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Lương Vĩnh Huy
7 tháng 4 2023 lúc 11:35

My dream house is hi tech house by the sea with many sands and water surroundings. There will have 10 large rooms and it will plant many green trees, flowers and have big swimming pool in the garden. In each rooms, it will have a super smart TV, a super smart car, high-tech robot. the super smart TV will help me surf the Internet, send and receive my email, order food from the supermarket and contact my friends on other planets. High-tech robot will clean the floors, cook the meals, wash the clothes, water the flowers and feed the dogs and cats.

Lương Vĩnh Huy
7 tháng 4 2023 lúc 11:37

I want to build a dream house with a garden where I can grow my fruits and vegetables.

I want a spacious living room with four other rooms which can be used as bedrooms and a study room. One bedroom will be there for my grandparents and the other one for my parents.

My bedroom must have a very comfortable bed where I can relax. It would also be nice to have a PlayStation in my room. My room should be brightly colored, and on the walls, my favorite cartoon characters should be drawn.

For the living room, there must be a giant television where we can watch movies together. I also wish to have a pet cat or a pet dog, so there must be an area for them in my dream house.

Overall, my dream house is a house where my family, along with my pets, and I can live happily.

đặng ngọc hải yến
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Thân Vũ Khánh Toàn
27 tháng 2 2018 lúc 11:28

1. Hello, everybody! My name is......  . Today I am here to present to you about Favorite TV shows. I very watching cartoons. And of all the film I have seen, “Grave of the fireflies” is one in the cartoons which I most. In Vietnamese it’s called is “Can ham đom đom” or “Mo đom đom”. It’s a tragic story about two childents in the war. It’s made from Japan by Ghibli studio, directed and written by Takahata  Isao. It is based on a nover of Nosaka Akiyuki. It’s written as a apologize to his sister. With Japanese, this film is understand as a fable about the respect. Film is been in historical background at the end of the seconds world war from Japan. Film tells a painful story but moving to brothers sentiment of two orphanages : Seita and Setsuko. They lost mother after a fierce bombing of American air force to Kobe city while their father combat for Japanese navy. So Seita and Setsuko must to struggle to exist between the famine and the resistance to merciless of surrounding people (that have their kinship). They have to live in a shelter-pit and often eat frogs and lizards. At the end, Setsuko have to die for hunger, pictures depict painfulness and the death of little girl can be considered as the most mournful film pictures in the cartoon Japan history. When everybody, who had seen this film are asked, most of them said they cried, and that have me.That brings me to the end of my presentation. Many thanks for your attention!

2. My favorite hobby is playing football in spare time. After completing my home work at home, I generally spend my lot of free time in playing football. I was so interested to play football from my childhood however started learning to play well when I was 5 years old. I was in one class when I was 5 years old. My father asked to my class teacher in the PTM about my hobby of football. And my teacher told him that there is a facility of playing sports daily in the school from class 1 so you can admit your child. Now, I really enjoy playing football and paripate in the inter-school competitions.

3. I work for Pentax cameras, in the export department. I don’t have a lot of free time, but I have one special hobby taking photographs, of course! I taking photographs of flowers, especially in spring. Sometimes, after work, I relax in a bar near my office with friends. My friend, Tung, s singing pop songs in the bar. This has a special name, Karaoke. I don’t sing. I’m too shy! I just watch him.

4, My dream home would be on the ocean, well not on the ocean but beside it with a white sandy beach. The house would be an A frame backed against a hill. The upper floor would be a half floor master bedroom with a kingsize water bed and ensuite with a hot tub and sauna. The front wall would be glass with a stairway coming up to the bedroom. On cloudy nights you could watch the floresents in the waves coming into the beach while you went to sleep. Other nights you could counting the stars in the western sky. 
On the main floor would be the kitchen-dining room combination, with all the newest appliances and an island in the middle of the kitchen with the stove top and hanging pots and pans over it. The sink would be under one of the windows. Under the other window would be the nook for family meals. Between the kitchen windows, which look out to the field where the horses would be enjoying the warm weather are the cupboards. The dining room would have a six chair pine table set and hutch china cabnet. There will also be a three piece bathroom off the kitchen. The living room is in the front with the big front window. The fireplace is on the side wall with small long windows overlooking the driveway to the road a half mile away. The three piece sectional is perfectly positioned to watch the sunset into the western sea. The basement has the laundry room at the back with sewing machine for mending before folding and taking clothes upstairs. Half of the front of the basement is a guest bedroom with ensuite and small fridge and two element stove. The computer room is also at the front of the basement. Both have views of the beach and sea. Opposite the laundry room is my husband's workshop. I don't know what he has in there as it is his domain. In the garage at the side of the house is our wine colored 94 Toyota Crasada and my husband's hog. We often ride the bike along the beach on warm evenings to visit friends.

