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In a real writing. The writing has to be a page and half long. So I do not think that yours is a page. Yours maybe a half a page. Also you can't use the word they. Who is they? Be more specific. Also list why you want this to be my dream house. Kinda like this:
As of today people has shelter. The shelter help protected by the storm. The storm can cause serious damage to the shelter. There are different kinds of shelter. They are houses, building, and other places that can be found. I want this to be my dream house because its nice, big, and a lot of space.
Then you have to describe nice, big and a lot of space in each paragraph. Also you can't use the word you at all.
Also if you want to you can go to you can buy an access code on there to practice for yourself you want. See yah.
I also have some notes from my previous class too. I can scan them and post them on the site and you can save it and print out as your guide.
I'm not really an expert. I just know the basics. Can someone fill me in? Am I writing on the writing an essay. Well let me know. Thanks.
My dream home would be on the ocean, well not on the ocean but beside it with a white sandy beach. The house would be an A frame backed against a hill. The upper floor would be a half floor master bedroom with a kingsize water bed and ensuite with a hot tub and sauna. The front wall would be glass with a stairway coming up to the bedroom. On cloudy nights you could watch the floresents in the waves coming into the beach while you went to sleep. Other nights you could counting the stars in the western sky.
On the main floor would be the kitchen-dining room combination, with all the newest appliances and an island in the middle of the kitchen with the stove top and hanging pots and pans over it. The sink would be under one of the windows. Under the other window would be the nook for family meals. Between the kitchen windows, which look out to the field where the horses would be enjoying the warm weather are the cupboards. The dining room would have a six chair pine table set and hutch china cabnet. There will also be a three piece bathroom off the kitchen. The living room is in the front with the big front window. The fireplace is on the side wall with small long windows overlooking the driveway to the road a half mile away. The three piece sectional is perfectly positioned to watch the sunset into the western sea. The basement has the laundry room at the back with sewing machine for mending before folding and taking clothes upstairs. Half of the front of the basement is a guest bedroom with ensuite and small fridge and two element stove. The computer room is also at the front of the basement. Both have views of the beach and sea. Opposite the laundry room is my husband's workshop. I don't know what he has in there as it is his domain. In the garage at the side of the house is our wine colored 94 Toyota Crasada and my husband's hog. We often ride the bike along the beach on warm evenings to visit friends
My dream house is a large villa. It is near the coast, surrounded by rows of coconut trees and the blue sea. There are sixteen rooms in my house and half of them for relaxation and entertainment. It has a big garage so that I can store my super cars there. My house has wind power or solar energy. I use hi-tech and automatic machines such as a smart clock, modern fridge, automatic dishwasher and washing machine. They can be controlled by voice and help me tell the time, forecast weather, preserve food and wash dishes and clothes. There is a super smart TV in my house. I might surf the internet, watch my favourite TV programmes from space or contact friends on other planets by this fantastic TV. I might also join online classes on TV and not have to go to school.
It will be a great joy or happiness for everyone if we can own a house designed by ourselves. A house in my dream is not necessarily a large house, as long as it fits my style and character. A house located on the outskirts of town will be very suitable for me to enjoy a serene life. It will be a two- storey house facing west-south side. Moreover, my house can not be lack of a large garden surrounded by thousands of different colors of flowers and fruits. I like it the most when having a breakfast or enjoying night views in my own garden. Simplicity is beauty, this explains why I would prefer an airy space rather than a well- equipped house. However, the house should have basic necessities in the kitchen and bathroom to serve all my demands in daily life. In addition, I will use bright color tones for the whole house, especially my bedroom to make it more spacious. My bedroom will be more perfect and ideal if it has a balcony where i could smell the fragrance from the garden as well as enjoy the sound of the birds in the morning. Besides, I also have an intention of having a small garage and storage. In conclusion, nothing but a suitable house for my lifestyles will fulfill my future dream.
my dream house will be a large, veryvery large palace with a big garden outside. In a garden, they will a lot of flowers and a fountain too! It has a dog house with a very strong dog, who will protect my house from the thrillers. Then inside, they will a lot of colourful lights and a big chanderliers in the middle.The house will need more furniture, modern machinery or just the laughing voice of the people you love is enough? But for me, family and friends are probably the most important, as you will be living with your beloved friends, and that's enough for me to have a happy one.
