1. There were some people who didn't believe that chang in dates continued to Celebrate New Year on April first
→ There were some people not believing that the change in dates continued to celebrate New Year on April first.
2. To be staged at Dam Sen Park's Water 111 Music Centre, the show expects an audience of more than 1,300 people who often prefer more modern music
→ The show, expected to be staged at Dam Sen Park's Water 111 Music Centre, anticipates an audience of more than 1,300 people often preferring more modern music.
3. Many of the musicians are Vietnamese students and migrants workers who love the country's history and traditional art
→ Many of the musicians are Vietnamese students and migrant workers loving the country's history and traditional art.
4. People who suffer from Bipoler disorder often lose weight, sleep too little or too much and may consider taking their own lives
→ People suffering from Bipolar disorder often lose weight, sleep too little or too much, and may consider taking their own lives.
5. Affective disorders are a forms of mental sickness that affects the mood, or feelings, of people with this sickness
→ Affective disorders are forms of mental sickness affecting the mood or feelings of people with this sickness.
6. Much of the black market exchanges gold for cash, which is being developed as a kind of business
→ Much of the black market exchanges gold for cash, being developed as a kind of business.
7. Shakespeare's Globe Theatre is a popular topic in theatre and history which is interested by so many people
→ Shakespeare's Globe Theatre is a popular topic in theatre and history, interested by so many people.
8. When the rental agreement on the original location ended, one of actors bought a theatre which was located in another part of town
→ When the rental agreement on the original location ended, one of the actors bought a theatre located in another part of town.
9. The currency of Vietnam is doing which is abbreviated or VND following the amount
→ The currency of Vietnam, abbreviated as "Đ" or "VND," is doing following the amount.
10. Vietcombank, which has been considered as one of the best organized for its activity, is another name for the state - owned Bank of Foreign Trade of Vietnam
→ Vietcombank, considered one of the best organized for its activity, is another name for the state-owned Bank of Foreign Trade of Vietnam
