Hi, evryone! My name's Alice and I'm from Koearn. I like read comics and playing the piano. In my free time, I litsen to music. This is my bother, Jack. He're 8. He's very funny! What abot you? What's your hobby?

Sửa: Hi, evryone! My name's Alice and I'm from Koearn. I like reading comics and playing the piano. In my free time, I litsening to music. This is my brother, Jack. He's 8. He's very funny! What about you? What's your hobby?

Hi, evryone! My name's Alice and I'm from Koearn. I like read comics and playing the piano. In my free time, I litsen to music. This is my bother, Jack. He're 8. He's very funny! What abot you? What's your hobby?

Sửa: Hi, evryone! My name's Alice and I'm from Koearn. I like reading comics and playing the piano. In my free time, I litsening to music. This is my brother, Jack. He's 8. He's very funny! What about you? What's your hobby?  

Nhớ tick tui nha

Hi, my name is Lily and I am 10. I like playing the piano but I hate playing the guitar. My favorite hobby is taking photos. What do you like doing?

 Hi, my name are Lily and I am 10 year old . I like play the piano but I hate play the guitar. My favourite hobby is take photos. What do you like doing? 

Hi, my name is Lily and I am 10. I like playing the piano but I hate playing the guitar. My favorite hobby is taking photos. What do you like doing?

Hi Peter! It's me, Alice. How are your now? I'm great! How old is your sister now Alex? I guess she nine. You know what? My mom just bought me an pretty dress. Ai very love it! Write to me soon!

                                                                        From/: Alice

                                                                         To/: Alex

Sửa:

your => you (thật ra bỏ now cũng đc)

just bought => bought

Ai => I

Peter => Alex or Alex => Peter

sun => son

meet => meat < Tất cả từ meet đều chuyển thành meat nhé! >

by => buy

Sửa lại: Hi! My name's Lily, Today, I'm going to show you, my Family. This is Jack, my brother, he's my mother's son, and this is Daisy, my little sister, she's eight years old. We love to eat meat, so our mom always buys meat for us to eat. Oh! And my dad too! He loves to eat meat too! That's all I want to show you, goodbye!

1.isn'n -> didn't

2.there are -> are there

3.are -> do

4.you -> your

5.year -> years

1.isn'n sang doesn't

2.there are sang are there

3.are sang do

4.open sang read

5.year sang years

Sai chính tả khá nhiều : "I" là đại từ thì \(\Rightarrow\)phải viết hoa

Từ "years" không có chữ L

Ai mà chẳng biết đến từ Việt Nam mà cần phải nói ? Quan trọng là ở tỉnh nào kìa.

Thôn Vân Phú là chỗ nào ??? Có ở đó thì mới biết , làm như một con người có thể biết rất nhiều thôn mà mình ko ở vậy : ))

Tiếp theo, my father and my mother thì có thể kết hợp thành my parents cho đơn giản. "và tôi" vì là vị ngữ nên phải viết là me.

Còn nữa, "trong thời gian rảnh" chả lẽ tôi luôn làm có hai việc đó à ?! Phải kèm theo những từ chỉ mức độ thường xuyên như " alway, usually, often, some times. ...)

Xong, kb nha : ))

Trời có sao đâu,sao phải chi tiết đến vậy đâu,bn ấy viết như vậy là đc rồi!!!

my family have a four people 

SỬA 

my family have  four people

TL :

Name : Le Hoang Nhat

From : Vietnam

School in Vietnam : University Australia - ECO

School in Japan : Unirversity Tokyo - EFA

hi bạn nha

Hi everyone! My name's Phuong. I'm 9 years old. I'm from Ha Noi, Viet Nam. I'm Vietnamese. I study at Do Thi Viet Hung Primary school. I'm in class 4A7. Nice to meet you. My school is in Thep Moi street. Ok! I say goodbye.