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Each person has dreams, there are very people and they dream that they become richly, but there are people and they dream that they have good jobs and happy family and my dream is simple.
Now, my country has many children who are living very poor. They have not parent or they have lost parent. All most, they are victims of their bad mother. There are mothers after to give birth, they discard their baby at hospital or everywhere they can. These children are lucky, they are accepted by one, other children are not lucky, and they die because they have not mother milk. 
My dream is there are many good people, they will be working for these children to they have happy houses and happy families.


Each person has dreams, there are very people and they dream that they become richly, but there are people and they dream that they have good jobs and happy family and my dream is simple. (*Your sentence is a bit lengthy*)
@ Rewrite: Different people have different dreams. Some people hope that they will become rich in the future. Others dream of having good jobs and happy families. For me, I also have my own dream which is small and simple but really meaningful not only to me but also to the whole society.

Now, my country has many children who are living very poor in poverty. They don't have parents or they have lost parent their parents passed away. All most In some cases, they are even victims of their bad mothers. There are mothers after to give birth, they who mercilessly (nhẫn tâm) discard their babies at hospital or everywhere they can. These children are Lucky children will be adopted accepted by some kind people. The others children who are not lucky will die because they have not lack of mother's milk. 
My dream is there are many good people, they will be working for these children to they have happy houses and happy families.

I understand your idea in the last sentence, but I think it was badly organized. Therefore, I rewrited it for you. :D

Therefore, I hope that there will be a lot of kind-hearted people who are ready to take care of these pitiable  little kids and give them love and happiness.

Good job!!!! :smilie_clap: 
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