On my first day at school, I was very excited as I was not going to be a primary schooler but a secondary schooler. I was very happy as it was very easy to make friends and the teacher's were very nice and friendly. Friend's were playful and jolly. Not only that but the food there was awesome. The food was filled with wonderful flavours. The classroom decorations was nice and it was very clean. The entrance was also welcoming. I hope that I will make lot's of friends in school too!
 

Tham khảo nhá :)

cảm ơn bn nhaa

The happiest day of my life our tour to Ooty. We went on a trip to the beautiful hill station last month. It was a nice family trip where we enjoyed a lot. The trip started on a breezy Sunday morning. We hired a van from our home and my uncle’s family accompanied us.
We boarded a lodge at 10 ‘o clock in the morning and the weather so cold that we were freezing like a statue. After getting ready with all our jackets over us we went to the Thunder world which was a very different theme zone I have ever seen. The botanical garden and rose garden were so amazing. It was a great scene to see so many flowers altogether. They all looked as if they were smiling at us.
The next day we visited Pykara and the boating experience there was indeed not equivalent to words. The same afternoon we went to Mudhumalai forests and saw wildlife face to face. The trip was so wonderful that it cannot be explained simply in words. The trip to Ooty was definitely one of the most memorable ones in my life

bạn thay đổi 1 chút nhé vì đây là bài viết mk xin thầy và là cảm nghĩ của thầy khi đi Ooty thôi !! (bạn thay bằng 1 nơi nào đó mà bn đã đi cx đc)

STUDY WELL!

Dễ mà, tự làm đi

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Hello Phuong. Now I will tell you about my house in the future. It will be a large and modern house in a big city. In front of my house, there will be a big black gate, a water fountain and a greensward. To the left of my house, there'll be a beautiful flower garden. There will be a garage and some tall trees. Behind my house, there'll be a swimming pool. My house will have 3 floors and 10 rooms : 1 living room, 1 library, 3 bedrooms, 1 kitchen, 2 bathrooms, 1 dining room and 1 entertainment room. In the living room, there will be a big TV, a table, some sofas, a chandelier light, some ornamental plants and some pictures,... In the library, there will be a large bookshelf full of books. In each bedroom, there will be a king-size bed, an air-conditioner, some pillows, some blankets and a closet,... In the kitchen, there will be a stove, some cupboards, a fridge, a microwave, some pots, some pans,... In each bathroom, there will be a toilet, a sink, a mirror, some toothbrushes, some soaps and some towels,... In the dining room, there'll be a big table and some chairs,... In the entertainment room, there will be a computer and a TV. My house will have an elevator to easy to move. In my house, there will be some robots to do the housework for me too. I love my future house and I wish it will come true someday. 

see you soon

quang

My favorite day in the week is Sunday because is it the day that i can answer the question from other students who has study in Hoc24h (at the morning) and maybe (at the afternoon) i can relax or hear the music . How about you ? what is your favourit day ?

Đây là cả công sức của em đấy cô ạ ! Mong cô có thể  góp ý kiến về bài làm của em

Dear Le, 

Thank you (pronoun usage) for your letter. Of all the days of the week, the one I love best is Sunday. Because I don't go to school and stay at home. Sunday is the beginning of the weekend and I don’t have to get up early and can sleep more. Moreover, I watch some films or hang out with my friends to relax after a stressful week. If all members in => of (preposition) my family aren't busy, we will come to (preposition) my country to visit my grandparents and relatives. Furthermore (sai chính tả), I help my mum with housework. Finally, I review a number of => several/some/many (wordy phrase) lessons and prepare new lessons carefully.

How about your favorite day of the week? I hope you will tell me about it.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes, 

Trang.

