I sport and I play it two hours everyday. My favorite sport is playing badminton. There are four reasons why I it. Firstly, I can improve my health through playing it. I play it about 2 times every week. It makes me feel energe everyday. Secondly, I enjoy the feeling that badminton flies in the air. I can change the movement direction of badminton without much effort and make opponent lose it. Thirdly, I can make many friends when I play badminton. I often play it with many kinds of persons. We can improve our skills with exercises. Also we talk about many interesting things when we have an break. Finally, playing badminton is not as intense as other sports such as basketball and soccer. It lessens the possibility of being hurt. So If you playing badminton, please feel free to contact me. I think we can exchange experiences and make friends.
P/S : Hoq chắc :>
bài của TL sai ở 1 số chỗ như:
+)I sport mk nghĩ thiếu
+)My favorite sport là môn thể thao yêu thích nên mk nghĩ chỉ dùng badminton
+)mk nghĩ ko có cấu trúc through+Ving
+)energe =>full of energy
+)mk nghĩ kinds of person nên đc thay = people
+)an break=>a break
+)you playing nên chuyển thành play theo cấu trúc câu đk loại 0
Dù sao mk cũng thấy bạn viết rất tốt.Làm bạn nha
