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Hello,I am Hieu. Now, I want introduce of my family. My family has
four people,  including my Dad, my Mom, Brother and Me. My
Dad is tall, the hairs are black and short. He is a teacher. My
Mom is 34 years old, she has a long hairs and black too. My
brother is like playing soccer and me too, my Brother is
short, he is seven years old and he is a pupil in Ky Thinh 1
primary school. Oh, it is 21:07, it is time for bed, good night
my family, good night my friends, see you later.

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I am Hoa. I live in hanoi . It is very beautiful city on the bank of the Red River . Thang Long bridge iss the longest one in Hanoi. Hanoi has lots of lakes and parks. We often go to the parks and zoos on Sunday. The parks in hanoi have lots of trees . They are very big and green.There are many kinds of beautiful flowers in the parks . I like Thu Le zoo very much because it has a lot of different animals, especially monkeys my favorite animal.

1) What/Hanoi/like?

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2) How/long/bridge / Hanoi ?

3) What /kind/animal/like /best

4) Where / Hoa /go/Sunday ?

5) Why/she/like/park ?

God made me sleep with my head down. What am I?

If I sit down I am high; if I stand up I am low. What am I?

I am ever eating garbage and waste. What am I?

Out in the field, I talk too much; In the house, I make much noise; But when at the table I am quiet. What am I?

I have four legs. I live in Africa. I am big and gray. I live in the river. What am I?

I have four legs. I am a pet. I hate cats. I bark. What am I?

I eat other animals. I have a big mouth. I am green. I live in the water. What am I?

I can swim and dive. I have two legs. I have wings. I quack. What am I?

I have four legs. You can ride me. I have tusks. I have a long nose. What am I?

I hiss. I can be poisonous. I am long. I have a forked tongue. What am I?

I eat insects. I live in the pond. I can hop. I am green.  What am I?

I am small. I can be scary. I have eight legs. I spin the web. What am I?

I eat vegetables. I can run fast. I can be a pet. I have long ears. What am I?

I live in Africa. I am yellow and brown. I eat leaves. I have a long neck. What am I?

My home is a nest. Flying is what I like to do best. My name rhymes with "word". What am I?

I like to make honey. On days that are sunny. My name rhymes with tree. What am I?

I don’t wear a hat. Or fly like a bat. My name rhymes with flat. What am I?

I sit on a log. In the sun and the fog. My name rhymes with  dog. What am I?

I swim in a lake. While asleep and awake. My name rhymes with dish. What am I?

My wool can keep you cozy and warm. Even during a winter storm. My name rhymes with deep. Who am I?

I have feathers. I also have wings, but I don’t fly. I love to swim in icy water. Who am I?

I am 3 weeks old. I drink milk. I cry when my diaper is wet. Who am I?

I live in the ocean. I swim around slowly, looking for something to eat. I have six more arms than you have. Who am I?

I am an insect. If you touch me, I might bite you! I make tunnels under the ground. I love to come to your picnic! Who am I?

I am a large mammal. I live in the woods. I have fur. I stand up and growl when I am angry. Who am I

HELP ME , PLEASE

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"DO YOU HEAR THAT?" , there's a bird in the sky, there's a nice sound of a waterfall, there's a beautiful sound of the forests... everything just like being one, they're blowing my mind, take all stresses and sadness in it, so there is... New Year now, and I'm in the forest, lost my way, for about 12 years. It is very long time when I had a trip with my family. They could be very beautiful days, but then... there was something black, weird, it made me think of a soul, but I still slept. It was suddenly a terrible night, when I saw it smoked my family's souls. I felt very aghast, I tried to find the way out and for about 4323 days long, ate weird food in the forest with the first time killed animals, I can stand in front of the village now. But that is futile, too tired with the adventure, I think this is the great time to take a rest. I'm using a knife, stab into my heart, and come to the heaven...

