Các bn sửa lỗi giúp mk nếu thấy không hya đoạn nào sửa hộ luôn nhé nhưng đừng thay đổi nội dung. Cảm ơn nhé mk cần gấp lắm

mình thấy bài của bạn cũng đc nhưng có gì đó hơi cứng nhắc quá đây là ý kiến của riêng mình

bài viết này ok về ngữ pháp, chỉ có điều bạn nên viết thêm về cảm xúc ( thích hay ko thích ) của mình với các hoạt động đó và lợi ích của chúng. Bạn có thể thêm một vài hoạt động khác và cảm xúc như : I do my homework after dinner, but I hate it, ect

Going out with friends is my second favorite hobby. I often going out with my friends for eating and chatting. I love chatting with my closed friends, I can share all my stories with them. It’s always filled with laughter and I feel very happy when I am with my friends.

Dịch:

Đi chơi với bạn bè là sở thích thứ hai của tôi. Tôi thường đi ra ngoài ăn uống và trò chuyện với bạn bè của mình. Tôi thích trò chuyện với những người bạn thân của tôi, tôi có thể chia sẻ tất cả những câu chuyện của tôi với họ. Nó luôn luôn tràn ngập tiếng cười và tôi cảm thấy rất hạnh phúc khi gặp những người bạn của mình.

There are a lot of activities that you can do in your leisure time. Some people are so tired of work that they prefer to use their free time just for resting and sleeping. Others spend their free time on their favourite activities. For example, they listen to music, play their favourite musical instrument, go on a picnic, take a trip, go to the nature and enjoy the fresh air, hang out with their friends, go partying, go shopping, visit their relatives, spend some time with their kids and play games with them, read and write, watch TV, watch movies or cartoons, go to the theatre, surf the net, cook, do some gardening, etc. Some people like me choose sports to enjoy their free time. Among different kinds of sports, I prefer basketball.

When you play basketball with your team mates you have a chance to get rid of all the negative energies that are piled up in you throughout work or study time. Your body is wholly involved. Basketball involves both your mind and your body. It’s an extremely physical activity, so that even your finger tips have to be strong. In basketball you need both stamina and speed to be a successful player. It’s not that important if you’re not tall. Your strength is of much more importance. Both feet and hands must be strong. Even you need to be wise in this game. If you know where to stand so that your rival has a weak chance of blocking you, you’ll more successfully get close to the basket to shoot and score. Sometimes, by being wise and finding the right place to stand and block the rival saves your team.

Basketball is a team work and this is what I like the most about this sport. You learn how to cooperate with other team mates. Sometimes, you need to sacrifice yourself by blocking the rival so that your team mate can find space to go to the basket and score. Passing the ball to other members of your team makes the chance of winning higher and higher.

All in all, basketball is so enjoyable and fun if you play it in a group, not individually.

There are a lot of activities that you can do in your leisure time. Some people are so tired of work that they prefer to use their free time just for resting and sleeping. Others spend their free time on their favourite activities. For example, they listen to music, play their favourite musical instrument, go on a picnic, take a trip, go to the nature and enjoy the fresh air, hang out with their friends, go partying, go shopping, visit their relatives, spend some time with their kids and play games with them, read and write, watch TV, watch movies or cartoons, go to the theatre, surf the net, cook, do some gardening, etc. Some people like me choose sports to enjoy their free time. Among different kinds of sports, I prefer basketball.

When you play basketball with your team mates you have a chance to get rid of all the negative energies that are piled up in you throughout work or study time. Your body is wholly involved. Basketball involves both your mind and your body. It’s an extremely physical activity, so that even your finger tips have to be strong. In basketball you need both stamina and speed to be a successful player. It’s not that important if you’re not tall. Your strength is of much more importance. Both feet and hands must be strong. Even you need to be wise in this game. If you know where to stand so that your rival has a weak chance of blocking you, you’ll more successfully get close to the basket to shoot and score. Sometimes, by being wise and finding the right place to stand and block the rival saves your team.

Basketball is a team work and this is what I like the most about this sport. You learn how to cooperate with other team mates. Sometimes, you need to sacrifice yourself by blocking the rival so that your team mate can find space to go to the basket and score. Passing the ball to other members of your team makes the chance of winning higher and higher.

