Hi, my name's Alex and I'm a teenagers. In my free time, I often play basketball and listening to music. This is my sister, Clarie. She's nice. She hates playing basketball but she likes taking photos. What about you? What do you like doing in your free time?

Hi, my name's Alex and I'm a (teenagers -> teenager). In my free time, I often played (baketsball -> basketball) and (listening-> listen) (too -> to) music. This is my sister, Clarie. She's nine. She (hate -> hates) playing basketball but she likes taking (photoos -> photos) . What about you? What do you like doing in your (fere -> free) time?

Hi, my name's Alex and I'm a teenager. In my free time, I often played basketball and listened to music. This is my sister, Clarie. She's nine. She hates playing basketball but she likes taking photos. What about you? What do you like doing in your free time?

Hi, my name is Lily and I am 10. I like playing the piano but I hate playing the guitar. My favorite hobby is taking photos. What do you like doing?

 Hi, my name are Lily and I am 10 year old . I like play the piano but I hate play the guitar. My favourite hobby is take photos. What do you like doing? 

Hi, my name is Lily and I am 10. I like playing the piano but I hate playing the guitar. My favorite hobby is taking photos. What do you like doing?

Hi Peter! It's me, Alice. How are your now? I'm great! How old is your sister now Alex? I guess she nine. You know what? My mom just bought me an pretty dress. Ai very love it! Write to me soon!

                                                                        From/: Alice

                                                                         To/: Alex

Sửa:

your => you (thật ra bỏ now cũng đc)

just bought => bought

Ai => I

Peter => Alex or Alex => Peter

hi everyon my name is thao .i'm 10 years old .i'm from nha trang city. i study english edupia and i enjoy play table tennis.last month i study at home to covid 19 .but now i can come back to school and i am so happy.

last month i study at home to covid 19 => 

last month I studied at home because of covid-19 to now

Dịch:tháng trước tôi đã học ở nhà vì covid-19 đến bây giờ

Bạn nên viết hoa sau dấu chấm nhé!Mik chỉ sửa theo ý nghĩa của các câu mong bạn thông cảm!

Hi everyone ! My name is Thao. I am 10 years old. I come from Nha Trang city. I studying English in Edupia and I  playing table tennis. Last month, I studied at home because of 19 covid disease. But now I can go back to school and I'm very happy.

Hằng ơi,everyne mà bn!

hello my name's linh I'm from Vietnamese . My family have 4 peoples. I'm eleven yeas old. I'm study in Trung Son primaryscholo.I'm in class 5A1.I live in Aỉ Quang village.I read comic book and book tory. I liki foball .I watch cartoons on tv.I eat beef and apple jucis.I swim in the sea ,and you ?

hello my name's linh I'm from Vietnamese . My family has 4 peoples. I'm eleven yeas old. I'm study in Trung Son primaryscholo.I'm in class 5A1.I live in Aỉ Quang village.I reading comic book and book tory. I football .I watching cartoons on tv.I  eating beef and apple jucis.I swiming in the sea ,and you ?

học tốt

Hello.My name's Linh. I'm from Vietnam . My family has 4 people. I'm eleven years old. I'm studying in Trung Son primary school.I'm studying in class 5A1.I live in Aỉ Quang village.I reading comic book and book story. I  football .I watching cartoons on TV.I eating beef and apple juice.I swimming in the sea ,and you ?

Tớ đã sửa luôn lỗi rồi nhé!

hello my name's linh I'm from Vietnamese . My family have 4 peoples. I'm eleven yeas old. I'm study in Trung Son primaryscholo.I'm in class 5A1.I live in Aỉ Quang village.I read comic book and book tory. I liki foball .I cwatch artoons on tv.I eat beef and apple jucis.I swim in the sea ,and you ?

Trong đó : hello = Hello ; linh = Linh ; Vietnamese = Vietnam ; yeas = years ; primaryscholo = primary school ; Aỉ  = Ai ; tory = story ; liki = ; foball = football ; watch = watching ; tv = TV ; eat = eating ; jucis = juice.

Những chỗ sai là :

Years old ; primaryschool ; book story ; like football ; juice

Những từ in đậm là từ thiếu

peoples\(\rightarrow\)people

yeas\(\rightarrow\)years

scholo\(\rightarrow\)school

read\(\rightarrow\)reading

tory\(\rightarrow\)story

liki\(\rightarrow\)

foball\(\rightarrow\)football

watch\(\rightarrow\)watching

tv\(\rightarrow\)TV

eat\(\rightarrow\)eating

jucis\(\rightarrow\)juice

swim\(\rightarrow\)swimming

Good luck

mk đồng ý với bạn Đỗ Đường Quyền

1.isn'n -> didn't

2.there are -> are there

3.are -> do

4.you -> your

5.year -> years

1.isn'n sang doesn't

2.there are sang are there

3.are sang do

4.open sang read

5.year sang years

sun => son

meet => meat < Tất cả từ meet đều chuyển thành meat nhé! >

by => buy

Sửa lại: Hi! My name's Lily, Today, I'm going to show you, my Family. This is Jack, my brother, he's my mother's son, and this is Daisy, my little sister, she's eight years old. We love to eat meat, so our mom always buys meat for us to eat. Oh! And my dad too! He loves to eat meat too! That's all I want to show you, goodbye!

I study in a very comfortable school. It has a lot of things: swimming pool, music club, each class has an air conditioner, students can eat things in the backyard cafeteria, soccer court, basketball court, Fully equipped labs...I love my school

xog r bạn ơi 

You know, my school is not as beautiful as the others, but I still it. The school will have a lot of great things a big yard, lots of flowers and even dogs there will have a library and coffee shop so we can eat and do homework. There is also a swimming pool, a music club, a sports court, and every one with air conditioning, students can eat whatever they want in the cafeteria even if you think it's crazy. but i still love it

dịch

 bạn biết đấy ngôi trrường mơ ước của tôi không đẹp như những ngôi trrường khác nhưng tôi vẫn thích nó. trường sẽ có rất nhiều thứ tuyệt vời như một cái sân thiệt là to, cùng với rất nhiều hoa và cả những chú chó nữa ở đó sẽ có cả thư việc và quán cà phê để chúng tôi có thể ăn và làm bài tập hoặc nhiều việc khác nữa và sẽ bể bơi , có câu lạc bộ âm nhạc ,có sân thể thao , mỗi lớp có  1 chiếc điều hòa ,học sinh có thể ăn các thứ họ muốn ở  căn tin  kể cả khi bạn có nghĩ điều đó là điên rồ nhưng tôi vẫn yêu nó

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