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nowadays there are some traffic problems in my town if you come to my town you can see some cattle dogs and chickens run along the roads some boys often play football on the roads too in the morning many people sell and buy things on the roads near my house it is very noisy and dangerous. sometimes there are traffic jams people throw litter on the roads and it is very dangerous for people to go through i think every schools in my town should teach the children about the roads safety and the children themselves should obey traffic rules.
Nowadays there are some traffic problems in my town .If you come to my town you can see some cattle dogs and chickens run along the roads. Some boys often play football on the roads too. In the morning many people sell and buy things on the roads near my house. It is very noisy and dangerous. Sometimes there are traffic jams. People throw litter on the roads and it is very dangerous for people to go through. I think every schools in my town should teach the children about the roads safety and the children themselves should obey traffic rules.
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Nowadays there are some traffic problems in my town .If you come to my town you can see some cattle dogs and chickens run along the roads. Some boys often play football on the roads too. In the morning many people sell and buy things on the roads near my house. It is very noisy and dangerous. Sometimes there are traffic jams. People throw litter on the roads and it is very dangerous for people to go through. I think every schools in my town should teach the children about the roads safety and the children themselves should obey traffic rules.
Last year, in 2013, many bridges was built so it happen less but in order to stop this, a kind of small car should be invented, people should go to works by buses instead of going by motorbikes... The second one, as you know, the roads in VN is not as big and clean as the roads in the big countries. They're narrow, bumpy and some dirty so it’s really hard for the road users to drive safely. I think we should raise money to make the road in VN better and better. But everyone knows that Vietnamese people are not respect and don’t follow the traffic rules. That’s the biggest reason for everything. They wear the helmet that not strong enough to keep they safe if the accident may happen, they ride too fast on the small roads… The traffic will never can be improve if they keep doing this. At the end, I hope the traffic in VN will improve more
Nowadays there are some traffic problems in my town .If you come to my town you can see some cattle dogs and chickens run along the roads. Some boys often play football on the roads too. In the morning many people sell and buy things on the roads near my house. It is very noisy and dangerous. Sometimes there are traffic jams. People throw litter on the roads and it is very dangerous for people to go through. I think every schools in my town should teach the children about the roads safety and the children themselves should obey traffic rules.
