I strongly support the use of personal electronic devices in learning because we can’t miss its definite advantages.First of all, they can be used for both research and study purpose. Students can access Internet to download data and store information and textbooks, which save amounts of money for paper books and time. This also means their backpacks are lighter but contain bigger data.Secondly, modern technology tools improve their study results because of a wide variey of useful learning applications on smartphones, laptop, tablets and other media players such as dictionary, spelling, translation, pronunciation and other apps. These apps are not boring but exciting them with colorful designed-courses, funny methods and attractive contents. Furthermore, students can study any time, anywhere as long as their devices are connected to Internet. Last but not least, smartphones help students communicate with each other or relax by listening to music and playing games when they are bored or tired of studying. All types of entertainment are now combined in a small portable equipment, which is convenient for the owners to relax anywhere. In conclusion, personal electronic devices bring more benefits than harm to students. I suggest that teachers allow and encourage the use of these devices in learning both inside and outside of class.

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Tôi ủng hộ mạnh mẽ việc sử dụng các thiết bị điện tử cá nhân trong học tập vì chúng ta không thể bỏ lỡ những lợi thế rõ ràng của nó. Trước hết, chúng có thể được sử dụng cho mục đích nghiên cứu và học tập. Sinh viên có thể truy cập Internet để tải dữ liệu và lưu trữ thông tin và sách giáo khoa, giúp tiết kiệm số tiền cho sách và tiết kiệm thời gian. Điều này cũng có nghĩa là ba lô của họ nhẹ hơn nhưng chứa dữ liệu lớn hơn. Thứ hai, các công cụ công nghệ hiện đại cải thiện kết quả học tập của họ nhờ vào nhiều ứng dụng học tập hữu ích trên điện thoại thông minh, máy tính xách tay, máy tính bảng và các phương tiện truyền thông khác như từ điển, đánh vần, dịch và các ứng dụng khác. Những ứng dụng này không phải gây nhàm chán mà còn thú vị với các khóa học được thiết kế đầy màu sắc, phương pháp vui nhộn và nội dung hấp dẫn. Hơn nữa, sinh viên có thể học bất cứ lúc nào, bất cứ nơi nào miễn là thiết bị của họ được kết nối với Internet. Cuối cùng nhưng không kém phần quan trọng, điện thoại thông minh giúp học sinh giao tiếp với nhau hoặc thư giãn bằng cách nghe nhạc và chơi các trò chơi khi họ thấy chán hoặc mệt mỏi vì học. Tất cả các loại giải trí hiện nay được kết hợp trong một thiết bị cầm tay nhỏ, thuận tiện cho các chủ sở hữu thư giãn ở bất cứ đâu. Tóm lại, các thiết bị điện tử cá nhân mang lại nhiều lợi ích hơn là gây hại cho học sinh. Tôi đề nghị giáo viên cho phép và khuyến khích sử dụng các thiết bị này trong học tập cả trong và ngoài lớp học.

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      There are many types of devices as learning tools, such as pens, erasers, rulers, calculators, ... All of them have their own advantages. Most of them are beneficial for learning. They help us learn more quickly and effectively and with better results. We can use the school supplies for other useful things in addition to our studies, such as using the books and notebooks we have learned to donate to the poor students for example. But now we overuse them over and over again and students misuse it. Some of you use a ruler to fight each other, use a pen to draw on the table, draw eraser, or fold paper from notebooks to make planes. School supplies are essential for us, it has many advantages, so please know how to use it properly.

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- They help students communicate with each other or relax by listening to music and playing games when they are bored and tired of studying.

- Students study better by using helpful learning apps on smartphones, laptops, tablets and other media players (dictionary, spelling, translation, pronunciation and other apps).

- Electronic devices can be used for research and study, and for storing information and textbooks. This can save time and make students' backpacks lighter.

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Internet is necessary for you because of these reason:

firstly, You can read newspaper online or download lots of information from the web pages. Beside, you can learns online as well. Second, It helps you study faster by a lot of answer in the internet. You can also relax by a lot of website such as Zing Me or Facebook for you to share your ideas and information with your friends. You can watch movies or listen to music if you like. It's help you relax after all day work hard.In fact, there are a lot of advantages of using the internet.

I agree with the idea that with the help of technology, students will benefit greatly from studying by themselves at home. Firstly, we will study by ourselves, it’s easy to get your own knowledge. Furthermore, we won’t go to school because we can study at home, it also saves time. For these reasons, studying on the Internet is important to improve our knowledge

Living in the countryside is really good for your life because of these reasons:- First, living in the country can bring you a clean evironment. The air is fresher and there are lots oftrees, rice fields and rivers, you can walk on the fields or along the rivers to enjoy the clean and fresh airthere in the early morning.- Second, living in the countryside is cheaper than in the city because people there have lower income anddon’t have the habit of spending a lot of money. If you live in the country, you can save a lot of money.- Finally, people in the country are more friendly and opener than people in the city because they live neareach other. People live together in a small village so they can talk countryside can have festivals and youcan join and fell very happy.In conclusin, there are many benefits of living in the country.

Living in the countryside is very wonderful! Why do I say that? Just because there are so many advantages of that thing. First, when you live in the countryside, you can enjoy the fresh air everytime. You can try a lot of fresh foods, such as: vegetables, fish, many kind of meats, ect... Second, we can even develop or produce them. In the countryside, there are a lot of trees, flowers, paddie fields or rivers, so every afternoon, you can play so many games playing marbles, skipping, flying a kite, ...ect even on the road because traffic in the countryside isn't chao in the city. So that, do you want to try living in the countryside?

Living in the countryside has a lot of advantages, but also many disadvantages. As the advantage we can consider the fact that the country is less polluted and the traffic isn't so heavy. You are fit and you don't need to worry about your health condition, because in the countryside the air and water are so clean. In the country there are many plant species. There aren't any huge blocks of flats, modern skyscrapers or bothersome traffic jams. In the country you are free to admire the breathtaking landscapes such as huge meadows, peaceful hills or forests. You can enjoy walking in the forest and picking mushrooms or hunting. Another advantage is that you may easily build a big house and the garden, because charges for ground are much lower than in the suburbs. Moreover, living in the countryside is cheaper than it is in the city, so you probably may afford many other things, because the prices are lower. What is more, you can invite your friends to the barbecue organized in your garden. It would be great! The other positive side is the safety. In the rural area the crime rate is much lower. There aren't a lot of housebreaks and the possibility of burglary is also lower. In the countryside people usually and keep eyes on neighbour's estates. They always react when something strange is happening. Country life is very peaceful and silent. You will enjoy the feeling of peace.

However, there are a lot of positive aspects of living in the country side, there are also some disadvantages. Living in the country is slower. People don't need to hurry and have a lot of time. People in the country don't have to work so many hours as they do in the city. On the other hand, they don't earn so much money. Moreover, there aren't such interesting things to do during free time. The unemployment rate is also much higher than in the city. The problem may be also the communication. If you don't have your own car, you may have problem how to commute to work. The same problem concerns the access to the hospitals, schools, police stations and shops, which are usually located far from the village. Last of all, there are some dangers connected with country life such as heavy snowfall or rainfall.

To sum up, I think that living in the country may have a lot of advantages such as fresh air, breathtaking landscapes and comfort, but a lot of people decide to stay in the city, due to the fact that the life in the town is easier. The easy access to shops and other institutions are the great advantage.