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I like PLC SYDNEY because here the students can decorate their classroom .It help students create those belongings 

sai rồi  em, sau because phải là 1 mệnh đề còn here là trạng từ 

I like PLC SYDEY because the students can decorate their classroom. It helps students create those belongings

à ! đặt here phía sau their classroom

Hi, I'm Linh. And today, I want to share everyone some of my hobbies and habits. Of all the four seasons, autumn is my favorite season. For me, autumn is very special, because it is the time of the school year, the aspirations, dreams. I return to school with a new excitement, determination and yearning for school with full of energy. I love autumn. I do not know exactly when but it gives me a sense of strange peace. In the =>x autumn in the North, cool winds bring the scent of new paddy fields or guava flavors in the garden. These are also the famous features of my hometown that I love the =>x most. Later, I will probably never forget the autumn that have been associated with my youth. Above all, autumn has extremely pleasant weather. Yes, I love the cool and mild weather of autumn. It would be great if in the weather, the comfortable atmosphere of autumn, I can sit and watch TV with family or friends. My favorite TV shows are thrilling/animation movies and music on VTV and surf the Internet. On weekends, I often do sports and play chess with my father watch movies with my family=>lặp . In addition, I also take time for myself =>I also spend time for a lot of interesting activites such as reading books, listening to music and completing some exercises. It can be said that this is the happiest time for me. Thank you for listening to my share.

cicema -> cinema

I have double kets for the cicema

sửa lại   I have double kets for the cinema 

học tốt

sửa lại: I have double kets for the cinema

mình nghĩ là

Câu d.

đúng ấy

Sai ở "was intruded" và sửa lại thành "intruded".

bỏ đuôi ing ở từ lolunteering

sửa  = I to volunteer in the future because I want to see smiles from the people I help

sửa

i would to do volunteering in the future because i want to see smiles from people i helped

 ko chắc lắm

không ghi được chữ,ghi ra rồi nó biết mất,thông cảm nha