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Summer vacation is probably the happiest period in my life. The vacation started on 16th May and ended on 9th June.
The purpose of the summer vacation is to tide over the unbearable heat of the summer months. The other purpose is to provide a chance me to make up my deficiency subjects. It also gives an opportunity to me to visit new places.
I visited to my aunty’s home at Dhakuria, Kolkata for 8 days. I enjoyed with my brother-in-law, Saheb by visiting Science City, Victoria Memorial Hall and Nicco Park.
I came back at home stayed for 7 days. Again I visited to my native place, Chandannagar for 9 days. I met with my father-in-law and mother-in-law. I enjoyed with them very much during my holidays.
I returned at home on 1st June. I used to study English, Math and Science very well and completed my Home Work.
The summer vacation was a happy experience for me and its memory is still green in my mind.
Last summer, I went to Hue with my family for three days. We went there by train and it took us eight hours. We studed at Green Hotel. On the first day, we went to Hue Imperial, it's really wonderful place so we took a lot of photos. On the second day's morning, we visited Perfume River and Trang Tien Bridge. Then, we had lunch at a restaurant. After that, we visited Thien Mu Pogoda- the biggest pogoda in Hue. Finally, we went to BigC Supermarket to buy something. On the third day, we went to Dong Ba Market to buy souvernirs for our friends and relatives. At midnight, we came to the train station and come back home. It's a memorable trip and I won't forget it.
Summer vacation the year before , my parents organized for me to go visit the tourism in Nha Trang , Khanh Hoa . To me it is not just a holiday but rather to supplement the knowledge . A nice ,clean waters,romance ,there are many things to discova when they visit Nha Trang , we are extending the vision when exploring the resort . Or ,simply just stroll along the beach and people ,under the non lao created the scene , on the roads very poetic , one side is waves , cool breeze , a side street with magnificent homes .....Yes a very beautiful coastal city ,very impressive .The trip left in me and my family very much impressive and unforgettable memories.
