Hook: In the present age, homeschooling is paid more attention by society and parents, more and more parents don't send their children to traditional public schools to study, so homeschooling is increasingly prevalent in our lives. Homeschooling is a method of education that children can study knowledge or course at home or community based society from parents but sometimes by tutors. However, whether parents should send children to traditional school to study has become a highly debatable issue. Some people think that the children should go to traditional school to study while many others disagree.
Thesis Statement: Personally, I think homeschooling has more benefits for students for three reasons: custom-designed curriculum, environment and time.
Body
A. Paragraph 2: Topic Sentence: Students or parents can custom-designed curriculum by themselves.
1. Supporting Idea: Homeschooling students can mastery over work at their own level.
2. Supporting Idea: Homeschooling students can move on to another topic anytime
3. Supporting Idea: Each student has their own learning style to get knowledge.
B. Paragraph 3: Topic Sentence: The second advantage is from the environment.
1. Supporting Idea: In the traditional class, students can only touch the illusory, artificial and untruthful environment, but in homeschooling students can touch a real environment.
2. Supporting Idea: Homeschooling students is study in a not test pressure environment, so they are more relaxed than traditional school students.
3. Supporting Idea: Homeschooling students study in an environment with the different level people, it is better for the students to improve themselves.
C. Paragraph 4: Topic Sentence: The last advantage is time.
1. Supporting Idea: The students of homeschooling can control their own time.
2. Supporting Idea: Homeschooling students don't need to spend time traveling to school.
3. Concluding Paragraph (paragraph 5)
A. Restatement of Thesis: Homeschooling is better for the development of their children's ability in the future. Homeschooling is having many benefits.
B. Opinion: In my opinion, the students of homeschooling can have higher ability in the future.