I am making about plans for the summer holidays. I think I will 1/.....................................
have a lots of much things to do, but first of all I will have a 2/.....................................
good rest after the exams pass and enjoy myself. I'm going to 3/.....................................
spend my some holiday on the beach. I'm going to Vung Tau 4/.....................................
Beach and I'm will staying there for about two weeks. My 5/.....................................
uncle lives there and I 'll stay with him. Now I'm getting 6/........ .............................
everything ready for the holidays. I'm leaving for next Monday 7/......................................
by train. There has is one starting at 4 pm. When I get there, 8/......................................
my uncle will going gets me up at the station. Hope to write to 9/......................................
you soon and can be able to tell you lots of interesting things. 10/................................

Well! I´m good at Mathematics, Art, exploring or discovering new things… I like English, socializing and Science... I don´t have a special hobby, but in my free time (if this can be considered!!) I like singing, writing lyrics in English, searching for information about many things, taking photos and travelling.

With so many things I like, I think that every job can be “acceptable”, except jobs where the employee has keep himself imprisoned in an office all day long… But the funniest thing is that I’m a little bit lazy and I would like to be a singer ever since I know myself…

But right now I would like to be a doctor! I know that the bad part is that doctors have to keep themselves in an office, but who cares?!… I like helping people very much and I enjoy learning all I can about everything! I only hope that my future job will bring me lots of success!!!

It´s obvious that when we go to a job interview we shouldn´t chew gum, come unprepared, look down onto the floor, put our leg up or play with items on the desk, slap the interviewer on the hand, be late and talk fast or speak in slang. We should answer all the questions clearly and directly, bring an extra copy of our CV and references, continuously keep eye contact with the interviewer, display sense of humor and self-confidence, dress appropriately for the interview, get ourselves a strong knowledge of the company, industry and position, give a firm handshake, know the company that is interviewing us, look attentive and sit properly and upright in your chair.

I am very worried with the unemployment because if right now there is no work for everybody, in the future this will be even worse … I think that part-time jobs are good, because young people can get some work experience… And when people want some extra money this could be heaven, just joking!!!

Maybe later I will look for one part-time and yes if I could, I would already have one (to buy important things). But part-time jobs have advantages and disadvantages, too! When we´re studying part-time jobs can take us precious we need to study and our concentration…

dịch giúp mik

I am a strong and personality girl, I like to travel and enjoy taking pictures. Everyone has their own dream and my growing dream is a professional photographer because I really want to capture beautiful images of family and life around me and my country. And I wish to see the person I have been waiting for for many years, who also changed me, changing my previous shy and pride. I will try to achieve things that definitely belong to me.

                     Thank for you!

What is your dream life? This is a fairly common question in modern life and the answer to this question is mostly different. So how do you answer this question? This is my answer.

I wish I lived in a big house on a large lake in the forest because the air here is very fresh. It has four floors and four bedrooms throughout in order to see the stars at night, bathrooms for each bedroom and on the top floor outside is an enclosed porch. Our house is protected by the most modern system at that time.

I want to have a happy family. My husband is very handsome and smart. After 5 years I will 3 children. They are very cute and clever. My children are very smart and very cute. My son is cold but he knows how to take care of those around him very well. My first daughter is quite gentle, she can cook a lot of delicious food. But my second daughter is different from her sister. She is very energetic and she just knows to eat and sleep. But we are very close and have a lot of work to do with each other's lives like the other family. I think family is an inestimable present for me.

Every morning I wake up and swim in the lake or jogging, come to make coffee with the French press and make breakfast. Then I take my two dogs for a walk because I enjoy and love animals. After that, I go home and look after my garden, flowers, plants, and vegetables because I want my family can eat healthy things. I go fishing with my kids and my husband clean and cook for lunch. He will make food from fishes I bring back. After lunch, I clean with my husband. We talk to and watch some movies. Then I come to our orchard and pick a few apples and a cake that I want for dessert. I also choose vegetables and some fruits. I will practice yoga, Pilates or classes for my own flexibility. In the evening, I meditate for half an hour, relax with some music and taste a new wine. I will tell some fairy tales to my children. After they sleep, I bright wine into my husband's room. We talk and see the stars in the sky My husband will sing to me sleep. I fall asleep with dreams in my husband's lap. I will welcome the new day with a relaxed spirit.

This is my dream life. I wish It will become truth. And you, what is your dream life?

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Please help me!!! Thank you so much.