are too many transports moving on a road, and it often occurs in rush hours. We can see that in many cities. Due to a large population and poor infrastructure, with many personal motorbikes, Ha Noi is one of the cities in Vietnam must suffer from the traffic jam. Traffic jam has an influence on us: it leads to annoying and uncomfort. Moreover, the ozone layer is also affected by the carbon dioxide discharged. There are some solutions released to cope with this problem. But the most important way is from us. We ought to use public buses instead of personal transports so that trafic jam can be removed.

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I have lived in Ha Noi for many years. Ha Noi is a big and busy city. There are lots of vehicles on the road all day. There are lots of cars, buses, taxis and trucks on high ways. Vietnamese people like moving by motorbike. Almost every family has a motorbike. The traffic jam is often at about 7 a.m and 5 p.m because it’s the time when people go to work or school and come back home. There are sometimes accidents on the road. Therefore, to reduce these problems, we need to obey traffic rules to reduce accidents as much as possible.

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Tôi đã và đang sống ở Hà Nội nhiều năm. Hà Nội là một thành phố lớn và bận rộn. Có nhiều phương tiện trên đường mỗi ngày. Có nhiều ô tô con, xe buýt và xe tải trên đường cao tốc. Người Việt Nam thích di chuyển bằng xe máy. Hấu hết mỗi gia đình đều có một chiếc xe máy. Ùn tắc giao thông thường vào lúc 7 giờ sáng và 5 giờ chiều bởi vì đây là thời điểm mọi người đi làm hoặc đi học và trở về. Có nhiều vụ tai nạn trên đường. Vì vậy để giảm thiểu các vấn đề này, chúng ta cần tuân thủ các luật giao thông để giảm thiểu tai nạn nhiều nhất có thể.

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My favorite sport is volleyball. Volleyball is an Olympic sport, in which two teams are separated by a net. Each team tries to score by getting the ball into the opponent's field in accordance with the rules.
In Vietnam today, volleyball is a sport that has a number of people who love to participate and practice after football. Volleyball players are diverse from teens, middle-aged adults or even older people. So what is the benefit of playing volleyball on a daily basis that attracts so many people?
Daily volleyball is a form of exercise that gives you good health. In addition, training with volleyball also helps the body to have a balanced body because the sport must be full, continuous and high speed.
- Daily practice of volleyball will forge your hand quickly. When playing volleyball, you have to quicken your eye to determine the ball, locate the ball and swiftly hand to handle the ball, accurately pinching the opponent's pitch. This also helps you to have a clearer mind to judge flexible situations.

- With volleyball, the player has to move and work continuously so it will help you get a tough body. The postures are constantly changing to help your joints get lubricated. You will have limited bone disorders.

- A benefit that most of you are playing volleyball positive impact on the development of the height of youth. Playing volleyball with bouncing phases stretches the joints of the backs, hips and legs. This stretch helps children to reach a maximum height early. In addition, the strong points will help your hands solid.

- Another important thing that volleyball brings to the trainer is cohesion. Volleyball will help you to have more relationships because you want to achieve high results with this discipline must have the team spirit and high discipline from the members.

- Finally, volleyball will help you relax, relax after tired working hours. Nowadays, with volleyball, it is a form of recreation and exercise that many older people choose.
So, I love to play volleyball, I play volleyball with my friends in my free time, I also play with my relatives because everyone in my family likes it. I want to become a volleyball volleyball player.

-writing a paragraph about traffic problems

I live in Vietnam and there are a lot of traffic problems in big cities in my country. Firstly, there are too many people using the roads especially in the rush hour when people run out to work and school or get home from those places. Secondly, there are too many vehicles on the road that leads to traffic jams. Another problem is that many roads are narrow and bumpy. Fourthly, there are traffic accidents every day so a lot of people lose their lives or are injured. So in order to travel on the roads safely, I think we should obey the traffic rules and traffic signs as well. Moreover, carefulness is very necessary.

-writing a paragraph about one's favoutite flim

Harry Potter is one of my favourite movies. This movie becoming my favourite since it has been held on theatre eight years ago. In my opinion, the story is totally awesome. Based on the best seller novel by JK.Rowling, this movie becomes real. I mean that the story is fiction, but it looks real when we see the movie. This movie story tells about Harry Potter, he is a wizard child. Since he was a baby, his parents died by the hand of The Dark wizard,Voldemort. So, he had to struggled on his whole life. When he turned to a young boy, Hogwart school of wizard and wizardry sent him a message that he is a student of that school. In there, he learned everything about magic, and also he found his true friendship, Hermione Granger and Ron Weasley. They always helped Harry Potter in everything, whether is right or wrong. They do this all together, happiness or sorrow. Harry Potter also learned how to love his parents, friends, teachers, and everything.
When Voldemort comes to kill Harry Potter, Harry against hard to be win. His best friends helped him until they comes to chaotic, but they still hold out.
From the story, i learn something about love, friendship, against everything bad, with our courageous and our heart and soul. That’s why this movie becoming my favourite ever, because the story is touching, even it’s just a fiction story. But it doesn’t mind, because we get everything in this movie, the great adventure, and the philosophy of this movie, definitely Harry Potter is my favourite.

