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I think listening to music is my hobby. I started when I was six years old. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to music in times of sad and free time. I always listen to music alone. I listen to music everywhere, including at bedtime. I think listening to music is interesting because helps me feel relaxed. I think it a good hobby and I will never stop it.

 One of my hobbies is listening to music, especially English songs. My hobby started when I was a first – year student at Da Nang University of Technology. I spend much time on it. I can listening when I am doing my housework such as clean the floor, wash clothes, wash dish…or when I sleep…I love Taylor Swift, Rihana…they are great singers. I can learn English vocabulary when listening to English songs and it also make me feel relaxed.

I think it a good hobby and I will never stop it.

dịch giùm

Almost everybody has some kinds of hobby. My hobbies are listening to music and watching television. I am very fond of music. When I am free, I often listen to my favorite songs from an old cassette recorder. At weekends, I usually go to music shops in the downtown areas to buy good CDs. Of the famous pop singers, I prefer Frank Sinatra, Elvis Presley, Madonna and Paul McCartney. I also spend an hour after dinner watching news and documentary programmes. I particularly enjoy the programme "The World Here and There" because it broadens my knowledge of nature and human civilizations. I think that my hobbies are very useful. They widen my knowledge, relax my mind, and make me feel better about myself.

26. The writer's hobbies are _______________.

A. listening to music and playing games

B. playing games and watching television

C. watching TV and listening to music

27. The writer often listens to his favourite songs from__________________ .

A. a cassette recorder

B. a CD player

C. a mobile phone

28. What does he usually do at weekends?

A. He usually listens to music with his friends.

B. He usually stays at home and listens to music.

C. He usually goes downtown to buy CDs.

29. When does the writer usually watch TV?

A. before dinner

B. after dinner

C. before lunch

30. Why does he enjoy the programme "The World Here and There"?

A. Because he can see his most famous singers.

B. Because it widens his knowledge.

C. Because it contains some music programmes.

Almost everybody has some kinds of hobby. My hobbies are listening to music and watching television. I am very fond of music. When I am free, I often listen to my favorite songs from an old cassette recorder. At weekends, I usually go to music shops in the downtown areas to buy good CDs. Of the famous pop singers, I prefer Frank Sinatra, Elvis Presley, Madonna and Paul McCartney. I also spend an hour after dinner watching news and documentary programmes. I particularly enjoy the programme "The World Here and There" because it broadens my knowledge of nature and human civilizations. I think that my hobbies are very useful. They widen my knowledge, relax my mind, and make me feel better about myself.

26. The writer's hobbies are _______________.

A. listening to music and playing games

B. playing games and watching television

C. watching TV and listening to music

27. The writer often listens to his favourite songs from__________________ .

A. a cassette recorder

B. a CD player

C. a mobile phone

28. What does he usually do at weekends?

A. He usually listens to music with his friends.

B. He usually stays at home and listens to music.

C. He usually goes downtown to buy CDs.

29. When does the writer usually watch TV?

A. before dinner

B. after dinner

C. before lunch

30. Why does he enjoy the programme "The World Here and There"?

A. Because he can see his most famous singers.

B. Because it widens his knowledge.

C. Because it contains some music programmes.

Almost everybody has some kinds of hobby. My hobbies are listening to music and watching television. I am very fond of music. When I am free, I often listen to my favorite songs from an old cassette recorder. At weekends, I usually go to music shops in the downtown areas to buy good CDs. Of the famous pop singers, I prefer Frank Sinatra, Elvis Presley, Madonna and Paul McCartney. I also spend an hour after dinner watching news and documentary programmes. I particularly enjoy the programme "The World Here and There" because it broadens my knowledge of nature and human civilizations. I think that my hobbies are very useful. They widen my knowledge, relax my mind, and make me feel better about myself.

26. The writer's hobbies are _______________.

A. listening to music and playing games

B. playing games and watching television

C. watching TV and listening to music

27. The writer often listens to his favourite songs from__________________ .

A. a cassette recorder

B. a CD player

C. a mobile phone

28. What does he usually do at weekends?

A. He usually listens to music with his friends.

B. He usually stays at home and listens to music.

C. He usually goes downtown to buy CDs.

29. When does the writer usually watch TV?

A. before dinner

B. after dinner

C. before lunch

30. Why does he enjoy the programme "The World Here and There"?

A. Because he can see his most famous singers.

B. Because it widens his knowledge.

C. Because it contains some music programmes.

giúp mình với:<

Fill the gaps with the words/phrases in the box to give your opinion about the best leisure activity. More than one word can be suitable for some gaps

My favorite leisure activity is listening to music.

(1)________________, listening to music not only helps me relax but also provides me with musical knowledge. I (2)_______________ like the time that I can lie lazily in bed, put on the small earphone with my iPod and enjoy any favorite songs of many kinds of music: pop, hip-hop, rock or jazz. I like pop music very much because I think it is gentle and suitable for teenagers. I listen to rock music when I am sad and after that I feel cheerful and happy. (3)________________ music from other countries is also good for teenagers to understand other cultures. (4)________________ that, the lyrics are easy to understand and interesting. (5)_______________, it can improve my English and listening skills. (6)_______________, music is an important part of my life and it helps me love my life more.

VI/ Complete thí profile from a social networking website
FACESPACE

Hello! My name is Sofia and I’m 14 (0)...years...old. I live at home (1).........my parents and my brother
Joey, who is a DJ. Joey and I like (2)............of different kinds of music, including idie, pop (3)...... hip-
hop, I write (4).........own songs too and I hope to study music at university (5).........the future. I don’t do
much sport, but I’d like to try rock climbing (6)............ day. My favorite TV programmes (7)......... Prison
Break and American Idol. I’m happiest when when I’m having (8) .........good time chatting to my friends
and listening (9)........music. I’m afraid (10).........insects but I love animals- especially my cat, Shandy.

Mn sửa giup mình ngữ pháp bài này xem chỗ nào còn sai ko nhé, mai mình kt rồi:
1. I have many hobbies, but i love listening to music the most, especially English songs. My hobbies started when i was at fourth grade. I really love this hobby because it makes me feel relaxed and i can also learn English vocabulary when listening to English songs. I spend much time on it. I can listen when i'm doing my housework or when i'm sleeping. I love Camila Cabello, Selena Gomez,... they are great singers. I think this is a good hobby and i'll never quit it.

2. There are many delicious dishes in Viet Nam and Banh Mi is the one i like the most. It's a very popular street food in Viet Nam and it very tasty. It's has a lot of taste but the one with fried egg, cucumbers and tomatos is my most favourite. To make this dish, you'll need a loaf of bread, 2 eggs, a half of a cucumber, 1 tomato, a pinch of salt and chili sauce. First, beat the eggs together with salt, then fry that mixture in a pan. Next, cut the cucumber and tomato into thin slices. Then, add the fried egg, cucumber and tomato into the bread. After that, server it with some chili sauce if you like. Finally, enjoy! This dish is really easy to make so i always make it by myself. I often have this dish for my breakfast because it contains a lots of calories. I really love this dish