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-Of the 4 seasons, autumn is my favorite season. Because in the fall the weather becomes cool and pleasant. Moreover, fall is back to school season, and I'm very excited about going back to school.

-I like cool and dry weather. Because such weather gives me a very pleasant feeling and I can go out to take pictures with my friends.

-I like watching TV with my family because the atmosphere is so warm

-My hometown is Hanoi. I like the food and people in my hometown the most. -My hometown is famous for its food, hospitality and the bustle of the capital.

-On weekends, I often go out to do sports and watch movies with my family. In addition, I also take time for myself such as reading books, listening to music and completing some exercises.

-I usually spend time with my family on the weekend, then my family and I can watch TV or go on a trip.