My holiday
I have a quite long vacation. It was the best holiday in this year.
Usually, I wake up later because I don't have to go to school. Then I will do the housework and homework. After that, I waited for my mother to come back and then went down to make rice. Finally go to sleep. I usually do that every day. My family will visit my grandparents at the weekend. When it comes to my birthday, the whole family will go on a trip to celebrate my birthday. Because I like the sea, my parents often take me to the beach to play. My family also often takes the whole family to eat seafood and go to amusement parks. I feel this holiday is wonderful , I hope next year I will have such wonderful vacation again .
Mọi người xem hộ em bài văn trên có bị sai lỗi ngữ pháp nào o với ạ . Em đang cần gấp vì mai 8 giờ em phải đi học rồi nên mọi người làm nhanh giúp em với ạ . Em cảm ơn mọi người rất nhiều ạ .
I have -> had a quite long vacation. It was the best holiday in (-> bỏ) this year. (câu này giới thiệu đây là kì nghỉ đã diễn ra trong quá khứ)
Usually -> Unlike usual, I wake up later because I don't have to go to school. Then I will do the housework and homework. After that, I waited for my mother to come back and then went down to make rice. Finally go to sleep -> Finally, I went to sleep (thiếu chủ ngữ, sai thì). I usually do that every day. My family will visit my grandparents at the weekend. When it comes to my birthday, the whole family will go on a trip to celebrate my birthday. Because I like the sea, my parents often take me to the beach to play. My family also often takes the whole family to -> My whole family also often (gia đình tôi đưa gia đình tôi đi... nghe vô lý quá) eat seafood and go to amusement parks. I feel this holiday is wonderful , I hope next year I will have such a (such a + N số ít) wonderful vacation again .
- Bài viết của em ko có sự thống nhất về thì (chỗ dùng quá khứ, chỗ dùng tương lai). Khi đề bài yêu cầu kể lại thì dùng thì quá khứ đơn em nhé.
