My routine

Phan Thị Minh Thái

Mọi người hãy nhận xét bài văn này giùm mình, mai mình thi 27/4 rồi. ( từ 60-80 )

Every mornings I get up at five o'clock and do exercise. After thirty minutes doing exercise, I brush my teeth, have a bath then I prepare my breakfast. Next I have breakfast. I usually have a bowl of cereal with orange juice for breakfast. At six o'clock I get dressed then go to school. My father always take me to school.

There are four periods in the morning at school and three periods in the afternoon. Only on Monday afternoon there are four periods. Classes start at seven o'clock in the morning and end at four o'clock in the afternoon. On Monday classes end at ten five. I go home for lunch in the afternoon and have a short rest. I go to school again at one o'clock.

After school I have some snacks and do my homework. Then I take a bath and have dinner with my family. I help my mother to wash the dishes after meal. I go to bed at nine o'clock at night. Tell me about your rountine vui

Lan Anh
26 tháng 12 2016 lúc 16:26

-Bạn nên bỏ câu "Next I have breakfast" sẽ ít lặp từ hơn

-My father always takes me to school.

- I help my mother to wash the dishes after meal --> bỏ to

-I go to bed at nine o'clock at night --> I go to bed at 9p.m sẽ hay hơn

That's all vui

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