Tự dịch nha

Phạm Vi Ngọc Hân
27 tháng 2 2018 lúc 11:31

1. In TV, there are many kinds of programs : music , learn English , cartoon , News ..... and so on but I cartoon the most , the cartoon I watching is Tom and Jerry . In this cartoon , Tom and Jeny are main charaters . Tom is a cat with blue and white , he is a house keeper and he has free life . Jeny is a brown mouse , he very small and cute but he can run very fast . Jeny always gets Tom with trouble with the bull dog , and Tom often tries his best to catch Jeny but he never succesful . This cartoon give me a message : Never give up Tom although he never sucessful  but he always tries his best

                     

Yuuki Akastuki
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Arima Kousei
7 tháng 5 2018 lúc 23:04

1 ) My dream house is a cottage not far from the sea. On the ground-floor, there are four rooms. The first room is my livingroom, which has a white sofa, a black armchair and a cofee table. There are lots of paintings and trinkets as well. There is also a lamp, French windows with a view of the garden, a television set and a phone in the livingroom. My dream house has a fully-equiped kitchen, including a fridge and a door to the garden. There is a bathroom with a shower and toilet. There is also a study room where I keep my desk and computer. On the first floor, there are three bedrooms and a bathroom. In my bedroom, there is a wardrobe; a bed, of course; a bedside table; many pictures of me; and a television set. There is a balcony with a view of the sea. My house is really beautiful and spacious. It's big and expensive, but in my dream, I am rich. In the garden, there are a lot of fruit trees. There is a patio in front of the house from which I can see the driveway and front gate. The walls of the house are white, which I chose because it is pure and fresh, and I love it. And all of the windows have blinds.

vi lương mai
7 tháng 5 2018 lúc 23:05

Later on,i dream of having a very warm and happy home.mở bài ,còn lại tự nghĩ nha chị. 

Lan Nguyễn Thị
8 tháng 5 2018 lúc 19:44

k đúng cho mình đi, mih sẽ giúp bạn viết

Vân Trang Bùi
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Nguyễn Tâm Như
3 tháng 5 2016 lúc 6:56

1. Write about your favourite TV programme.

I like to watch Television. I used to watch cartoon programmes, general knowledge programmes and craft programmes. Among all ,I love the Programme ‘craft’, shown on the Kids Channel every day at 6 o’ clock in the evening. I am very fond of this Programme because they show how to make decorative items with the help of various things. With waste items like old newspapers, ice cream sticks, disposable plates and glasses, plastic bottles etc. The timing of this Programme is also suitable for me as it showed in evening. I made many things by learning through this Programme like plastic bottle castle, Ice cream sticks lamp etc. Everyone praised my efforts. I love this Programme and don’t miss even a single episode.

2. Write about your favourite sport.

My favorite sport is football. In America people called it Soccer. But I like to call it Football. It has been my favorite sport almost for 10 years, when I was 15 years old, and it still is, even though I’m not practicing it anymore. Nowadays, most of people in the world like football,so it is called the king of sports. Why do people like it? I think the most reason is it easy to play. You can play football every where if you just have a ball with the right size. Not only men play football but also women can play. There is the World Champion for men players each 4 years, and for Women as well. In addition, football have a big attraction. When World cup took place, a large number of millions people watched it on TV and saw it directly. Now there are many football club in each country, even district, school in the world. In the football today there are much more money involved, especially in sponsors. But player also cost a lot, There are many players as C.Ronaldo, Beckham, Zidane who cost over 50 million euro, even over 100 million euro. Many big and famous club have large stadiums with alot of fan in all over the world. They can get a great number of billion US dollar from broadcasting copywrite every year and a big avenue from sponsors and advertising. That prove the attration of football. To me, I like football because it's a useful, healthful, collective but competitive sport. I like fresh air on stadium on each match. Anyways football always is the most favorite sport of mine.

