Hi everybody! I am Lan, I live with my family, my husband and 2 children. We live in a small house in the center of Hanoi. My house is small but it is very beautiful. There are 3 floors in the house and it has 3 bed rooms, one kitchen and living room together, others is bed rooms. It is not a fantastic house but comfortable. In my bedroom, we has bed, wardrobe, a piano, desk and computer, TV, CD payer…. The living room is small but it is very nice and the kitchen is very convenient. In bed room of my children, there is bed, desk and or wardrobe. In fact, it has very litter of decorating things like pictures or painting. I prefer the comfortable than the fabilous. My house also has a small garden with some trees and flowers that my husband is planted. My house isn’t large but it very beautiful, and I love this house so much. My husband and I had try so much to get it and the most important thing it is the place where all members of my family share the happiness and sadness and hurts together.

My dream house is a large villa. It is near the coast, surrounded by rows of coconut trees and the blue sea. There are sixteen rooms in my house and half of them for relaxation and entertainment. It has a big garage so that I can store my super cars trere. My house has wind power or solar energy. I use hi-tech and automa machines such as a smart clock, morden fridge, automa dishwasher and washing machine. They can be controlled by voice and help me tell the time, forecast weather, preserve food and wash dishes and clothes. There is a super smart TV in my house. I might surf the internet, watch my favourite TV programme from space or contact friends on other planets by this fantasic TV. I might aloso join online classes on TV and not have to go to school.

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NẾU ĐƯỢC THÌ THANK NHA

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Ngôi nhà mơ ước của tôi là một biệt thự lớn. Nó nằm gần bờ biển, được bao quanh bởi những hàng cây dừa và biển xanh. Có mười sáu phòng trong nhà tôi và một nửa trong số đó để thư giãn và giải trí. Nó có một nhà để xe lớn để tôi có thể lưu trữ siêu xe của mình. Nhà tôi có năng lượng gió hoặc năng lượng mặt trời. Tôi sử dụng các máy công nghệ cao và tự động như đồng hồ thông minh, tủ lạnh hiện đại, máy rửa chén tự động và máy giặt. Chúng có thể được điều khiển bằng giọng nói và giúp tôi biết thời gian, dự báo thời tiết, bảo quản thực phẩm và rửa chén bát và quần áo. Có một chiếc TV siêu thông minh trong nhà tôi. Tôi có thể lướt internet, xem chương trình TV yêu thích của mình từ không gian hoặc liên lạc với bạn bè trên các hành tinh khác bằng chiếc TV tuyệt vời này. Tôi có thể tham gia các lớp học trực tuyến trên TV và không phải đến trường.

My future house will be a mansion, it's like the sun, but it will be on the moon, around my future house is a big old tree with many brilliant flowers, before The house will have a fruit-filled orchard with a play area, behind the house there will be a swimming pool. The inside of the house is very modern, it has enough machines such as: wireless TV, washing machine, ... and a robot. The robot is very friendly, it will always help me with all the housework and drive me to school. I love my future home very much

House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live, so do I. I enjoy to live in calm and open environment, so house built on small land won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound where I can stroll especially when I feel bored on my job. I want the garden in front of my house which will give me natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't the noisy environment.Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size house having 2 or 3 floors. I don't very large building because I have small family and I don't to rent my home. I prefer to stay in second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floor is excessively heated during the very season whereas I to stay in second or third floor during the winter as ground floor will be excessively cold during that period. Next thing is about gym room, I would to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person. 

I have mentioned so many physical needs in my above paragraph but I would to conculde my writing saying cool and amicable family environment is must to make our home a heaven. Otherwise, it will be a hell and we would to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with family.

   House is the place to stay together with part of our family. A good house is the house that makes the dweller fells so comfortable. My dream house is the house that has complete facility and wide garden. I want to try my best to get my dream house in my future later on.

