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                                                           Harm of cigarette 
Usually, adults and old persons even students are smoking. I think they use cigarette because they don't know it's harm, they think it's very cool or it's relaxed them,... But it's very harmful for your health. It's will made your lung bad if you used cigarette for a long time. You will addiction. If you addiction, you will be made your family and society become bad. So we need to don't use cigarette.

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  Harm of cigarette

Usually, adults and old persons and even students                               (are smoking)           ->smoke . I think they use cigarette because they don't know it's harm, they think it's very cool or it's relaxed them,... But it's very harmful for (your health->them). It's will made your lung bad if you used->are using cigarette for a long time. Moreover, You will get addiction. If you are in addiction, you will be(bỏ be) made(make) your family and society become bad. So we need to don't use cigarette.(Câu này sai, sửa lại cho đúng nha)