All in all, basketball is so enjoyable and fun if you play it in a group, not individually.

In my free time, I love to relax myself by listening to music and watching my favorite films. I study all day, so after 7PM is the only time that I can use for myself. I have a smart phone, so I can download a lot of songs from the Internet for free, and I usually hear them with my headphone. Sometimes when my parents are not at home, I turn on the loudspeakers to have the best experience with music, but most of the time I just listen in silence. Besides music, movies are my biggest love. When I am not listening to the songs, I turn on my computer and watch some of the lasted movies on the websites. Since most of the best films are from Europe and America, this is also a way for me to improve my English skills. I usually do not use the subtitle, and I try to hear directly what the actors and actresses are saying. My parents want me to read books to even learn in my free time, but I think I should do what I actually love to make myself comfortable

 mình có 1 số bài cho bn tham khảo nè:

Bài 1:

In free time, I usually go out with friends. Cafe gathered together to go to talk to share the fun. It makes us feel real comfortable and more pleasure from work stress.

Bài 2:

I taking photographs of flowers, especially in spring. Sometimes, after work, I relax in a bar near my office with friends. My friend, Shigeru, s singing pop songs in the bar. This has a special name, Karaoke. I don’t sing. I’m too shy! I just watch him

Bài 3:

There are a lot of activities that you can do in your leisure time. Some people are so tired of work that they prefer to use their free time just for resting and sleeping. Others spend their free time on their favourite activities. 

For example, they listen to music, play their favourite musical instrument, go on a picnic, take a trip, go to the nature and enjoy the fresh air, hang out with their friends, go partying, go shopping, visit their relatives, spend some time with their kids and play games with them, read and write, watch TV, watch movies or cartoons, go to the theatre, surf the net, cook, do some gardening, etc.  Some people me choose sports to enjoy their free time. Among different kinds of sports, I prefer basketball.

Bài 4:

Watching TV is what I mostly do whenever I have free time. My main purpose when watching TV is to relax, so I often watch funny cartoons, movies or films, and music channels. It is an effective way to help me relax after a stressful day of work. It also helps me to know more things about life.

Bài 5:

I am a kind of busy person, who is always surrounded by lots of things. Therefore, I seem to treasure my free time and take advantage of it for my favorite hobbies. I am a bookworm and often spend my spare time reading my favorite books. I prefer reading to watching movies because whenever drowning in a book, a whole new world opens to me. Another activity I to do when I am not busy is hanging out with my close friends. Sometimes, when I feel stuck in something about work, family, relationships… I will text a friend of mine and ask them out for chat in some cafe. Last but not least, I am also quite addicted to games on both mobile and computer. If you see my phone, you will get what I have just said. There is a wide range of games on my phone, which I can play anytime when I am free. 

k cho mình nhé! cảm ơn bạn nhiều!

Answer : 

My leisure activity is reading. I reading because it is a hobby that is useful and interesting: useful because you can find a lot of knowledge of all areas that you need; interesting because the books can give you the joy and help you relax after a hard working day etc... Especially, when you join the forum, you can meet a lot of people who have interests similar to yours, comment on the books or novels that interest you. My love for books started at the age of ten years old. I was awarded "The Scarlet Sails" of Alexandre Green by my grandfather. It is the first book that I have seen. I do not know how many times I read it (Up to now, I still love it and occasionally read it again). I always hope that I will have my own library in the future. I love books very much and perhaps, I couldn't live without them.

