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There are countless things that I love in this world. But the thing I love most is reading book. I started this bobby when i was 8 years old. I often reading books whenever and wherever I can. I read news, story books and novels and especially have passion for discovery books. Reading is an incredibly inexpensive hobby that provides so many benefits. Book help me widen my knowledge of the world. When I am sad or disheartened, I often mix myself with book. I realize that the life has many meanful things than i thought and i need to try my best for my bright future. Book also bring me more motivation and joy of life. All of parents want to give their children a quality education. I think the best method is let them read book, regardless of any kind of books, as long as those book are wholesome books. I have no intention of of this useful hobby. In future, I want to read and more book.

Lan Anh is my classmate. Her hobby is swimming. She started to swim 1 year ago. She usually goes swimming with her brother. She had to practice swimming gradually for this hobby. She finds this hobby interesting and relaxed. In the future, she will go swimming more.

She is my classmate . Her hobby is listening K-Pop music . Her Idol is V BTS . He is very handsome and has a face 4D .

My favorite hobby is playing badminton. I started about 2 years ago. I play badminton with my father everyday afternoon. I always play badminton at home. I think it is a sport very good for our health.

My favorite hobby is playing football. I started playing in the summer 2 years ago. I play football with my friends every afternoon. We always play football at home. I think it is a very good sport for our health.

      My favourite hobby is listen to music then sing follow. I have this hobby when I was very small, I think from 5 or 6 years old.
      I sometimes listen to music with my friends but I I prefer to listen alone because I can enjoy it clearlier. Sing follow is diffirent, I really like the sound when we sing toghether, that's so great! I can sing whenever and wherever I can sing, I think because I really love music.
       In my opinion, this is the good hobby make us love our life than and help us relax very much!

Duy is my classmate. His hobby is listening to English music. He started this hobby for 2 years and he share this hobby with his younger brother. He usually search in the internet and choose his favourite songs, then he listens. Listening to English music make he feels exciting and relaxing after a tired day. Especially, it can help he improve his English. He like listening to music very so much

My best friend is Hoa. She is twelve years old. Her hobby is playing badminton. It is a popular sports activities in the world. She started this hobby when she was eight years old. She share this hobby with me and her sister. To do this hobby, she only need a pair of rackets, a shutllecock, a net and a small piece of land. She feels relax and happy when she plays badminton. She likes Idonesia because it is one of the strongest countries in badminton. In the future, she will continue this hobby because it is very good for her health. 

My friend hobby is reading knowledgeable and interesting books in her square time. She started her when her 9 years old . Reading is such a good habit which healthy for your brain and keeps your brain functioning actively. Reading is a wonderful way to keeps you relax and happy. For she there is nothing makes me happier than to have a stack of books on my nightstand to attack on a night when there is no alarm clock waiting the next morning.  It’s the great source of enjoyment, inspiration , instruction, and knowledge. Reading book can make us disciplined, punctual, loyal and most importantly a very successful person in this life. While reading books, noone can feel disturb or alone. She think this hobby is more precious than other precious stones in the world. It can provide us noble thoughts, ideas to work in many fields and high level of knowledge. Interesting and knowledgeable book is like best friend of the someone who likes to read.

My friend hobby is reading knowledgeable and interesting books in her square time. She started her when her 9 years old . Reading is such a good habit which healthy for your brain and keeps your brain functioning actively. Reading is a wonderful way to keeps you relax and happy. For she there is nothing makes me happier than to have a stack of books on my nightstand to attack on a night when there is no alarm clock waiting the next morning.  It’s the great source of enjoyment, inspiration , instruction, and knowledge. Reading book can make us disciplined, punctual, loyal and most importantly a very successful person in this life. While reading books, noone can feel disturb or alone. She think this hobby is more precious than other precious stones in the world. It can provide us noble thoughts, ideas to work in many fields and high level of knowledge. Interesting and knowledgeable book is like best friend of the someone who likes to read.

My friend hobby is reading knowledgeable and interesting books in her square time. She started her when her 9 years old . Reading is such a good habit which healthy for your brain and keeps your brain functioning actively. Reading is a wonderful way to keeps you relax and happy. For she there is nothing makes me happier than to have a stack of books on my nightstand to attack on a night when there is no alarm clock waiting the next morning.  It’s the great source of enjoyment, inspiration , instruction, and knowledge. Reading book can make us disciplined, punctual, loyal and most importantly a very successful person in this life. While reading books, noone can feel disturb or alone. She think this hobby is more precious than other precious stones in the world. It can provide us noble thoughts, ideas to work in many fields and high level of knowledge. Interesting and knowledgeable book is like best friend of the someone who likes to read.

I was born in a quite village. It í a small village with a population ò about two thousand people. In my village, people are very friendly anh helpful. My village is surrounded by paddy- fields and a river. Athought I don't like growing rice but I really like the fields. It makes me to have a good mood, a peace mood and a relaxed mood. It has many green trees, a pagoda. Here the weather is warm in the spring, hot in the summer cool in the fall and cold in the winter. The specialty here is noodles. Noodles are made from pure rice and eat well. I love my hometown very much. It very beautiful. Wellcome all of you to visit this place, we will be happy

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