Question

Mình có một bài văn tả ngôi trường mơ ước , giúp mình với 

 

Answer 1

 Dinh Tien Hoang Primary School located on high and wide mound at the top of the village. Remote look back, the school as a great landscape painting with bright colors: dark red tiles, color yellow concept stand out from the green-leaved background. Dinh Tien Hoang Primary School located on high and wide mound at the top of the village. Remote look back, the school as a great landscape painting with bright colors: dark red tiles, color yellow concept stand out from the green-leaved background. Through the large iron gates on to the spacious school grounds cemented smoothness. Before managing board room door, steel flag pole rising. On the top, the red flag flutter flying. Each original eagle, phoenixes are original brick circle around inches tall, painted white. School grounds where students focus on information first flag-raising on Monday of each week, as well as where we exercise to the beat of drums and between the hours of comfortable playing under the tree shade. Three two-storey blocks arranged in a u-shape, facing the school yard. The name of each class are noted on the small plaque mounted in front of the classroom. The rooms, bright neon lights soothe, smooth quiet ceiling fans spin serve us learning. Angle class is a display shelf toys, school supplies by the skillful hands of us make. In the middle of the upper wall are photos of Uncle Ho. Uncle looked at her eyes full of love and affection. Townhouse middle office including managing board, board meeting room, traditional rooms and a library. On the price of solid wood house was built at the top of the Clock drums in school, at recess ... crunchy drum pounding, heart tingle nguoi.Sau garden area school classes with a variety of trees, flowers familiar hometown by hand planting and caring students. in the middle of the garden is a playground with slides, seesaw, swings, swing ... Now the players, we were usually out here playing delight. There are schools such condition is due to the efforts of the people and the interest of the local government. I love the children, the school attached to childhood smoothly. Day after day, under the roof of this school, we are learning, fun, should be teachers who teach.

Answer 2

Each person has dreams, there are very people and they dream that they become richly, but there are people and they dream that they have good jobs and happy family and my dream is simple.
Now, my country has many children who are living very poor. They have not parent or they have lost parent. All most, they are victims of their bad mother. There are mothers after to give birth, they discard their baby at hospital or everywhere they can. These children are lucky, they are accepted by one, other children are not lucky, and they die because they have not mother milk. 
My dream is there are many good people, they will be working for these children to they have happy houses and happy families.


Each person has dreams, there are very people and they dream that they become richly, but there are people and they dream that they have good jobs and happy family and my dream is simple. (*Your sentence is a bit lengthy*)
@ Rewrite: Different people have different dreams. Some people hope that they will become rich in the future. Others dream of having good jobs and happy families. For me, I also have my own dream which is small and simple but really meaningful not only to me but also to the whole society.

Now, my country has many children who are living very poor in poverty. They don't have parents or they have lost parent their parents passed away. All most In some cases, they are even victims of their bad mothers. There are mothers after to give birth, they who mercilessly (nhẫn tâm) discard their babies at hospital or everywhere they can. These children are Lucky children will be adopted accepted by some kind people. The others children who are not lucky will die because they have not lack of mother's milk. 
My dream is there are many good people, they will be working for these children to they have happy houses and happy families.

I understand your idea in the last sentence, but I think it was badly organized. Therefore, I rewrited it for you. :D

Therefore, I hope that there will be a lot of kind-hearted people who are ready to take care of these pitiable  little kids and give them love and happiness.

Good job!!!! :smilie_clap: 
Try more!!!

Answer 3

There are many goals in your life and so, the similar dreams to think of. Now, I have dreamed of oneday I come into taking a schoolarship to study abroad. I do know that it's not easy to take such a competitive present as this but I decided thatI must take it . I qualify for a schoolarship. I have tried constantly in managing time to ensure the good school learning result, enough time to enjoy English learning necessary skill, participating in ourdoor activities as well as sharpen my leadship skill. I admit that I have felt despairing several time. I have ever disappointed about myself and thought that I was weak. However, it's very lucky of me to know very good friends who comforted me and inspire me, to know the wonderful teacher, teaching me that ROME WASNOT BUILT IN A DAY. I have told myself that" Shoolarship is for winner and if I stop trying, I am not different from loser". I strongly believe that I deserve a schoolarship. I am talented enough. My determination is strong enough. My perseverance is everlasting.


There are many goals in your life and so, the similar dreams to think of. Now, I have dreamed of oneday I come into taking will win/get a schoolarship to study abroad. ( What do you mean by writing "come into taking"??? Is it true that you want to inherit a scholarship from smb, not try to win one by yourself???? :confused: )

I do know that it's not easy to take such a competitive present as this but I decided that I must take it . I believe that I qualify for a schoolarship. I have tried constantly in managing to manage time to ensure the good school learning results. In addition, I also arrange my plan to have enough time to enjoy English learning necessary skills and to participate participating in ourdoor outdoor activities as well as to sharpen my leadership skill. However, I admit that I have felt despairing several times. I have ever disappointed about myself and thought that I was weak. However, it's very lucky of me to know Luckily, I have many very good friends who (always) comforted me and inspire me. I also have to know the a wonderful teacher who teaching taught me that "ROME WAS NOT BUILT IN A DAY". I have told myself that" Shoolarship Scholarships are presents for winners and if I stop trying, I am will not be much different from losers". I strongly believe that I deserve a schoolarship because I am talented enough. I believe that my strong determination is strong enough and my everlasting perseverance will help me realize my dream some day. 

Good idea and organization!!!!! :smilie_clap: :smilie_clap:

THANKS YOU IF YOU READ IT. 

Answer 4

My dream school is a school with grass, leaves flowers everywhere. Outside the school gates, a road so many flowers that leads to the port. The school also has rocking ones to small for you sit, read a book on the halftime. It also has a greenhouse to grow vegetables, flowers, ... The chairs are placed under the old tree. There will be a fitness pool to help your little exercise. The beautiful bird cages are hung under the trees for school more fun. In the classroom, the small flower pots are placed right on the cứa window. I would like to have a school integration with nature, make up the cool air.

Dịch:
Ngôi trường mơ ước của em là một ngôi trường với cỏ cây, hoa lá ở mọi nơi. Ngoài cổng trường, một con đường rất nhiều hoa dẫn đến cổng. Trong trường còn có những cái xích đu để cho các bạn nhỏ ngồi chơi, đọc sách vào những giờ nghỉ giải lao. Nó còn có nhà kính để trồng rau, hoa,...Những chiếc ghế dài được đặt dưới những gốc cây cổ thụ. Ở sân thể dục sẽ có một hồ bơi để giúp các bạn nhỏ rèn luyện sức khỏe. Những chuồng chim xinh đẹp được treo dưới những cái cây cho sân trường thêm vui vẻ. Trong những lớp học, những chậu hoa nhỏ được đặt ngay bên cứa sổ. Em rất muốn có một ngôi trường hòa nhập với thiên nhiên, tạo nên không khí mát mẻ.