3. Write about your future house.

House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live, so do I. I enjoy to live in calm and open environment, so house built on small land won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound where I can stroll especially when I feel bored on my job. I want the garden in front of my house which will give me natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't like the noisy environment.Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size house having 2 or 3 floors. I don't like very large building because I have small family and I don't like to rent my home. I prefer to stay in second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floor is excessively heated during the very season whereas I like to stay in second or third floor during the winter as ground floor will be excessively cold during that period. Next thing is about gym room, I would like to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person. 

I have mentioned so many physical needs in my above paragraph but I would like to conculde my writing saying cool and amicable family environment is must to make our home like a heaven. Otherwise, it will be a hell and we would like to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with family.

Lê Như
3 tháng 5 2016 lúc 4:54

1. Write about your favourite TV programme:

   I am not particularly keen on watching TV, as in my opinion, not many TV programmes are worth watching but unfortunately the good ones end very late at night. As I often have to get up very early I prefer not to watch those films which finish very late, however good they may be.

   "Operación Triunfo" and "Mira quien baila" are some of the programmes that I usually watch. They both have something in common: they are both about acquiring artistic skills through effort and hard work. The difference between these programmes is the way they end. In the first programme the winners donate the prize money to a NGO. In the second programme the winners are offered a recording contract.

   In conclusion, these programmes are family orientated. The presenters and contestants in both programmes are friendly and funny, so enjoyment is guaranteed. I really enjoy watching the dancing and listening to the songs.

2. Write about your favourite sport:

   My favorite sport is playing badminton. There are four reasons why I like it. Firstly, I can improve my health through playing it. I play it about 2 times every week. It makes me feel energetic everyday. Secondly, I enjoy the feeling that badminton flies in the air. I can change the movement direction of badminton without much effort and make opponent lose it. Thirdly, I can make many friends when I play badminton. I often play it with many kinds of persons. We can improve our skills with exercises. Also we talk about many interesting things when we have an break. Finally, playing badminton is not as intense as other sports such as basketball and soccer. It lessens the possibility of being hurt. So If you like playing badminton, please feel free to contact me. I think we can exchange experiences and make friends.

3. Write about your future house:

   House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live, so do I. I enjoy to live in calm and open environment, so house built on small land won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound where I can stroll especially when I feel bored on my job. I want the garden in front of my house which will give me natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't like the noisy environment.Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size house having 2 or 3 floors. I don't like very large building because I have small family and I don't like to rent my home. I prefer to stay in second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floor is excessively heated during the very season whereas I like to stay in second or third floor during the winter as ground floor will be excessively cold during that period. Next thing is about gym room, I would like to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person. 

   I have mentioned so many physical needs in my above paragraph but I would like to conculde my writing saying cool and amicable family environment is must to make our home like a heaven. Otherwise, it will be a hell and we would like to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with family.

 

 

ARMY BTS
3 tháng 4 2017 lúc 21:40

There are many programmes on TV but my favourite TV programmes is Tom and Jerry.

This film is from the Americ. It is always shown on Cartoon Network " Tom and Jerry" cartoon is talking about conjlict between cat and mouse. Tom and Jerry was living under one roof. The main character is Tom and Jerry. Tom jealousy and love to over come other people, but he is very stupid. Mean while, Jerry is smart and agile.

I love it very much because the film gave me good lessons about friendship.

Tick cho mik nha!! bài của mik là 1 bài hay đó!!! tick nha!!

Nguyễn Thị Ngọc Phước
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Mischievous Girl
27 tháng 9 2016 lúc 14:48

My name is Thao . My dream house will be a big modern villa. It has a big beautiful garden in front of the villa.

_silverlining
1 tháng 1 2017 lúc 10:03

My dream school is first of all a school where life begins with the teacher who is full of passion and liveliness. The teacher not only grabs the students’ attention but keeps them on the edge of their seats wanting to know more. His or her enthusiasm ignites that spark of excitement that opens receiving minds to wider fields of knowledge. Such a teacher asks more questions from the students, explores with the students and is a friend to them.

