Question

Write an essay about 180-200 words to give your opinion on the following topic:

Should smart phones be banned among students?

Answer 1

Nowaday, the life is modern. Smart phones and computers are very popular and they appear all around us. Using smart phones is a necessary part of many students' life. We can use them for relaxing, connecting and especially studying. Students can learn in the Internet, search information for their lessons,... Using smart phones can solve many problems quickly and easily. But, there is a problem.Some students mostly use smart phones to relax and spend less time studying. They concentrate on the smart phones instead of keeping their eye on learning.

If students were allowed to use smart phones, learning would be easier . Unless they were banned to use smart phones, they could be focus on learning. Anyway, I think smart phones shouldn't be banned. Although it makes students can't be focus on the lessons, It helps them a lots in relaxing at break time and studying. We've also got some suitable rules such as: not using phones while you are studying, just use them at break time,...

The rules not only help students be focus on learning, but also study effectively.

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Answer 2

Điện thoại thông minh cho phép học sinh tiến hành nghiên cứu trực tuyến trong suốt lớp học. Điều này có nghĩa là học sinh sẽ dễ dàng truy cập các bài báo và báo cáo trực tuyến để giúp họ trong lớp học. Một cuộc khảo sát do Bộ Giáo dục thực hiện cho thấy 75% giáo viên cho phép học sinh sử dụng điện thoại thông minh trong lớp để tìm kiếm các bài báo. Các giáo viên cũng nói rằng hầu hết học sinh của họ không lạm dụng các đặc quyền mà họ có. Điều này cho thấy hầu hết sinh viên có thể sử dụng điện thoại thông minh hiệu quả, mà không bị phân tâm bởi phương tiện truyền thông xã hội hoặc tin nhắn văn bản. Do đó, tôi tin tưởng rằng điện thoại thông minh không nên bị cấm trong trường học. Smartphones should not be banned as they help students to read and research. However, smartphones are also a major distraction to the students. Statistical data shows that 83% of students own a smartphone and 50% of them use them to do school work daily. This shows that majority of the students use their smartphones to help them in their studies, But the remaining 33% of them use their smartphones to surf the internet or to keep up with trends on social media such as instagram and facebook, which is a huge distraction to students' studies as their minds would be comstantly comcentrated on wanting schlol to end so that they can go onto social media. Therefore, smartphones should not be banned as they help majority of the students in their school work despite being a distraction to them.