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Sửa hai bài này dùm em với ạ From Le Thanh Hai to Me: (Direct Message) 04:07 PM From: Sandy Subject: Your visit Dear, For me, that is a great week. We can play and study together.So it is very good for each other. With the first day of the week, I think we should go out for entertainment to prepare for another day so I shall go to the concert and it will make us more comfortable. In my opinion, it is not a good choice because it can cause some problems and our parents will not know about it. Instead of climbing, we can have better activities like play sports at home or go camping. That is a very nice option. See you at your house, Hai From: Ngan To: Sandy Hello Sally, I'm just as excited as you that I’m coming to stay with you for a week. Definitely that day would be great In my opinion, going to a concert is better than staying at home because there's music and everyone there is very happy. I don’t think that is a good idea because I'm pretty scared of heights and we'll probably get very tired when we go. In conclusion maybe it would be better to have a party in the garden I think it would be great That’s my idea, See you soon Ngan

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From Le Thanh Hai

to Me: (Direct Message) 04:07 PM

From: Sandy

Subject: Your visit

Dear,

For me, it will be a great week. We can play and study together. On the first day of the week, I think we should go out for some entertainment to prepare for the next day so my recommendation is to go to the concert and surely it will help us relax feel comfortable.

When it comes to climbing, I suppose it is not a good choice because it probably causes us some troubles as our parents will hardly know where we are. Instead of climbing,why don't we play sports at home or go camping with our families? 

Please reply soon.

See you at your house,

Hai

 

From: Ngan

To: Sandy

Hello Sally,

I'm just as excited as you that I’m coming to stay with you for a week. Definitely that day would be great.

In my opinion, going to a concert is better than staying at home because there's music and everyone there is very happy. Also (dùng từ này để phù hợp với văn phong thân mật giữa bạn bè hơn em nhé), I'm pretty scared of heights and we'll probably get very tired when we go. Afterwards, maybe it would be fantastic to have a party in the garden.

I think it would be great!

I can't wait to hear from you.

See you soon

Ngan

 

 

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