            Actually, my dream house is so simple to make if I have a lot of money. Because I ‘m Balinese, I will build my house use Bali style because I am proud as Balinese, it means I respect Bali culture as my culture. In the first floor of my house I want to have six bedrooms, one bedroom for my parents, one bedroom for me, and the other bedroom for my children later on. In every bedroom I want to have complete furniture and facilities such as there are bathrooms, table, chair, television, etc. In every bathroom there are complete facilities such as shower, the thing that use to organize temperature of the water so that I enjoy when take a bath. In the kitchen of my house I want to have complete facilities such as refrigerator to put the foods, vegetable, meat, eggs, cold drink, etc, the stove to cook everyday and the other facility.

            In the second floor of my house I will make a big living room, the purpose just as a place together with part of my family. In every side of the second floor there are many windows, the purpose just so that I can enjoy the view from the second floor. In the right side of my house I will make a wide garden filled with complete kind of fruits. Behind of my house I will make swimming pool and small football yard. Because my hobby is playing football I will use that yard to play football together with my friends after work, my life cannot be separated from football. If we already get a lot of sweet we will swim together. Have you ever imagined to have your dream house? I think you will enjoy your daily activity at home and that is heaven of world. I know to make my dream house will not be easy for me because it needs a lot of money , to get a lot of money the first thing that should I do is I must be successful. I want to make my family, friends, and the other that I love proud to me.

            “Home sweet home” is a word that really could express your feeling to have such a great house. My dream house is the house that makes me and my family feels comfortable; enjoy the situation, and safe. Although just small house it can be my dream house for me because the most important things for me is togetherness with part of my family. Luxury house is not always comfortable for me.

đúng nha

Here is my writing on the "My Dream House". I would be grateful if someone would review my essay and give me feedback on the sentence structure and grammar of writing.

My Dream House

House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live, so do I. I enjoy to live in calm and open environment, so house built on small land won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound where I can stroll especially when I feel bored on my job. I want the garden in front of my house which will give me natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't the noisy environment.Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size house having 2 or 3 floors. I don't very large building because I have small family and I don't to rent my home. I prefer to stay in second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floor is excessively heated during the very season whereas I to stay in second or third floor during the winter as ground floor will be excessively cold during that period. Next thing is about gym room, I would to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person. 

I have mentioned so many physical needs in my above paragraph but I would to conculde my writing saying cool and amicable family environment is must to make our home a heaven. Otherwise, it will be a hell and we would to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with family.

My dream house is a villa. It is on Moon. It is very beautiful. Is will be surrounded by tall trees. They will be a swimming pool behind and a flower garden  with many lovely flowers next to  the house. There will be a car in front of. There are 10 room: two living room, three bathroom, a kitchen and  five bedroom. My bedroom is on the second floor. They is a bed, a desk, a lamp. The picture on the wall and a TV . But the kitchen best. Because is has modern equipment: a diskwasher, a refrigerator, a electric stove. They will be some robots in the house. They will help me do the housework, such as : cleaning the floolrs, cooking meals,... I will have wireless TV to watching TV programmes from the space. It will also  help me surf the internet, play games, ... I love my future house.

CHÚC BẠN HỌC GIỎI NHÉ ^.^

k đúng cho mình, mình sẽ viết cho bạn.

I always dream of having my own house. It will be a three floor in my village. There will be a garden in front of the house ang a pond behind it. In the pond I will keep some fish. Everyday I will feed them. I will also grow flowers ang fruit trees in the garden. I really like apples as eating them may help me lose weight. Pomelo is also a good choice, so I will grow it too. There will be full of furniture inside the house. There will be a washing machine to help me wash clothes, a dishwasher to help me wash the dishes. In the bed room there will be an air conditioner, so the summer will no so terrible. It will be a lovely house.

Tick cho mik nha!!!!!!!

If I could create my own dream house for my future, I would need a lot of money to make it perfect.

I’ve always expected my dream house would be big, not like a villa, but bigger than normal family houses. When I dream about my future house, I always see the colour light blue in front of me. So my dream house shall be light blue outside and surrounded with lovely pink and blue flowers. The furniture inside would be dark brown and in an antique style. It shouldn’t remind me of a modern interior. A little garden has to be included.

In my dream my future home isn’t placed in a crowded city, I’d prefer to live in the countryside but not too far away from the stores as I’d like to be able to walk or cycle to go food shopping. It would be great if the next house were placed 50m from me so I could have enough privacy and it would be wonderful to have nice neighbours in case I ever need help.

