Question

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Dear sister, I went camping with my class. We are went to Bai Xep in Phu Yen. The weather is very good. In first day, I primarily played camping game and sang songs about campfire. Tomorrow, We are swam in the beach and visited somewhere by bus. Ultimately, We came back. Everything is great but in the camp had some rules.We have to go to bed at ten. We have to help wash up. But we don't have to do the cleaning. I miss you, mum and dad. See you later.

Answer 1

Dear sister ,

I went to camping with my classmates. We went to Bai Xep in Phu Yen. The weather was very good. First day, I played game and sang songs about campfire. Next day, we swim in the beach and visited somewhere by bus. Finally , we came back. Everything was great at the camp had some rulers. We had to went to bed at ten. We had to helped wash up. But we didn't have to do the cleaning. I miss you, mum and dad. See you later.

Kiss

Answer 2

Dear sister,

I went camping with my class. We are went to Bai Xep in Phu Yen. The weather was very good. In first day, I primarily played camping game and sang songs about campfire. Tomorrow, We are swam in the beach and visited somewhere by bus. Ultimately, We came back. Everything was great but in the camp had some rules.We had to went to bed at ten. We had to helped wash up. But we don't had to done the cleaning. I miss you, mum and dad. See you later.