Thùy Mai Viết theo cái brainstorm này nha:
- Clean environment :
+ the air is fresh
+ fewer means of transport than in the city
there's hardly any company
-> less pollution
- Goods in the country is much fresher, cleaner, safer and especially cheaper.
- People in the countryside are more friendly and opener than those in the city because they live near each other.
- People live together in a village so you can have festivals on some special occasions.
* Note : Chú ý nên sử dụng nhiều linking word.
+ Mở đầu : To begin with,...
-> giới thiệu vấn đề
+ Trc khi đưa ra các opinion : Firstly/ First of all , Secondly,...
+ Các từ nối : moreover/ furthermore/ In addition to ( thêm vào đó) , so/ hence/ thus ( vì vậy, do đó),...
+ Ý cuối cùng: Last but not least ( cuối cùng nhưng ko kém phần quan trọng).
Tham khảo:
Nowadays, more and more people choose to live in the city. In this essay, I will discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city.
It can't be denied that living in the city has many benefits. First of all, if we live in the city, we will have many chances get the developing science and technology. It means that we will have more job opportunities and broaden our knowledge more easily. Secondly, we will have many different ways to spend our free time. There are a lot of theatres, concerts and other kinds of entertainment. There is always a lot to do and visit There are a lot of possibilities of shopping. In various shopping centres and galleries you can buy whatever you want. What is more, a big city is a potential market for trading activities, so we can earn more money to provide our family a comfortable life
Besides advantages, living in the city brings to us a lot of disadvantages. Firstly, a problem about which everyone is worrying is environment. The increase of factories based on industrialization and modernization has severely polluted environment. Smoke from factories' chimneys not only pollutes the air but also makes people get many serious cancers. Sewage is bumped into rivers without being purged, which threatens underwater ecosystems. The second drawback of living in the city is society's vices such as drug addiction. Young people. especially the students, are easily spoiled by bad habits. If people use up all the money, they can't control themselves and even become robbers or murders. Moreover, a problem that many people living in the city have is heartlessness. With some people, it's not worth being worried and it has no effect on our life, people are too busy to care for any others. But if more and more people become heartless, the society will be worse, no one cares another one, they live boring lives, every purposes became meaningless, without love, sympathy and many other good things.
There are good things as well as bad thing of living in the city. However, I strongly believed that advantages outweigh disadvantages. If people know how to live and enjoy their life, living in the city is one of the most interesting things that people want to experience.
Chúc bạn học tốt!
One of the main advantages of living in a foreign country is that people can enjoy better financial opportunities. For example, they may get a good job and a high salary so they can buy what they want and have a better lifestyle. For example, they may benefit from well-developed education and health systems.