My dream school is a school where teaching methods vary from the use of contemporary technologies like robotics to out-of-class experiences. Those experiences are important because they do not confine students to the four walls of a classroom.

There would also be integrated learning of subjects both in the Arts and Sciences so that the education received would not be about confining but expanding. Given choices, students get a sense of freedom, can express opinions and will be more sociable. All these make them better persons in society, possessing a wide range of skills.

My dream school would be complete with amazing facilities like classroom labs, pools, and gyms. A library and counselling centre would be at hand to enable students to be more familiar with their subjects and themselves. Studying in a hands-on environment allows students to use their five senses to gain knowledge. It moulds them to be excited about their abilities and excel with them. Also at hand would be a canteen stocked with healthy food. A balanced diet is vital for students who spend many hours in school. Clean, non-processed, nutritious food is a key feeding requirement for students.

Foreign exchange programs in my dream school would create understanding and respect. They would satisfy curiosities and instil intercultural awareness. They would be open to all students, rich and poor. Including students from all parts of the world would make this education truly global.

Sports would be given equal emphasis with academics. After all, education is not only for the mind but for the whole self – mentally and physically. Sporting activities instil a healthy lifestyle by encouraging students to be physically fit, emotionally strong, and have good self-esteem. They build team spirit, and at the same time encourage individuality. Through sports, people from different backgrounds meet and learn to respect each other.

Academic subjects must be relevant. The syllabus would include significant impact fields like environmental studies, political views, and economic struggles. It would grab the attention of students and lead them to action.

Improving schools would require international collaboration. Such cooperation would encourage dialogue and lead to common standards. Nelson Mandela once said, “Education is the great engine of development. It is through education that the daughter of a peasant can become a doctor, that the son of a mineworker can become the head of the mine, that the child of farm workers can become the president of a great nation”.

Education can bring a change in someone’s future as Mr. Mandela observed. The struggle to keep fulfilling that observation must be made by us. Students need to be inspired, amazed and be aware of endless opportunities.

While school is the best thing that ever happened to mankind, there is still yet more to do.

BTS
11 tháng 12 2017 lúc 8:56

Dream house:

I think in the future I'll be rich because I want to become a CEO of the famouse company so my house will be very big and modern too. Maybe it'll be a villa in the suburb. The air here will be clan because it'll have many trees surround. There'll over 50 rooms in my house, such as: kitchens, living rooms and more. Oh, there'll a large hall in the middle of the house. At the weekend, I'll make a concert and invite many famous singer like: BTS, Taylor Swift,...I think it'll be great! But there a problem. The house is too big so I can't clean them all. Maybe I will make some robots to do it and all the housework for me.

Quang Anh
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Yến Nhi Lê Thị
19 tháng 12 2016 lúc 18:55

Neighborhood:

Adjacent to the children's uncle Hoa. Uncle Hoa is the closest neighbor of the family em.Nam now, doctors forty tuoi.Bac secondary school teacher Cat Linh basis. There are times to go far, doctors give me the book. Although small gift, but it is the best novel I've ever became fit for doc.Bac, brunette, face pedestal hau.Bac loved children xom.Thinh time, doctors telling us nghe.Co times, to the doctor I broke playing unfortunately jars hoa.Em sorry doctor, but doctors do not blame you, but advised: "next time be more careful grandchildren offline! . Uncle who is merciful result. I regarded as family doctors in the family.

Your house:

For each person, the house is always a very familiar image from birth until adulthood. Because the house is a place to keep the good feelings: love of family, and memories of childhood.

 

My house was built a long time ago, I heard the mother tell the grandmother when he was alive. My house roofed with palm leaves, and are separated into 3: The space between the living room, next to the two bedrooms of the parents and the children. Kids kitchen is made in one particular time. Very wide and cool your house, between the house has very large pillars, columns to keep the always solid. On the shaft was carved meticulously kanji, my mom said it was the family maxim that grandfather loves you, he has hand engraved on the columns with the desire that all generations families follow. Kids living room is mainly used for ancestor worship and receptions. On holidays or full moon day, my mother often burn incense and make a tray of rice cultivation to worship ancestors. May the grandparents bless their families. Between the time I also have a set of tables and chairs made of wood, but my parents used to receive guests. People come to my house to play, everyone is saying your house clean and cool.

