The given line chart illustrates the figures for Australian exports to Japan, the US, China and India between -> from ( từ năm .... tới năm ....) 1990 to 2012.
It can clearly be seen that there was an opposite trend in the percentage of Australian exports to the aforementioned nations over the period of 22 years. In particular, China reached the highest point of imports from Australia in 2012 while India experienced > had ( dùng từ experienced là ko phù hợp về nghĩa) the lowest figure( cái này cx ko đc, ta ko so sánh về con số mà ta so sánh về số lượng).
Looking at the information in -> for more detail, in 1990, the most striking feature is that the proportion of Australian commodities -> Australia's commodities exported to Japan totally dominated that -> thoes (Thay thế cho Australia's commodities) to the US (around 27% and 12%, respectively). In the same year, only a very small percentage of Australian -> Australia's goods were -> was exported to China and India, roughly 1% and 2%, correspondingly. In 2000, while Japan saw a gradual decrease to -> , ( to ở đây ko phù hợp) approximately 19%, the rest of other countries witnessed -> ( chưa bt nên thay bằng từ gi nhưng từ này ko đc) an increase to 12%, 5% and 2%, respectively.
As illustrated -> illustrating, in 2003, a similar proportion of Australian exports was recorded between the US and China, at nearly 10%. After four years, Japan and China had an equal percentage of exports from Australia. In 2012, China showed a sharp growth to 30%, which was at least five times as high as India (approximately 6%).
The given line chart illustrates the figures for Australian exports to Japan, the US ,China and India from 1990 to 2012.
It can clearly that the major export market and the only one experiencing a sharp upward trend.Exports to China and India witnessed an increased Vs. downward trend in those of Japan and US.
Japan the proportion approximately 26% which was followed by a sharp drop in 1995 .The next 17 years another steady drop over, while the US fluctuated between 8% and 10% in the first 15 years but later went down to 5% in 2010. 2 years later, recovered a little bit to 6%.
China starting at a relatively low position of only 3% but later it experienced a steady rise to 5% over the next decade. In 2012, eventually reached an all time high of 28% in 2012.Besides, India nearly zero in the first to 10 years but later it rose gradually to 7% in 2010. But 2 years later,the proportion eventually dropped to 5%.
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The given line chart illustrates the figures for Australian exports to Japan, the US ,China and India from 1990 to 2012. -> ok
It can clearly ??? V chính đâu that the major export market and the only one experiencing a sharp upward trend.Exports to China and India witnessed -> ko phù hợp cho lắm an increased Vs. downward trend in those of Japan and US.
Japan ??? V the proportion approximately 26% which was followed by a sharp drop in 1995 .The next 17 years another steady drop -> ??? over, while the US fluctuated between 8% and 10% in the first 15 years but later went down to 5% in 2010. 2 years later, ??? S recovered a little bit to 6%.
China starting -> started ( cho đúng thì vào đi) at a relatively low position of only 3% but later it experienced -> ko phù hợp a steady rise to 5% over the next decade. In 2012, eventually reached an ??? Noun all time high of 28% in 2012 -> cách diễn đạt chưa được .Besides, India was nearly from zero in the first to ??? ( mấy phần trăm điền vào) in 10 years but later it rose gradually -> ý bn là j ở từ này to 7% in 2010. But 2 years later,the proportion eventually dropped to 5%.