Dịch

Hoạt động giải trí yêu thích của tôi là đọc sách. Tôi thích đọc sách vì đó là một sở thích hữu ích và thú vị: hữu ích bởi vì bạn có thể tìm thấy rất nhiều kiến ​​thức về tất cả các lĩnh vực mà bạn mong muốn; thú vị vì những quyển sách có thể đem lại cho bạn niềm vui và giúp bạn thư giãn sau một ngày làm việc vất vả ... Đặc biệt, khi bạn tham gia diễn đàn, bạn có thể gặp rất nhiều người có sở thích giống bạn, bình luận về sách hoặc tiểu thuyết mà bạn quan tâm.Tình yêu đối với những cuốn sách bắt đầu khi tôi được 10 tuổi. Tôi được ông nội của tôi tặng "The Scarlet Sails" của Alexandre Green. Đây là cuốn sách đầu tiên của tôi. Tôi đọc nó không biết bao nhiêu lần (Cho đến bây giờ, tôi vẫn thích nó và đôi khi đọc nó lần nữa). Tôi luôn luôn hy vọng rằng tôi sẽ có thư viện của mình trong tương lai của tôi. Tôi yêu sách rất nhiều và có lẽ, tôi không thể sống thiếu chúng.

Tham khảo nhé !

Watching TV is what I mostly do whenever I have free time. My main purpose when watching TV is to relax, so I often watch funny cartoons, action movies and music channels. It is an effective way to help me relax after a stressful day. It also helps me to know more things about life.

Our free time is very important to each of us. Because during that period of time, we can discharge the street, do useful and entertaining things. Therefore, I always cherish my free time on the useful things that are reading book . Books are things that contain a lot of useful knowledge, strange things that we have never known. After all, books are a precious human asset. therefore, I spend most of my free time in reading . I read books 1 to 2 hours and 5 times a week. The rest of the time I study and play games . My mother encouraged me to read, but be planning and moderating . The books I read often are: No family; Great hearts, The Room of Miracles; and story books . I always treasure and keep them. I love books!

Hello everyone,my name is Linh.Today I am going to tell you about in my free time what am I doing.In my free time,I usually rides my bicycle around my city I live with my dad because it's can make me more healthy,strong and when I'm ride bicycle,it's feel great and I can relax afterschool.

[Tham khảo]

After the stressful hours at school, some of the spare time at the end of the day is the time I spend to do what I like. Usually I would choose to listen to music, when I am in sad moods I hear soft ballads. In happy times I listen to Pop music in order to dance to the catchy tunes. When I have to deal with stressful issues, I listen to classical music to ease my nerve. Besides listening to music, reading and writing are some of the things that I love to do every time I have free time. I do not limit the genres of stories that I choose read, I can read from comics, horror to science fiction as long as I find it interesting. Thanks to reading a lot of books, my writing skills have improved a lot, and my vocabulary has also become richer. Whenever I have ideas, I often turn my thoughts into stories. I write about a lot of things, from the realistic life around me, the additional details in my favorite books to what I imagine. At first I wrote stories only for some of my close friends to read, but they suggested that I should post them on the websites so people could read and leave comments. Those compliments and comments made me feel very happy and proud of myself. I sometimes go out with my friends, and we like to go to many beautiful places to take pictures. We also love to go to the cinema together to watch the latest films, and then we go shopping or eat together. Those relaxing times add energy so I can start my other work efficiently. It is so great that I can do whatever I want, as long as I do not bother anyone.

Viết văn ạ hay viết từ vựng

Leisure time has become a crucial part of the modern life as this is the period for the recovery of the human body. Yet, the best way to use spare time still has to be determined as some people are interested in mind-improving activities while others simply wish to rest.

It is not surprising that a high number of people engage in activities that involve the mind. One of the reasons is that activities such as reading books or playing puzzles is helpful for them. For example, people can apply knowledge obtained from novels, especially detective novels, into the reality as these books not only entertain but also teach people to solve difficult situations. Another explanation for this trend could be that it helps people to escape from the boredom stemming from daily routines. The excitement and feeling of victory are indeed very useful in recharging the energy people need for work and life in general.

However, there also exist individuals who prefer a complete rest during leisure time. Perhaps the most obvious reason is that their minds are already heavily occupied during occupation, and thus, there is little energy left for highly intellectual activities. In fact, these activities could be harmful as people can surfer from stress and exhaustion. As a consequence, mind-challenging activities can result in reduced work performance and also quality of life. For these people, light activities such as listening to music or watching films could be a better choice.

To summarize, I am strongly convinced that the selection of activities during leisure time should depend on people’s own preferences and needs. Mind-improving activities and quiet resting are both useful in their own ways, and people should choose the kinds of activity that can help them relax the most.

