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Of all the sports I know, I like football most. The reason why I like it is the clever cooperation among players. When I was a child, my father taught me to play soccer by letting me kick a ball into the goal. At the present, I usually play football with my friends at weekends. Sometimes I play football with my brother after leaving school to take it easy. It is the fact that playing soccer is a way of exercising and relaxing efficiently. Not only do I like to play it but I also enjoy watching football shows and football matches. I am really addicted to it. Moreover, I am a fan of Manchester United. To sum up, soccer is the most interesting sport I extremely love.
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Among my favourite sports and hobbies, I like swimming the best for several reasons. Firstly, I think playing in the water could bring great joy. It also helps reduce stress and I always feel refreshed and relaxed after swimming for about half an hour. Secondly, swimming is an excellent way to keep myself fit and healthy. It helps build up my muscle strength and prevent many heart and lung diseases. Finally, besides being a great sport, swimming is also an important survival skill, because without knowing how to swim well, it could be dangerous if there is a flood, or simply if we want to play near bodies of water. Many of such accidents have occured to teenagers lately. In conclusion, swimming will always be my preferred hobby because it is not only healthy and fun but also a life-saving skill.