-writing about how to save energy

Use water wisely

Set the hot water temperature to 50 degrees Celsius. Installing water-saving showerheads in your home will reduce the amount of hot water and energy used. Shorten showers to less than five minutes.

Switch off appliances

Switch off appliances such as hairdryers, electric toothbrushes and radios at the wall.

Use timers and sensors

Use programmable timers and sensors to light outside areas.

Use solar power

Consider using outdoor solar lights for your garden or outdoor areas.

Separate your lighting

Separate the lights so you can choose which areas to light.

Reduce your need for cooling and heating devices

Close the doors to unused rooms to reduce the area you need to cool or heat.

Keep curtains and outside window shades closed to reduce the amount of energy needed to maintain a consistent temperature inside.

Rather than heat your bedroom, add another blanket to your bed or use an electric blanket, wheat bag or hot water bottle.

Look after your cooling and heating systems

Clean your air conditioner or cooler so it doesn't use as much energy to run. Turn off your cooling or heating overnight and when you're not home.

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In my opinion, living in the countryside has its own pros and cons. According to benefits, it has fresh air, quite environment and friendly neighbors. Firstly, you have a healthy life. There are no dust, no smoke and no traffic jam. The air is fresh and the rain is also very clean. You can get raging water to cook rice and certainly have and tasted meal. Secondly, living in the countryside is peacful. It is very quiet to relax after working or there are many beautiful wide fields and fresh air.Finally, there are no separations in your town. Your neighors are friendly and helpful. They are really best friends. They will help you pleasently if you have trouble. Each problem has its solution anf your neighbors will share it for you. In conclusion, I prefer to live in the countryside, but I don't want to live there permanently.

1. How long/ it/ take/ get through/ worst/ traffic jam?
A. How long it take for get through worst traffic jam?
B. How long do it take to get through worst traffic jam?
C. How long does it take to get through the worse traffic jam?
D. How long does it take to get through the worst traffic jam?
2. It/ take/ me/ 15 minutes/ walk home/ from/ train station.
A. It take me 15 minutes walk home from the train station.
B. It takes me 15 minutes to walk home from the train station.
C. It take me 15 minutes walks home from train station.
D. It take me 15 minutes to walks home from the train station.
3. Max/ frighten/ by the film/ that he couldn’t sleep/ night.
A. Max were so frightened by the film that he couldn’t sleep in night.
B. Max was so frightening by the film that he couldn’t sleep in night.
C. Max was so frightened by the film that he couldn’t sleep at night.
D. Max frighten the film that he couldn’t sleep at night.
4. The festival/ take/ place/ every year/ the end/ August.
A. The festival takes place every year at the end of August.
B. The festival take place every year at the end of August.
C. The festival taked place every year at the end of August.
D. The festival take place every year at the end August.
5. Christmas / be / one / most famous / religious festivals / the world.
A. Christmas is one of the most famous religious festivals in the world.
B. Christmas is one of the most famous religious festivals on the world.
C. Christmas are one of the most famous religious festivals in the world.
D. Christmas is one of most famous religious festivals in the world.
6. My family and I / go / Thailand / last April / take part / the Songkran Festival.
A. My family and I go to Thailand last April to take part in the Songkran Festival.
B. My family and I went to Thailand last April to take part the Songkran Festival.
C. My family and I went to Thailand last April to take part in the Songkran Festival.
D. My family and I went Thailand last April to take part in the Songkran Festival.
7. It/ important/ us/ learn/ use/ roads properly/ safely.
A. It is important for us to learn to use the roads properly and safely.
B. It is important to us to learn use the roads properly and safely.
C. It is important for us to learn use the roads properly safely.
D. It is important to us to learn to use the roads properly and safely.
8. Mai/ used/ go/ school/ foot/ when/ she/ primary school.
A. Mai used to go to school on foot when she was in primary school.
B. Mai used to go to school by foot when she was in primary school.
C. Mai used to go to school on foot when she is in primary school.
D. Mai used to go school on foot when she was in primary school.
9. Despite/ good/ English,/ he /was/ not/ chosen.
A. Although his English good, he wasn’t chosen.
B. Although his English was good, he wasn’t chosen.
C. Although his English was good, he was chosen.
D. Although his good English, he wasn’t chosen.
10. We/ look carefully/ right/ left/ crossing/ roads.
A. We must look carefully right or left after crossing the roads.
B. We must look carefully right or left before crossing the roads.
C. We must look carefully right and left after crossing the roads.
D. We must look carefully right and left before crossing the roads.