Essay Question: Does being famous have more advantages or more disadvantages?
Read this second paragraph (the paragraph after the introduction) from a student's essay on this topic. What are the good and bad things about it?
There are many advantages of being famous. If you are famous, you might also be wealthy. You can buy a big house and an expensive car. Another advantage is that you have fans. They take photographs of you and send you letters. One more advantage is if you are famous you don't have to wait in queues. You can go to the front. The last advantage of being famous is you can use your fame and money to help good causes. If you give money to charity, others will do so too. In this way, you can make a real difference in the world.
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There are many advantages of being famous. First, famous people are usually rich. They can buy big houses, nice clothes, and expensive cars. Second, they have many fans. Fans take photos of them, ask for autographs, and send letters to show love and support. Another good thing is that famous people don’t have to wait in line. They often go to the front or get special service. Most importantly, they can use their fame and money to help others. If they give money to charity, other people may follow them. This way, they can help make the world a better place.
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