In conclusion I hope I’ll have a great job someday to realise my dream house because I can think of nothing more important than to raise a family and get old in a wonderful home that I’ve dreamt up. I can’t wait!

House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live, so do I. I enjoy to live in calm and open environment, so house built on small land won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound where I can stroll especially when I feel bored on my job. I want the garden in front of my house which will give me natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't like the noisy environment.Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size house having 2 or 3 floors. I don't like very large building because I have small family and I don't like to rent my home. I prefer to stay in second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floor is excessively heated during the very season whereas I like to stay in second or third floor during the winter as ground floor will be excessively cold during that period. Next thing is about gym room, I would like to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person. 

I have mentioned so many physical needs in my above paragraph but I would like to conculde my writing saying cool and amicable family environment is must to make our home like a heaven. Otherwise, it will be a hell and we would like to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with family.
 

My dream house is a villa on the moon. There will be a lot of tall buildings and green trees. It will be very bis with 10 rooms. I will use solar energy travel by plance. I think I will like my bedroom best because the will be much morderm furniture in it, such as: a cable TV, a washing machine, an air conditional, the Interet and soon. I will suft the web’s communicate with people all over the world.

House is a place where we can shelter and it gives us a protection from rain, heat , storm etc. Everyone has their own choice on what type of house they feel comfortable to live in, so do I. I enjoy to live living in a calm and open environment, so house built on small land (I'm not sure what you mean by 'small land' here) won't be my choice. I want a large open space surrounded by compound, where I can stroll, especially when I feel bored on at my job. I want the a garden in front of my house, which will give me a natural environment. One more thing to mention here, I want the a house which is far from main city and industrial area since I don't like the a noisy environment. Oh, yeah, what about the size of the house? I prefer the medium size of the house having,which has 2 or 3 floors in it. I don't like very large buildings because I have small family and I don't like to rent my home. I prefer to stay in on the second or ground floor during the summer season because the top floors is excessively heated heat up excessively during the very hot season, whereas I like to stay in on the second or third floor during the winter, as the ground floor will be becomes excessively cold during that period. (Try to shorten this sentence or divide it into two) Next thing is about a gym room, I would like to have a fitness center within my premise as I am a young boy and I want to be a healthy person.

I have mentioned so many physical needs (you mentioned only one of them, actually, - shelter) in my above paragraph (in my paragraph above), but I would like to conculde conclude my writing essay by saying that a cool and amicable family environment is must to should make our homes feel like a heaven. Otherwise, it will would be a hell, and we would like to spend most of our time outside the home rather than with our familyies.

In the future, I will live in a hi-tech house. It might be by the sea and it's will be surrounded by the blue sea. There are twenty rooms in my house. My house will has a big garage so that I can store my super cars. My future house will have wind and solar energy. I will use hi-tech and automatic machines such as a smart clock, modern fridge, and so on. There is a super smart TV in my house. I might surf the internet, watch my favourite TV programme from space or contact friends on other planets on this TV. I might also join online classes on TV and not have to go to school. I love my house very much.

My dream house is a large villa. It is near the coast, surrounded by rows of coconut trees and the blue sea. There are sixteen rooms in my house and half of them for relaxation and entertainment. It has a big garage so that I can store my super cars trere. My house has wind power or solar energy. I use hi-tech and automatic machines such as a smart clock, morden fridge, automatic dishwasher and washing machine. They can be controlled by voice and help me tell the time, forecast weather, preserve food and wash dishes and clothes. There is a super smart TV in my house. I might surf the internet, watch my favourite TV programme from space or contact friends on other planets by this fantasic TV. I might aloso join online classes on TV and not have to go to school.

I live in a big house in the countryside and it is very beautiful. It has a living room, a kitchen, three bedrooms and two bathrooms. In the living room, there is a table, four chairs, a television and an air conditioner. My bedroom is very nice. There is a computer, a bed, a lamp and two pictures on the wall. And a bookshelf above the table, some teddy bears on the bed and a wardrobe. The kitchen has a refrigerator, a stove and a sink. Next to the kitchen is the bathroom. It has a shower, a washing machine and a tub. I love my house very much.