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Like most people, I turn on my laptop play as well as to study. At weekend, I goto my favourite chat rooms and I chat. Sometimes I spend hours online and I often make new friends. My mum doesn't go shop anymore. She likes buy everything online. My sister likes music and she has join a rock group which she found on a webpage at her university. When I want to improving my English, there are a lot of great websites with vocabulary games and practice exercises. I usually score more points than my sister !
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Like most people=>of the people , I turn on my laptop play=>to play as well as to study. At weekend, I go to my favourite chat rooms and I chat. Sometimes I spend hours online and I often make new friends. My mum doesn't go shop=>shopping anymore. She likes buy=>buying everything online. My sister likes music and she has join=>joined a rock group which she found on a webpage at her university. When I want to improving=>improve my English, there are a lot of great websites with vocabulary games and practice exercises. I usually score more points than my sister !