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[Letter - To friend informing about your new house] #1 (permalink) Wed Nov 19, 2014 17:56 pm Letter - To friend informing about your new house
Hi Luschen,

I have written this letter, request you rate this on scale of 0-9.

You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In letter
1. Explain why you have moved
2. Describe the new house
3. Invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Dan,

I am writing this letter to give you great news on my newly purchased house. I hope you are doing well and sorry for not being in touch for such a long time. I was too busy in moving to new house.

As you know, our old house was not that specious and had only two bedrooms. With addition my baby girl we needed a bigger house. Neighborhood was also not that great and it was very far from Ben's office. It took long time to buy this new house, but believe me this is great one! My son is very happy to be at this new house. We have 3 specious bedrooms, a big size living and dining room and a fully equipped kitchen. My baby girl has a great space to crawl. It has a small backyard with a pet house for our doggy - Raju.

More importantly, this new house is very close to Ben's office. Now he is starting late to office and reaching back home early. Ben is also happy to give quality time for us, instead of wasting his time on long travel and traffic jams.

This Sunday, if you are available please visit our new house; I am sure you will like it.
We can have a lunch together with our families. We will also like to get your creative ideas for decorating our kid's rooms. Please find the address as below.

E8-1103, Lake Town, Near Hyde Park, Harrow.

See you soon!

Lots of love
Suzane

From: cophan369@gmail.com

To: nick@outmail.com

Hi Nick,

Thanks for your email. Your room is so crazy, isn't it? Now, I'd like to tell you about my idea for the new room of the Crazy House hotel. Its name is Elephant Room. I choose Elephant Room because I love elephants.

The reason why people call 'Elephant Room' is there's a big elephant poster on the wall. I read a lot of books about elephant. Each elephant 's weight is 3 to 4 tons, but they are afraid of ants which is much smaller than elephants.

Let me describe Elephant Room. I strongly believe that Elephant Room is huge and modern. And I must admit. I think that there will be a big brown door and a huge window. That huge window will be made from glass. There will be a big elephant poster on the wall. There will be a bed in front of the window. The bed will be between two chests of drawers. The desk will at the corner of the room. There will be a desktop on the desk. We use it to play computer games. There will be a bookshelf next to the desk.

In the future, I am going to stay in Elephant Room. Because it is huge and modern.

Love,

Dear Dan,

I am writing this letter to give you great news on my newly purchased house. I hope you are doing well and sorry for not being in touch for such a long time. I was too busy in moving to new house.

As you know, our old house was not that specious and had only two bedrooms. With addition my baby girl we needed a bigger house. Neighborhood was also not that great and it was very far from Ben's office. It took long time to buy this new house, but believe me this is great one! My son is very happy to be at this new house. We have 3 specious bedrooms, a big size living and dining room and a fully equipped kitchen. My baby girl has a great space to crawl. It has a small backyard with a pet house for our doggy - Raju.

More importantly, this new house is very close to Ben's office. Now he is starting late to office and reaching back home early. Ben is also happy to give quality time for us, instead of wasting his time on long travel and traffic jams.

This Sunday, if you are available please visit our new house; I am sure you will like it.
We can have a lunch together with our families. We will also like to get your creative ideas for decorating our kid's rooms. Please find the address as below.

E8-1103, Lake Town, Near Hyde Park, Harrow.

See you soon!