There are a lot of activities that you can do in your leisure time. Some people are so tired of work that they prefer to use their free time just for resting and sleeping. Others spend their free time on their favourite activities. For example, they listen to music, play their favourite musical instrument, go on a picnic, take a trip, go to the nature and enjoy the fresh air, hang out with their friends, go partying, go shopping, visit their relatives, spend some time with their kids and play games with them, read and write, watch TV, watch movies or cartoons, go to the theatre, surf the net, cook, do some gardening, etc. Some people like me choose sports to enjoy their free time. Among different kinds of sports, I prefer basketball.

When you play basketball with your team mates you have a chance to get rid of all the negative energies that are piled up in you throughout work or study time. Your body is wholly involved. Basketball involves both your mind and your body. It’s an extremely physical activity, so that even your finger tips have to be strong. In basketball you need both stamina and speed to be a successful player. It’s not that important if you’re not tall. Your strength is of much more importance. Both feet and hands must be strong. Even you need to be wise in this game. If you know where to stand so that your rival has a weak chance of blocking you, you’ll more successfully get close to the basket to shoot and score. Sometimes, by being wise and finding the right place to stand and block the rival saves your team.

Basketball is a team work and this is what I like the most about this sport. You learn how to cooperate with other team mates. Sometimes, you need to sacrifice yourself by blocking the rival so that your team mate can find space to go to the basket and score. Passing the ball to other members of your team makes the chance of winning higher and higher.

All in all, basketball is so enjoyable and fun if you play it in a group, not individually.

I spending free time with my family. I and my husband love playing with my son and watching TV together when we have free time. We usually do house works together while opening some music. One of my free time activities is to listen to music because it help me feel relax. Before I go the bed, I often surf the internet, check e-mail and read some favorite books. I write a lot when I have spare time. I often write about school, family, love and friendship. On weekends, I love to cook a special meal for my family. We often go to the zoo or the water park once a month. My son love it so much. Sometimes, I go out with my friends for shopping or coffee. It’s a lot of fun.

Dịch:

Tôi thích dành thời gian rảnh của mình cho gia đình. Tôi và chồng thích chơi với con trai và cùng nhau xem TV khi có thời gian rảnh. Chúng tôi thường mở vài bản nhạc trong lúc làm việc nhà cùng nhau. Một trong những hoạt động vào thời gian rảnh rỗi của tôi đó là nghe nhạc bởi vì nó giúp tôi cảm thấy rất thư giãn. Trước khi đi ngủ tôi thường lướt web, check email và đọc một vài quyển sách yêu thích. Tôi viết rất nhiều khi tôi có thời gia rảnh. Tôi thường viết về trường học, gia đình, tình yêu và tình bạn. Vào các ngày cuối tuần, tôi thích nấu một bữa ăn thật đặc biệt cho gia đình của tôi. Chúng tôi thường đi sở thú hoặc công viên nước 1 tháng 1 lần. Con trai tôi thích nó lắm. Thi thoảng, tôi đi ra ngoài mua sắm hoặc cà phê với bạn. Rất vui.

Going out with friends is my second favorite hobby. I often going out with my friends for eating and chatting. I love chatting with my closed friends, I can share all my stories with them. It’s always filled with laughter and I feel very happy when I am with my friends.

Dịch:

Đi chơi với bạn bè là sở thích thứ hai của tôi. Tôi thường đi ra ngoài ăn uống và trò chuyện với bạn bè của mình. Tôi thích trò chuyện với những người bạn thân của tôi, tôi có thể chia sẻ tất cả những câu chuyện của tôi với họ. Nó luôn luôn tràn ngập tiếng cười và tôi cảm thấy rất hạnh phúc khi gặp những người bạn của mình.

k cho mk nhé bn......ukm, dc mk cảm mơn nhìu ạ

I usually have freetime on afternoon Thursday . I just watch some news in my computer . It is so worderful . But I the information about the ghost . It is very scary . And I watch some horror movies : The ring , Annabelle, ... .But sometimes , I have inportant test , I need to study . When I feel happy , I will go to the coffee store . I drink some coffee with a cake .