#Nhiều cái nó không đúng với sự thật của e lắm :)) Mong thầy/ cô nhận xét và sửa những lỗi sai cho e với ạ! <333

Dear HOC24,

My favorite day of the week is Sunday because it is quiet. Nobody works. In the morning, I normally go to the open-air (nó là 1 từ) market in my village to buy fresh food. Then, we have breakfast. We have lunch in a little house in the country. After lunch, we usually read a book or walk across the fields to pick flowers, or => ∅ (thừa từ) fruits, or (em nhớ trước các từ như and/or chúng ta sử dụng dấu phẩy nhé) to find vegetables. For me, the evening begins at 6.00 p.m. This is a time when I relax. Whenever possible, I watch my favourite programme. For me, Sunday is a day when I can relax after a busy week

Besh=>Best (sai chính tả) wish,

miku

Refer

My favorite genre in music is country music, because the singer’s express their feeling’s. Country music is different because the entire singer’s relate to their child hood. They also relate to their family member’s. They also relate to Iraq and how family member’s react when they’ve been told that their love one’s aren’t coming back home. They express their love life’s and make you think about “falling in love” at such a young age. They make you realize that life can be to short so why waste it on being tied down to just one person.

There are many kinds of music in the word but my favourite is country music. First, this type
of music is traditional and very popular in Vietnam. People can listen to it on radio, TV, CDs or on
the Internet. Second, country music helps me relax. For example, when I feel stressed or tired, I
always listen to my favourite songs. It makes me feel more comfortable. Third, country music can
connect people together. In a party, especially in the countryside, people often get together and sing
a popular song of this type. Generally, I think more and more people will like listening to country
music in the future.

Hi guys ! My name is Cao TH ! I'm 10 years old. From Mondays to Saturdays, i always get up at 6a.m, but on Sundays, i get up at 8a.m because i very tired all week. At 6:05, i brush my teeth and get dressed. I eat breakfast then go to school. My class started from 7:00 till 11:30. In the afternoon, i ride my bike go around my villige or do my homework and suft internet for my project. At 17:30, i take a shower and cook rice to help my mom. Finally, i brush my teeth then go to bed....

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This is my activities in a day. How do I write ? It's not good for me personally haha :))

Chúc bạn học tốt !!

Every morning from Monday to Saturday, I get up at 6 o'clock. After breakfast, I go to school by bicycle. It takes me about 20 minutes from my house to my school. Usually, I study at school until 11:30 a.m. I return home at noon to have lunch with my family. In the afternoon I attend English and computer courses. I always get home just in time for dinner at 7:30 p.m. After dinner, while my parents are watching television in the living-room, I read books or prepare for school in my own room.

I am free at weekends. On Sunday mornings, I get up later than usual. Then I often go shopping downtown with my friends. Sometimes we go for a picnic in the countryside. On rainy Sundays, I stay at home reading books and listening to music.

I am quite happy with my daily activities.

As part of my 1000 words I would publish a really long Facebook status update, what I jokingly referred to as committing career suicide one status update at a time. After a few months my writing started resonating with people like it never had before. In September of 2013, I compiled all of my Facebook status updates into a google doc, had it edited, had Mars Dorian design a book cover, uploaded it to Amazon and called it the Art of Being Unmistakable.

The first week it sold 300 copies and I considered that a success. But about three weeks later, a media circus erupted. When I check the rankings on Amazon, I noticed that my book was #1 in the entrepreneurship category. When I tweeted about it, somebody said “you might want to thank Glenn Beck. He raved about your book on his show today.” When I asked a friend she said “I don’t think you realize how big a deal this is, check your sales.” When I logged into the Amazon dashboard, I noticed that the book had sold 1000 copies in a day. Shortly after that I ended up being on the Glenn Beck show and my self published book became a Wall Street Journal Best Seller.

My favorite hobby is playing football in spare time. After completing my home work at home, I generally spend my lot of free time in playing football. I was so interested to play football from my childhood however started learning to play well when I was 5 years old. I was in one class when I was 5 years old. My father asked to my class teacher in the PTM about my hobby of football. And my teacher told him that there is a facility of playing sports daily in the school from class 1 so you can admit your child. Now, I really enjoy playing football and participate in the inter-school competitions.