0 | When I left university I went traveling all over |
00 | in the world. I was so fascinated by New Zealand |
1 | that I decided to spend a year there. In order that |
2 | do so I had to find a job. However I had very |
3 | money to get by for a few of months, so needless to |
4 | say, I took the opportunity to travel around and see the |
5 | country. Everywhere I went, the people were the friendlier |
6 | than anywhen else I had ever been , which is important |
7 | when one traveling. The landscape was wonderful as well, |
8 | with the more richest variety of plant life I had |
9 | ever seen. I was also fascinated by the traditions |
10 | of Maori natives and took every opportunity to talk |
11 | to them. My journey were very enjoyable and I wanted |
12 | more than ever to say, but that was dependent on |
13 | finding a job. I hadn’t been looking for more than |
14 | a few days when I found a job as a waiter. Everyone person |
15 | at work was great and I really enjoyed my time there. |
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0 | When I left university I went traveling all over |
00 | in the world. I was so fascinated by New Zealand => bỏ |
1 | that I decided to spend a year there. In order that => to |
2 | do so I had to find a job. However I had very However => Because very => enough |
3 | money to get by for a few of months, so needless to |
4 | say, I took the opportunity to travel around and see the |
5 | country. Everywhere I went, the people were the friendlier => bỏ |
6 | than anywhen => anywhere else I had ever been , which is important |
7 | when one traveling => is travelling. The landscape was wonderful as well, |
8 | with the more richest variety of plant life I had => bỏ |
9 | ever seen. I was also fascinated by the traditions |
10 | of Maori natives and took every opportunity to talk |
11 | to them. My journey were very enjoyable and I wanted => was |
12 | more than ever to say, but that was dependent on |
13 | finding a job. I hadn’t been looking for more than |
14 | a few days when I found a job as a waiter. Everyone person => bỏ |
15 | at work was great and I really enjoyed my time there. |
