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Game is a computer game, created with the purpose of helping people entertain, relax their mind after stressful working and studying hours. The game is like a kind of temptation, to eliminate the unpredictable consequences. First of all, it affects the player's health. Playing a lot can be short-sighted, lack of sleep, not alert, mentally tired, and can cause depression for a long time. Moreover, playing the game takes time and money. Because of spending too much time on games, students are easily distracted, bogged down in their studies, affecting daily activities. Game addiction is also the cause of many bad habits, which degrades the personality and morality of students. There is no money to play games, many of you lie, steal money from your parents, skip school to play games. The feelings of family, teachers and students are thus torn, leaving wounds that are difficult to heal. Each student in order not to fall into the path of game addiction needs to have a sense of learning, actively practice morality, consider learning as the main task, play games just for entertainment, relieve pressure and have fun games. play accordingly. The suspect game is an alarming icon these days. Let's each be a wise player, returning the game to its original good goal.

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* Introduction: Nowadays both children and adult enjoy play computer games. As for me/ I think / From my point of view, playing computer games has both pros and cons.

* Advantages :

+ Entertainment : After a hard working day or some stressful lessons, playing computer games help us relax.

+ Having more knowledge about computer.

+ There are various types of educational computer games which help them in learning some subjects.

+ Develop some different skills for them

* Disadvantages:

+ Playing computer games too much make us addicted and passive

+ It wastes of time

+ Playing computer games too much is bad for their health . There will be some diseases such as short- sighted, headache, backache,....

+ Some games contain violence or crime. Thus, the evil influence of computer games on young generation is inevitable.

* Sum up: All things are considered, everything has two sides: advantages and disadvantages. Computer games will be useful for us only if we know how to spend time on it sensibly.

Tham khảo:

Nowadays, children tend to spend more time on computer. Many of them play computer almost every day. Nobody can deny the valuable benefits of computers. However, everything has its limit. Personally, I think it is more negative than positive. \n\n\nWhen kids spend time sitting in front of the screen every day, they put their health at risk. Staring at screen every day severely damages their eyes. Besides, the fact that sitting for too long and health problems fatigue, diabetes, heart disease, musculoskeletal pain are closely linked is proved by scientists. As a result, spending so much time using computers, children nowadays are not as strong and active as their parents in the past. \n\n\nUsing computer every day prevents children from enjoying their childhood. Children who use computers so much certainly have less time playing and interact with others around them. These children have little chance of having many close friends, which makes their lives so boring. It also contributes to their shyness, selfishness, insensitivity and lack of social skills. They are just interested in their computer and spend little time trying to understand people and exploring the world around them. Thus, their emotion is poor. They are not able to experience all the wonderful feelings and beautiful things they deserve to have.\n\n\nUsing computer every day means little time left for children to learn. Focusing too much on computer has bad influence on children’s academic reputation because it takes up children’s time for revising lessons and doing homework. It is terrible as studying is important for children. In addition, children who use computer every day do not have much time to learn from other people, reality. Therefore, they lack certain skills for everyday life.\n\n\nIn conclusion, using computer everydays does children more harm than good. So instead of letting children using computer every day parents should encourage them to take part in other activities and hanging out with friend.

Computer games are very fun and interesting.But in my opinion,computer games also has many disadvantages.

Firstly,it wastes of our time.We often have to spend much time playing it in order to win games.Moreover,Playing computer games is addictive.It is not good for everybody.

Secondly,Playing computer games too much is not good for our eyes,our healthy.We can be nearsighted by computer use for a long time and are obese due to sitting a long time.

Thirdly,playing games too much can make academic achievement drop

Therefore,I think computer games are not good.In my opinion,students should take part in sports or energy activities,such as: basketball,volleyball,football,badminton,...They are very fun and energetic.Moreover,they can help us lose weight and increase height.Playing games are so fun but should not be too much and should be reasonable

The world is changing we all need better and comfortable life full of taste in this rapid change we all forgets one thing on which we have to focus that is our health we all love to eat spicy and sweet food like pizzas burgers noodles french fries potato cheese and most famous Indian aloo tikki but we all need to know that these all fall under the category of the junk food which along with soft drinks results in health hazards life malnutrition obesity hypertension higher amount of bad cholesterol list of heart and diabetes it is not an occasional Intex but the binge of fast food is harmful life is not always tasteful and it is necessary to take care of our health, eat healthy food, eat fresh and green vegetable

Do you like to play video games? There are benefits of playing video, but there are so many harm of it, too. I find playing video games very interesting. It helps me to feel relaxative after each day I have learned at school. I usually like to play chess. It is challenging and exciting. It helps me to think over everything before acting. But I always limit my time of playing video games. Because I find playing too much video games makes me tired. My eyes are often soring. My mother always reminds me of learning hard, so I know what is the most important to me. Playing video games only helps me to relax a little. So I advise you to working hard at school, and just spend a little time playing video games, although how much you like it.

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