Lots of love
Suzane

Câu 2

Describe a bedroom

Like a paradise, my room is the only place where I feel free, warm and comfotable for relaxing after a tiring day at school.
My room has simple design and everything looks neat and clear. It's a beautiful room because it is decorated by myself. I use bright color for the wall and blue ties to inspire an intimate feeling to the space. Besides, my room looks warm and airy with two huge windows on the two sides of the room , and some lamps on the walls . I like the computer in my room most because it helps me a lot for my study.
In my house I like my room most, I can do everything in it. I'm the owner of my own space so I always try to keep it clear and neat

Dịch

Giống như một thiên đường, căn phòng của tôi là nơi duy nhất mà tôi cảm thấy tự do, ấm cúng và thoải mái để thư giãn sau một ngày mệt mỏi ở trường.
Phòng của tôi có thiết kế đơn giản và mọi thứ trông gọn gàng và rõ ràng. Đó là một phòng đẹp bởi vì nó được trang trí bởi chính tôi. Tôi sử dụng màu sáng cho tường và các mối quan hệ màu xanh lam để truyền cảm hứng cho một cảm giác thân mật vào không gian. Bên cạnh đó, phòng của tôi trông ấm áp và thoáng mát với hai cửa sổ lớn ở hai bên phòng và một số đèn trên tường. Tôi thích máy tính trong phòng của tôi bởi vì nó giúp tôi rất nhiều cho việc học của tôi.
Trong nhà tôi thích phòng nhất, tôi có thể làm mọi thứ trong đó. Tôi là chủ nhân của không gian riêng của tôi. Tôi luôn cố gắng giữ cho nó rõ ràng và gọn gàng

My favorite room in my house would be my room. It is the biggest in the house and I adore my room an I am always there in my room and never really get out. I love my room I get really distracted doing things because I am always there. I do a lot of things and it's very nice and beautiful.

My room is awesome I love how I have it all decorated I have hanging hearts in the ceiling. Also, I have the biggest bed ever and my blanket is of guitars because I love guitars and my curtains match the carpet too. I have a lot of makeup bags and nail polishes all over I have jewelry hanging and a lot of designs in my room. My walls are are full of posters an my walls are colorful. 

I love my room and I have magazines a lot actually and bags hanging all over as much as shoes all over the place. I have a big closet and it's packed of so much clothes and purses as much as shoes. I have scarfs hanging in this colorful lamp and I have a flat screen tv. hanging in my wall and I love to watch movies and put music. Also I have three big radios because I have a lot of cd's and I love to put the music all loud.

Được rồi, mình sẽ cho bạn tham khảo bài này nha!

From: cophan369@gmail.com

To: nick@outmail.com

Hi Nick,

Thanks for your email. Your room is so crazy, isn't it? Now, I'd like to tell you about my idea for the new room of the Crazy House hotel. Its name is Elephant Room. I choose Elephant Room because I love elephants.

The reason why people call 'Elephant Room' is there's a big elephant poster on the wall. I read a lot of books about elephant. Each elephant 's weight is 3 to 4 tons, but they are afraid of ants which is much smaller than elephants.

Let me describe Elephant Room. I strongly believe that Elephant Room is huge and modern. And I must admit. I think that there will be a big brown door and a huge window. That huge window will be made from glass. There will be a big elephant poster on the wall. There will be a bed in front of the window. The bed will be between two chests of drawers. The desk will at the corner of the room. There will be a desktop on the desk. We use it to play computer games. There will be a bookshelf next to the desk.

In the future, I am going to stay in Elephant Room. Because it is huge and modern.

Love,

...

I´m going to describe my house

My house is near fair-ground of getafe — My house is near El Recinto Ferial, an area in Getafe.
My house is in on the a ground floor. It is a medium-size house.
When you come in, there is a small hall. In front of / Next to the hall, there is a dining room. In the dining room you can find a black sofa, a table with chairs, a big TV set and a sunny big balcony of 70 square meters. On the left, you can find the kitchen. It’s very small.
My house has 3 bedrooms. The first room is mine. In my bedroom there is a computer and a single bed. The next room is my parent’s bedroom. it has a double bed. and the last bedroom is a the guest room
My house is nice, bright and very cosy!

Tham khảo

From:

To:

Subject: My  bedroom

Hello, linh

How are you today?I will tell you about my bedrooom.My bedroom is big and beautiful. Its white and blue.There ia a bed ,a table , a chair, a computer and awindow in my bedroom. There are two pillows and a blanket on my bed.I can play games and sleep there. Its clean and tidy. I always clean my bedroom.