 

Bedroom of my parents are very simply decorated, with a bed, a wardrobe and a coffin again. I remember when dad told me that 13 years ago, this is the wedding room of the parents, it has kept a lot of memories until the day I was born. That's where the coffin containing the memories of their parents love each other time, I have never seen the inside of it for sure when I announced major new dad showed me. But they understand that their parents love each other always and always for me the best thing.

Canh Across the living room is my bedroom. I have single handedly decorate it. My room had a small bed, a wardrobe and a desk placed near the window, the wall is the price you book is very neatly arranged. On my bed with stuffed animal too much, it is the gift of giving parents and friends for the birthday child. They are very loving and always near me when I went to bed. I always cared for a loved his desk by arranging books and belongings tidy, so that when needed they can easily find. The price of the books I have 2 compartment, container and container books comics. That's the book I really like, I usually read it each time finishing homework or on holidays. We are very close friends of the children.

Is separate from the main house is the kitchen, where the family often gathered together to eat a warm meal. My mother was very attentive mom who always care for the family's small kitchen. I miss my mother once told me, the kitchen should always be neat and clean, the people are the meal. These pots, pot, or bowls, plates, especially the spice jar is her mother to enter the locker neat. When you cook mother often helped her mother prepare and clean wheels grills.

Around my house is the garden with a variety of fruit, until the summer is to enjoy the children. My family, though not spacious and well-appointed as the houses in the city that I have ever seen on TV, but for me that is where the familiar and favorite. The house which has kept a lot of cultural beauty grandparents family since I left. I always respect that and I'll take care of the parents their house so that it is always clean and always will be my family's nest.

Dream house:

Hello everyone! Today I'll tell you about my dream house. I live in a big house in the countryside and it is very beautiful. It has a living room, a kitchen, three bedrooms and two bathrooms. In the living room, there is a table, four chairs, a television and an air conditioner. My bedroom is very nice. There is a computer, a bed, a lamp and two pictures on the wall. And a bookshelf above the table, some teddy bears on the bed and a wardrobe. The kitchen has a refrigerator, a stove and a sink. Next to the kitchen is the bathroom. It has a shower, a washing machine and a tub. I love my house very much.  
Vũ Thị Thùy Dương
22 tháng 12 2017 lúc 13:57

hay

Linh nguyen thuy
12 tháng 5 2019 lúc 20:36

*Dream house:

My dream house should be situated outside the city, in a deserted place, somewhere in a wood near a lake surrounded by the wild beautiful nature, or it would be an amazing idea to live somewhere on an island like Hawaii with beautiful sandy beaches and a lot of sun. I adore nature and it would be so exciting to wake up early in the morning and listen to the birds singing. At least, my dream house should be located near a small river in the countryside where I could live in peace and harmony with serene nature.

My dream house should be of a simple design; I would like it to be a bungalow style house designed in basic colors that are appealing to the eyes. I would like to have a huge lawn in front of my house and enough parking for several cars. There should be a small garden planted with fruit trees, bushes and flowers. There should be a front porch where we could sit and relax and enjoy the beauty of nature. I would like to have a large backyard with a big swimming pool and a basketball court because I am fond of sports. In my backyard, there should be also enough space for having family picnics when the weather is fine. I prefer to spend a lot of time out of doors so an attractive outer design of my house and gardens is very important for me.

My dream house should be large and spacious with plenty of large windows that would make the rooms bright and airy. The interior design of my house should be carefully planned to every detail but I should confess that I prefer a minimalistic approach to the design of interior so I don’t like my ideal house to be stuffed with a lot of unnecessary furniture – instead, I would like to have enough space to feel free. Besides, I would like to have enough space for green plants and flowers that would create beauty and peace.

I would like to have a spacious hall and a large living room with comfortable sofas and armchairs and a large soft carpet on the floor. My kitchen should be small and neat because I am I am not really fond of cooking – I prefer to have meals in small restaurants, and I cook rarely. But my kitchen should be equipped with the latest cooking appliances and utensils. I would like to have a really huge refrigerator that could be filled with cool drinks and a freezer. My kitchen should be designed in a Scandinavian style with simple white walls and a floor. I would like to have a large wooden dining table.

