Traffic problems in big cities
Nowaday (spelling), traffic problem (delete: problem) is the biggest problem (better: one of the biggest problems) that many people care about. In VN, I think the city where have (that has) the worst traffic is Ha noi.
The first problem is the traffic jam here (First, there are traffic jams). Why? (delete "why?") In (during) the rush hours of the day, there're too many people using the road (only one road?). Last year, in 2013 (use either “last year” or “in 2013”), many bridges was (subject-verb agreement) built so it happen (subject-verb agreement) (what is “it”?) less but in order to stop this (what is “this”?), a kind of small car (small cars) should be invented, (replace the comma with “or” – do not use a comma to connect two independent sentences without a conjunction) people should go to works (spelling) by buses instead of going by (better: delete “going by”) motorbikes...
The second one (Second), as you know, the (delete: the) roads in VN is (subject-verb agreement) not as big and clean as the roads (repetitive. Use “those") in the (delete: the) big countries. They're narrow, bumpy and some (delete: some) dirty so it’s really hard for the road users (people) to drive safely. I think we should raise money to make the road (only one road?) in VN better and better (delete: and better).
But (however,) everyone knows that Vietnamese people are not (do not) respect and don’t follow the traffic rules. That’s the biggest reason for everything (what is “everything”). They wear the helmet that not (they wear helmets that are not) strong enough to keep they (them)safe if the accident may happen (accidents happen), (semicolon) they ride too fast on the (delete: the) small roads… The traffic will never can be improve (will never improve) if they keep doing this (what does wearing helmets have anything to do with traffic?).
At the end, I hope the traffic in VN will improve more
Nowaday, traffic problem is the biggest problem that many people care about. In VN, I think the city where have the worst traffic is Ha noi.
The first problem is the traffic jam here. Why? In the rush hours of the day, there're too many people using the road. Last year, in 2013, many bridges was built so it happen less but in order to stop this, a kind of small car should be invented, people should go to works by buses instead of going by motorbikes...
The second one, as you know, the roads in VN is not as big and clean as the roads in the big countries. They're narrow, bumpy and some dirty so it’s really hard for the road users to drive safely. I think we should raise money to make the road in VN better and better.
But everyone knows that Vietnamese people are not respect and don’t follow the traffic rules. That’s the biggest reason for everything. They wear the helmet that not strong enough to keep they safe if the accident may happen, they ride too fast on the small roads… The traffic will never can be improve if they keep doing this.
At the end, I hope the traffic in VN will improve more.