I love my bedroom so much. Its my small house. Its very comfortable.

Can you tell me about your bedroom?Is it beautiful?

please write to me soon

Yours,

Nhung

nhớ mình nha

Hi Azura,

It has been an ages since I last saw you. How are you doing? I'm good.

Do you want me to tell you about my favorite room in my house. It is my bedroom. 

a paradise, my room is the only place where I feel free, warm and comfotable for relaxing after a tiring day at school. My room has a special design with the dominant color is blue - makes you feel cozy. It is a splendid bedroom because it was decorated by myself. My room looks warm and airy with a huge window which has a great view of the garden. There are some lovely picture on the wall, too. There are a laptop and a desktop on my table that serve for my studies at school and at home, too. My bed is placed in the corner of the room. There are also some boxed which contain some old things and many stamps.

I think that my sharing will help you to know more about me.

Love,

Auretha.

Dear trang!

    How are you ? I'm very happy to receive your e mail. Now I will tell you about my favourite room in my house.

    Now,I'm staying with my parents in a big house.There are 3 floors with many rooms in my house.But I my bedroom best. It's on the second floor.My bed is in the middle of the room. On my bed are 2 pillows,a pink bedspread and a blanket.Beside the bed is a night table with a clock and a lamp on it.There is a shelf above the bed. Many books are on the shelf. My desk is at the corner. On the table is a desklamp and a shelf of some tools for my learning.There is a chair near the table. Next to my desk is a big window. There are some plants on the window frame. The pink curtain is in front of the window.In my bedroom,there is a wardrobe with a lot of drawers and closets. To the left is a toy chest with many teddybears and books.The clock is on the wall.There are some photographs of me and my family under the clock. And the air-conditioner is near the clock. My bedroom is yellow.It's very large and comfortable. That is the reason why I love my bedroom the most in my house.

     What is your house ? Write to me more about it next time.Bye!!!

         Cheers

         thao vy

Part 2: Use the suggested words to write an e-mail to Nick (10pts)

 Hi Nick,

 1. Thank you / your e-mail .Thanks for your email.

 2. Now, I/ tell/you/my house .Now I will tell you about my house

 3. I/ live/parents and younger sister / town house .I live with my parents and younger brother in a town house

 4. It /big. There / six rooms / a livingroom / a kitchen/ two bedrooms/ two bathrooms.It’s big. There are six rooms: a living room, a kitchen, two bedrooms and two bathrooms.

 5. We/moving/an apartment/soon. What / you ?We’re moving to an apartment soon.What about you?

 6. Where / you / live ? Tell / me /your next e-mail .Where do you live? Tell me in your next email.

  Bestwishes,

  Mi

1, Thank you for ur email.

2, Now, I will tell you about my house.

3, I live with my parents and my younger sister in a town house.

4, It is big. There are six rooms, including a living room, a kitchen, 2 bedrooms and 2 bathrooms.

5, We are moving to an apartment soon. What about you?

6, Where do you live? Tell me in ur next email.

Best wishses, 

MI

hello

What is your favourite room?my favourite room is a dining room. It has a big table and four chair. the wall is my favourite color, that is yellow. In the wall, there is the clock,

Dear Linh/Lan/Peter/….. ,

Yesterday my family moved to a new mansion near the beach which has many rooms. My favourite one is  my bedroom.

It’s on the second floor, opposite to a bathroom so it’s quite convenient to go to the restroom whenever I want. It doesn’t have many furniture: a small desk at the corner of the room, a wardrobe where I put my clothes and some of my teddy bears and a warm bed. Although it looks plain at first, but then I decorated it with some hand – made flowers so it looks amazing now.

Please send me your letter as soon as posible.

Best regards,

Huong/Mary/Jasmine/…