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My best friend is My. She goes to the same school and the same class, she was sitting behind me in the classroom. She has long, black hair and big round eyes. She was very kind and always help people. After school i st played and talked. Me and her have a lot in common like flowers and sweets. She stays with me whenever i’m Sad. I really like her we will always be close friends.
Theo mình nghĩ nha, là she was sitting hơi sai pk hong?
Chắc z là đc
câu she goes to the same school.... thì bạn bỏ chữ " the same school and" và thêm sau chữ class là " with me"
câu she was.... là thì HTHT nên bạn chia như thế này" she has sat behind me.... " nha vs lại nếu quá khứ đơn thì ko đc thêm ing nha.
Câu she was very kind.... bạn thay chữ was thành is nha và thay câu" and .... people" thành, friendly and funny
và còn nhiều lỗi nữa, mình sửa phần còn lại dưới đây bạn sửa vào nha:
After school, we always do homework together. We usually share happyness and sadness with each other. I think I'm lucky because I have a good friend her. I hope in the future we will be best friend forever!
