Question IX: There are 10 mistakes.
Every December, I began to feel uncomfortable. Why? Christmas is coming. Most people enjoy this holiday, but it makes me to depressed. First, I’m not a religious person. This holiday celebrates the birth of Christmas, and it’s full of religious symbol. Second, Christmas is becoming more and more commercially. It’s the most important time of the year with owners of stores, for example. Spend lots of money seems to be people’s main activity in December. Everywhere you hear the commands “Buy! Spend! Give!”. It’s an awful . Last, I think Christmas is a difficult time for people without families. I’ve been living away from my family for several years, and I miss being with they-especially on Christmas.
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