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Hello everyone. Last summer, i and my family went to the zoo. It was a very fun and meaningful trip. From my house to the zoo it tales 30 minutes. In the morning after breakfast is around 8 o'clock. After arriving, we entered the zoo gate, we quickly headed towards the cage. The first cage is the monkeys cage, we look very smart. Next, we saw elephants. Very funy and cute elephants. When i was there, They picked bananas. After saw elephants, we saw bird, the birds sang very beautifully. Then, my family saw peacocks, they moved beautifull. My visited to the zoo had in increased my knowledge of animals. Ended the trip we had ate at a restaurant together.
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