Bài tham khảo 1 :
My first visit to Nha Trang, the coastal city, was three years ago. It was a pleasant and memorable trip. Nha trang, the capital of Khanh Hoa province, has one of the most popular municipal beaches in all of Viet nam. In Nha Trang, nature beauties are so tempting. Waves crashing onto the cliffs, the soft sigh of the sea breeze, clean white sands and turquoise waters, it all makes for a stunning landscape. On my visit to Nha Trang, I used to get up early each morning to stroll along the beach - a chance to breath in the fresh sea air and enjoy the sunrise across the water. One attraction that captivated me three years ago and still it does is the collection of small offshore islands, that is Hon Tre where is the largest of the islands. Nha Trang is the city in hamoney, its fine wather, favorite position and friendly people bring it a certain balance. Nha Trang is a great holiday destination. I hope to have chance to come back.
Bài tham khảo 2 :
Ha Long Bay is a famous beauty-spot in the North-east coast of Vietnam, belongs to Quang Ninh province, 151km far from Hanoi to the east. This is one of Vietnam's tourist destinations recognized by UNESCO as a World Natural Heritage. Ha Long attracts many tourists with a special beauty including both excellent and romantic charm. Tourists coming to Ha Long in any season of the year also discover its own seductive and charming beauty.
Last summer, I went to Cua lo with my family. We went there by car, it is very far from my house, it is about 400 km, so we were very tired, but at one we felt better when we saw the sea.
Cua lo beach is really interesting, the beach is very large, flat, and it has a lot of sand. Waves are very strong, you will be very excited when you play with it. There are a lot of beauty spots, and good seafood there
We stayed in Binh Minh hotel. It was a very nice and comfortable hotel, it’s also rather near the sea.
The weather was hot and sunny all day. The sea was cool and clear, because it was very windy in the afternoon. We went swimming twice a day. My children was excited about it. The food was extremely delicious but not very expensive.
We took a lot of Photograps of the sea, bought a lot of seafood especially octopus and some sea present for our relatives.
After a week in Cua lo beach we felt happy and stronger.
We hope to go there again.
Phong nha cave is a world heritage site .The full name of that cave is Phong nha ke bang belong to Ke bang mountains in Quang Binh Phong Nha-Ke Bang area is noted for its cave and grotto systems as it is composed of 300 caves and grottos, of which only 20 have been surveyed by Vietnamese and British scientists; 17 of these are in located in the Phong Nha area and three in the Ke Bang area. Phong Nha holds several world cave records, as it has the longest underground river, as well as the largest caverns and passageways.
The park derives it name from Phong Nha cave, the most beautiful of all, containing many fascinating rock formations, and Ke Bang forest
The plateau on which the park is situated is probably one of the finest and most distinctive examples of a complex karst landform in Southeast Asia.
This national park was listed in UNESCO’s World Heritage Sites in 2003 for its geographical values as defined in its criteria viii.
Last summer, I went to Cua lo with my family. We went there by car, it is very far from my house, it is about 400 km, so we were very tired, but at one we felt better when we saw the sea.
Cua lo beach is really interesting, the beach is very large, flat, and it has a lot of sand. Waves are very strong, you will be very excited when you play with it. There are a lot of beauty spots, and good seafood there
We stayed in Binh Minh hotel. It was a very nice and comfortable hotel, it’s also rather near the sea.
The weather was hot and sunny all day. The sea was cool and clear, because it was very windy in the afternoon. We went swimming twice a day. My children was excited about it. The food was extremely delicious but not very expensive.
We took a lot of Photograps of the sea, bought a lot of seafood especially octopus and some sea present for our relatives.
After a week in Cua lo beach we felt happy and stronger.
We hope to go there again.
My first visit to Nha Trang, the coastal city, was three years ago. It was a pleasant and memorable trip.
Nha trang, the capital of Khanh Hoa province, has one of the most popular municipal beaches in all of Viet nam. In Nha Trang, nature beauties are so tempting. Waves crashing onto the cliffs, the soft sigh of the sea breeze, clean white sands and turquoise waters, it all makes for a stunning landscape. On my visit to Nha Trang, I used to get up early each morning to stroll along the beach - a chance to breath in the fresh sea air and enjoy the sunrise across the water. One attraction that captivated me three years ago and still it does is the collection of small offshore islands, that is Hon Tre where is the largest of the islands.
Nha Trang is the city in hamoney, its fine wather, favorite position and friendly people bring it a certain balance. Nha Trang is a great holiday destination. I hope to have chance to come back
Cấu trúc chung của bài
- Câu chủ đề/ mở đoạn (1 câu)
- Luận điểm 1 (1 câu); triển khai luận điểm 1 (1-2 câu)
- Luận điểm 2 (1 câu); triển khai luận điểm 2 (1-2 câu)
- Luận điểm 3 (1 câu); triển khai luận điểm 3 (1-2 câu)
- Câu kết luận (optional)
1. Câu chủ đề/ mở đoạn
- Là câu thể hiện ý chính của cả đoạn. Bắt buộc phải có 1 câu chủ đề hoàn chỉnh mới có thể từ đó triển khai các luận điểm.
- Câu chủ đề phải có 2 phần
+ Topic: Thông báo cho người đọc về chủ đề đoạn văn
+ Controlling idea: Nhận định cá nhân của người viết về chủ đề này
2. Phần thân bài
Thân bài bao gồm khoảng 3 luận điểm chính triển khai, giải thích, chứng minh cho câu chủ đề; sau mỗi luận điểm sẽ là luận cứ chứng minh cho luận điểm đó. Thông thường đề bài sẽ cung cấp gợi ý cho 3 luận điểm. Ngoài ra bạn cũng có thể tự xây dựng luận điểm bằng việc đặt ra và trả lời những câu hỏi đơn giản Why, How (tại sao, làm thế nào).
- Nên triển khai 1 trong 3 luận điểm bằng một ví dụ thực tế.
- Khi triển khai ý, nếu được, hãy cố gắng vận dụng trải nghiệm thật của bản thân thay vì bài mẫu thuộc lòng. Bài viết của bạn nhờ đó sẽ tự nhiên hơn, gây thiện cảm cho người đọc.
- 3 luận điểm cần được đưa ra theo một bố cục rõ ràng, dễ theo dõi.
- Đoạn văn phải được trình bày đơn giản, mạch lạc, thể hiện rõ ràng quan điểm người viết theo tinh thần khoa học, tuyệt đối tránh lối viết ẩn ý, lạc đề, khoa trương, sáo rỗng.
3. Kết đoạn
- Là câu cuối, kết thúc đoạn văn. Câu này không bắt buộc nên các bạn có thể bỏ qua nếu không tự tin. Tuy nhiên, lưu ý rằng câu kết có thể giúp bù đắp nốt số từ còn thiếu so với yêu cầu, nếu bài của bạn quá ngắn.
- Chỉ bao gồm một câu duy nhất.
- Câu kết thường được viết bằng cách nhắc lại câu chủ đề theo một cách khác (Paraphrase).
- Tương tự như những phần trên trong đoạn văn, câu kết cũng cần phải được bắt đầu bằng một liên từ. Có rất nhiều liên từ dạng này (In conclusion, To conclude, In general, etc.), nhưng các bạn chỉ nên nhớ và sử dụng duy nhất 1 trong số đó cho tất cả các bài viết.