I would like to have three bedrooms with attached bathrooms with a shower and a Jacuzzi. The bedrooms should be cozy with large beds and soft carpets on the floors. I would like to have a large TV set in my bedroom and a built-in closet. I am fond of reading, actually, I am a bookworm, so the library would be one of the most important rooms in my dream house. I would like to have shelves with books of my favorite writers that would line the walls from the floor to the ceiling. In the library, I prefer to have the latest desktop computer to surf the Internet.

Trần Đức Huy
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Đoan Lê Thục Nhật
23 tháng 4 2018 lúc 11:54

Bài làm:
My dream house is a large villa. It is near the coast, surrounded by rows of coconut trees and the blue sea. There are sixteen rooms in my house and half of them for relaxation and entertainment. It has a big garage so that I can store my super cars trere. My house has wind power or solar energy. I use hi-tech and automa machines such as a smart clock, morden fridge, automa dishwasher and washing machine. They can be controlled by voice and help me tell the time, forecast weather, preserve food and wash dishes and clothes. There is a super smart TV in my house. I might surf the internet, watch my favourite TV programme from space or contact friends on other planets by this fantasic TV. I might aloso join online classes on TV and not have to go to school.

Bản dịch:
Ngôi nhà mơ ước của tôi là 1 biệt thự lớn. Nó gần bờ biển, bao quang bởi hàng dừa và biển xanh. Có 16 phòng trong nhà của tôi và 1 nửa trong số chúng để thư giãn và giải trí. Nó có một nhà để xe lớn để tôi có thể lưu trữ siêu xe của tôi ở đó. Nhà tôi có điện gió hoặc năng lượng mặt trời. Tôi sử dung máy móc công nghệ cao và tự động như đồng hồ thông minh, tủ lạnh hiện đại, máy rửa chén tự động và máy giặt. Chúng có thể được kiểm soát bằng giọng nói và giúp tôi nói thời gian, dự báo thời tiết, bảo quản thức ăn và rửa chén đĩa, quần áo. Có một chiếc TV siêu thông minh trong nhà tôi. Tôi có thể lướt internet, xem chương trình truyền hình yêu thích của tôi từ không gian hoặc liên hệ với bạn bè trên các hành tinh khác của TV tuyệt vời này. Tôi cũng có thể tham gia các lớp học trực tuyến trên TV và không phải đi học.

Dở lắm đừng ném đá nha! :))

Trâm Lê
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Nguyễn Minh Long Tiến
17 tháng 10 2018 lúc 12:00

this is my room. The room is not too large, its area is only about 16m. On the left side of the room there is a bed. On the right side of the room there is a wardrobe and next to the wardrobe there is a fan. Opposite the door there is the shelf and next to the shelf there is desk. Under the desk there is a small drawer where I put the bag and all my school supplies in . Above the desk there is a window, this window lighting the whole room during the day, so I just need to turn on the lights at night

Lê Minh
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Hoàng hôn  ( Cool Team )
6 tháng 9 2019 lúc 20:13

My dream house is a large villa. It is near the coast, surrounded by rows of coconut trees and the blue sea. There are sixteen rooms in my house and half of them for relaxation and entertainment. It has a big garage so that I can store my super cars trere. My house has wind power or solar energy. I use hi-tech and automa machines such as a smart clock, morden fridge, automa dishwasher and washing machine. They can be controlled by voice and help me tell the time, forecast weather, preserve food and wash dishes and clothes. There is a super smart TV in my house. I might surf the internet, watch my favourite TV programme from space or contact friends on other planets by this fantasic TV. I might aloso join online classes on TV and not have to go to school

My Dream House

Here is my writing on the "My Dream House". I would be grateful if someone would review my essay and give me feedback on the sentence structure and grammar of writing.


My Dream House

House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live, so do I. I enjoy to live in calm and open environment, so house built on small land won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound where I can stroll especially when I feel bored on my job. I want the garden in front of my house which will give me natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't the noisy environment.Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size house having 2 or 3 floors. I don't very large building because I have small family and I don't to rent my home. I prefer to stay in second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floor is excessively heated during the very season whereas I to stay in second or third floor during the winter as ground floor will be excessively cold during that period. Next thing is about gym room, I would to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person.

I have mentioned so many physical needs in my above paragraph but I would to conculde my writing saying cool and amicable family environment is must to make our home a heaven. Otherwise, it will be a hell and we would to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with family.

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